Persona 3 & Arcana Deck

[Kryuzei]

This is my first time here. . . The problem is, I don't get the picture of the persona. So. . SOme of them are not the one that I meant to be.

Btw, here's a 3 cards. Feedback will be appreciated.

 

[Soul Immortal]

Um I don't know much about the origins of these cards, and I can't read much of the effects without hurting my eyes but the Images like quite good, and with a little help you will become a good card maker with no hassles at all! So in saying that, I would like to greet you with a smile :D and a big[align=center]

 

WELCOME TO YCMF. FROM SIX[/align]

[Kryuzei]

Ahahaha ^^; Thank you. I'm sorry for the text. . Maybe next time I create a card, I should click the save button rather than save image as ^^;

Are there something in my cards that are unbalance ? 0.o; I cannot make new cards for a while, since I'm going to hunt some pictures for this. .

Btw, some errata for Orpheus.

Arcana Effect is for a combo later on.

[Soul Immortal]

Not at the moment there isn't. Thats excluding OCG which everyone that is new to card making or YCMF has problems with.

[Kryuzei]

Create a new one. Feedback is needed. Btw, the picture is Kallen Stadtfeld from Code Geass

[Soul Immortal]

Okay I don't think there is anything that needs improving in the way of effects or card images but maybe some lessons in grammar, and OCG... I will elaborate soon...

 

BTW are you male or female? I know it's not a big deal but just people like to know...

[Kryuzei]

and OCG... I will elaborate soon...

I really need that. Especially because I haven't played Yu Gi Oh for a while.

 

BTW are you male or female? I know it's not a big deal but just people like to know...

I want to keep it a secret if you don't mind ^^;

[Soul Immortal]

Yes of course. LOL i tend to know what you are going to say already. Had you wanted people to know then you would've put it in your profile. Sorry bout that. Anyways I can help you somewhat with OCG...

 

IF you write the effects up then that would be a great help

[Kryuzei]

Ah, Ok. .

Btw, there are some errata in my cards.

Messiah, The Great Seal

This card can only be activated under the current condition :

1. The LP differnce between you and your opponent are more than 7000

2. OR by the effect Persona - The World's card is activated and on the field. Whenever the opponent wants to attack with a monster with a level of 8-12, they have to destroy one monster (Except tokens) with the highest level of their field and they end their battle phase afterwards. After the effect, the opponent cannot attack nor summon a monster in their next turn. The player who owns this card cannot be targetted with a card that attacks Player's LP directly. This card cannot be destroyed by Spell, Trap or Effect.

 

P.Evoker

This card can only be activated when the opponent attacks the player directly.

Pay 1000 LP, you can activate of these effects :

1. Summon 2 monster cards from your hands with a persona in its name.

2. Draw 2 cards from your decks with a persona in its name.

 

Persona - Velvet Room

Once in a turn, both player can returned one monster card with a persona on its name on the field to the owner's hands. Afterwards, you can Summon/Set one card from your hands to the field (The field of the owner's monster that had been returned) with a persona on its name and with the same level or below of the returned monster (Ignoring the conditions).

If you don't have any monster with 'Persona' on its name in your hands, you cannot activate this effect.

As long as this card remain on the field, fusion monsters with 'Persona' on its name could be done without any fusion spell cards.

Errata : "This is considered as 'Arcana' effect card"

 

Persona - Orpheus

Whenever this card is destroyed in battle, return this card to your deck. If this card destroys a monster, Special Summon one Magician Arcana Type monster card from your hands to your side of the field with the same level or below of the destroyed monster.

This effect is considered as 'Arcana' Effect.

 

Melancholy of Persona

You can activate this card when a monster tried to attack a monster with 'Persona' on its name. Select one Trap Card on the field. If it's face-down, flip it face-up. If it's not a Trap Card, destroy this card and the owner of this card lose 500 LP. Remove that trap card from play. After 2 turns, you can send that card to your hands.

[Soul Immortal]

Melancholy of Persona

You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack against a monster with "Persona" in its name. Select 1 Trap Card on the field. If the selected card is face-down, then flip it face-up. If the selected card is not a Trap Card, then destroy this card, and inflict 500 damage to your Life Points. If the selected card is a Trap Card, then remove the Trap Card from play.

 

Sorry I'll finish the rest later. I'm tired and need to rest. :) Was good to meet you too.

