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It's not like I'm Jappio or Realen (in the sense that I can't generally rate Splices, not that I can't keep up with them when it comes to splicing) but I think this one is too easy for them to have to handle.

 

1st Splice-I can tell you used Executor's legs, but the top is undistinguishable with itself. You had yet to recolor the borders on the legs, and the top has virtually no borders at all. Plus, the color scheme is painfull to look at. I give this one a 2/10

 

Kecleon-Geodude Splice-First of all, the head just cuts off, and the arms are detatched.Also, there is no shading on the arms and you did not recolor the borders at all. I give this one a 1/10

 

Geodude-Kecleon-...Pikachu? Splice-Chunks of the head are missing. And you have almost non-existant borders on the neck up! And the body had no redone borders at all! I give this one a 2/10

 

Pikachu Recolor?(I honestly have no idea what you were trying to accomplish here)-No shading, half the borders are misssing, and the other half is still un recolored. I give this a 1/10

 

Overall-6/40

 

I suggest looking at the first post of the Pokemon Splice Splicer's Club in the Clubs/Organizations forum. It will tell you who to ask about splicing tips. Or look up a tutorial on Google or Youtube. Just learn what you are doing before you post it, please.

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1). The head is horrible. First, you have the wrong colors all around its face. There are no outer borders, which = fepic ale. You have no torso, another reason why it sux.

 

2). No torso. If you want it to be like geodude, then give the bottom a border. The arms are poorly attached and have no shading. You have no sense of shading, or coloring for that matter. It looks like you put the head on last - don't do that.

 

3). It looks like you used the scraps of 2. You deleted all the shading and some borders. You still have the s****y random colors as inner borders.

 

4). You have the ears facing the wrong way and the right one is too small. No shading is present and you have the crap borders. Missing borders on the feet.

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Rubbish Bordering.

Bad Fusing.

Some Bad Shading.

 

Jappio or Raelin will be over soon' date=' to destroy your attempts. Seriously, please read a tutorial first...

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It's not like I'm Jappio or Realen (in the sense that I can't generally rate Splices' date=' not that I can't keep up with them when it comes to splicing) but I think this one is too easy for them to have to handle.

 

1st Splice-I can tell you used Executor's legs, but the top is undistinguishable with itself. You had yet to recolor the borders on the legs, and the top has virtually no borders at all. Plus, the color scheme is painfull to look at. I give this one a 2/10

 

Kecleon-Geodude Splice-First of all, the head just cuts off, and the arms are detatched.Also, there is no shading on the arms and you did not recolor the borders at all. I give this one a 1/10

 

Geodude-Kecleon-...Pikachu? Splice-Chunks of the head are missing. And you have almost non-existant borders on the neck up! And the body had no redone borders at all! I give this one a 2/10

 

Pikachu Recolor?(I honestly have no idea what you were trying to accomplish here)-No shading, half the borders are misssing, and the other half is still un recolored. I give this a 1/10

 

Overall-6/40

 

I suggest looking at the first post of the [i']Pokemon Splice Splicer's Club[/i] in the Clubs/Organizations forum. It will tell you who to ask about splicing tips. Or look up a tutorial on Google or Youtube. Just learn what you are doing before you post it, please.

 

Please guys, try to spell my name right.

 

"Watch out, Roulem will come to destroy you."

 

Lol. I crack myself up...

 

Anyways, to business.

 

Your recoloring is awful, you have no shading, it looks very fake.

Amazingly, you managed to either have multi-colored borders or no borders at all. You have to recolor the borders. It's very important.

 

Overall, very, very, very bad. Look at some tutorials before posting your splices. I don't think I should go into detail.

 

Watch this:

 

It's 40 minutes long, but worth watching.

 

-Raelen

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Alright, I'm not Jappio or Raelen, so I'm not going to waste my time writing a long post, telling you what to correct.

1. First, these sprites are never going to look good. You ruined them.

2. The colors-the ones that are actually correct-are wrong. For example, the Geodude arms are brighter than the Kecleon head. no

3. You killed some shading. All the colors are the same now. Don't do that.

4. You murdered some all of the borders. In the borders you kept, are recolored completely wrong (the red on that Pikachu thing.

5. There all spliced badly, the heads don't look connected.

 

I hate to re-say what's been said, so I'll stop there.

Watch Jappio's tut

Splice for 49 years

then post what you made, maybe they might be good.

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Alright' date=' I'm not Jappio or [b']Raelen[/b], so I'm not going to waste my time writing a long post, telling you what to correct.

1. First, these sprites are never going to look good. You ruined them.

2. The colors-the ones that are actually correct-are wrong. For example, the Geodude arms are brighter than the Kecleon head. no

3. You killed some shading. All the colors are the same now. Don't do that.

4. You murdered some all of the borders. In the borders you kept, are recolored completely wrong (the red on that Pikachu thing.

5. There all spliced badly, the heads don't look connected.

 

I hate to re-say what's been said, so I'll stop there.

Watch Jappio's tut

Splice for 49 years

then post what you made, maybe they might be good.

 

Thank you.

 

By the way, you seem to include death into your suggestions.

"You killed some shading."

"You murdered all of the borders."

 

I just find it kind of funny.

 

Take his advice.

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ok i would like to add something if i may i amy not be a good splicer im a novice at best but ill give you a tip no make that two ok three then

1.save as png

2.brush around the edges of you page to stop all leftover pixels

3.remember that if you dont the boosh is loose and will come at you like a shark with knees

 

They are PNG.

Not everyone has the brush tool, I have one of the earliest versions of paint.

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