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[tommers2008]

please rate/comment tell me where can improve and point out errors thanks

 

Lore -Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1 pay 500 Life Points and discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card from your Deck. Activate the following effect based on the type of card:

-Monster Card: Destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.

-Spell Card: Destroy 1 face-up Spell Card your opponent controls.

-Trap Card: Destroy 1 face-up Trap Card your opponent controls.

[Tacobill123]

Nice, if it was a real card, I use it. 10/10

[tommers2008]

thanks a lot.... ^_^

[Tacobill123]

i have a killer Zombie deck, its my main deck, it was actually my first deck, i bought the zombie structer deck... the first one. lol

[Chevalier]

Nice' date=' if it was a real card, I use it. 10/10

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If I had an OPd card I would use it too. The fact that you keep the card you drew is unfair enough. It's a Dasher/Storm. Pic is pretty bad. Slight OCG/Grammar Error(s)

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Fix:

 

Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1 pay 800 Life Points to draw 1 card from your Deck. Activate the following effect based on the type of card:

-Monster Card: Special Summon the monster to the field.

-Spell Card: Destroy all face-up Spell Cards your opponent controls.

-Trap Card: Destroy all face-up Trap Cards your opponent controls.

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Maybe add to the effect: "If you use this effect, skip your next Draw Phase"

 

Something like that^^

 

8/10

[tommers2008]

Chevalier.. how is the card op'd in your opinion please explain if you say so..??

what is so bad about pic..??

and next time if you could point out my mistakes i would appreciate that but thanks for your comment

 

demented.. thanks again for pointing me in the right direction and helping improve my ocg

and for the rating..

now for the skip next draw phase i dunno because 800points each turn doesn't seem like much but cud become a threat.. and the card isn't all that strong its only 2400 for 8*...but i see your point it is bit on op'd side but i will wait a bit to change it

 

and again thanks for comments/rates etc

[Chevalier]

The pic is bad because it's LQ and doens't look it would ever be on a real YGO card. It's broken because it's summonable by Pyramid Turtle and is a +1 for you and a possible -5 for your opponent.

[Tacobill123]

well instead of skipping your draw phase, you should make it where if you use the effect, Withered Golem cannot declare an attack the turn you use it... somethin like that.

[tommers2008]

ive edited the card please comment/rate etc

[tommers2008]

bump