[Tefached]

just edit the first post instead of posting new cards and everything

[Alordzynix]

^^

You can do that if you aren't the last poster or if your last post was a while ago. It makes people look back at your thread

[Kryuzei]

just edit the first post instead of posting new cards and everything

Don't worry, I'll update and edit it when I got more cards.

Melancholy of Persona

You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack against a monster with "Persona" in its name. Select 1 Trap Card on the field. If the selected card is face-down, then flip it face-up. If the selected card is not a Trap Card, then destroy this card, and inflict 500 damage to your Life Points. If the selected card is a Trap Card, then remove the Trap Card from play.

 

Sorry I'll finish the rest later. I'm tired and need to rest. Smile Was good to meet you too.

Ah, okay. I'll edit it next time after you've finished check it ^^

 

New cards, a little original. . .

Effect :

You can activate one of these following effects :

1. Search your deck for a spell card and add it to your hands and show it to your opponent. You cannot activate that spell in this turn. If you don't activate the spell in your next turn, remove that card from play and you lose 500LP .

2. Tribute one monster on your side of the field. Search your deck for a spell card and show it to your opponent, then add it to your hands

[Soul Immortal]

I've been trying to workout how to write out the card effects without losing too much of the card effect but it's just to long, and would be better if you just shortened down the card effects, and then made a new card with the missing effect on it. I know it is more time consuming but thats just how I feel. Or you can ignore my suggestion, and leave the cards as is. Either way it's fine by me.

[Kryuzei]

I've been trying to workout how to write out the card effects without losing too much of the card effect but it's just to long, and would be better if you just shortened down the card effects, and then made a new card with the missing effect on it. I know it is more time consuming but thats just how I feel. Or you can ignore my suggestion, and leave the cards as is. Either way it's fine by me.

Ok, but which card that you had a hard time on? If it's all . . Well .. >_>; I need to find more graphics.

[Soul Immortal]

Velvet Room, and the great seal are the problem cards... :S

[Kryuzei]

Hm. . Maybe something like this would be better. .

Messiah :

This card can only be activated with "Persona - The World' effect.

Whenever the opponent tried to attack with a monster by level 8-12, they have to destroy one monster with the highest level of their field and end their battle phase. They cannot attack nor summon in their next turn. This card cannot be destroyed by spell, Trap, or effect.

 

And Velvet :

Once in a turn, both player can returned one monster card that includes 'Persona' in its name on the field to the owner's hands. Afterwards, you can summon/set one monster card from your hands to the Field(The field of the owner's monster that had been returned) that includes 'Persona' in its name with the same level or below of the returned monster (Ignoring the conditions).

Is this one okay?

[Soul Immortal]

Try this:

 

This card can only be activated by the effect of "Persona - The World". Whenever your opponent declares an attack with a Level 8 or higher monster, they have to destroy the monster with the highest level that he/she controls. They cannot attack nor summon during their next turn. This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Spell, and Trap Cards.

 

Once per turn, both players can return 1 monster that they control that has "Persona" in it's Card Name to their hand, and Normal Summon or Set 1 monster from their hand to the field that has "Persona" in it's Card Name with level equal or lower than the monster they returned to their hand.

[Kryuzei]

Ah, okay. . I'll edit it now >.<

Thx a lot.

[Soul Immortal]

Would be good to know what "Persona - World" does. Then I could've completed the last card. May it will need to say "This card can only be activated when you have "Persona - World" on the field." instead I how I wrote it out but I never would know unless I seen the other card. I hope you know what I'm trying to say. Just don't want you going off to edit your card, and when you post it up it is the wrong wording because of it...

[Kryuzei]

I want to make Persona - World, but I can't find the graphic. It's a monster card. And . . No, you could say that it can be activated under the effect ^^; Its just the way I want.

Btw, you forgot "Or Effect" 0.o;

Here is the edited card, I'll put it up in the first post. .Right? 0.o;

 

[Soul Immortal]

LOL I didn't add "Or Effect" because I didn't know what that refered to. If it just means the effects of Spell, and Trap Cards then it didn't have to be said again. If it meant Monster Card effects aswel then you might as well have said it cannot be destroyed.

[Kryuzei]

0.o;

So that's what I should write. . So If I wrote it like that (Cannot be destroyed), then it means that it cannot be destroyed by something like. .Erm. . Demise?

[Soul Immortal]

yup lol it means no card can destroy it. Usually it has a built in self destruction mechanism but in this case it's up to you.

[Kryuzei]

has a built in self destruction mechanism

Eh. . Can you give me an example?