Lilrow Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 Apart from a tiny bit of grammatical error, very good. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 Turtle is a pretty cool, although it's effect is risky to use 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 no it was a mistake this is wat i meant to say 150/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 was that 100 a type or just over exaggeration? :P Anyways' date=' here's a new(and risky to play) card. [img']http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4882/turtleriderjh2.png[/img] Well, to be honest, that one is a bit less. First, remove every Magic and Trap from WHERE? The field? And when does the effect occur?Whenever you want it? Or once per turn? Also, it's isn't that overpwered so you can add ATK and DEf if you want. Still, it's great work ;) EDIT: Also, each time I look on your signature, I see a different banner? -.-Couldn't you choose? :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark-Leon Posted September 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 from play as in the out of play zone.and yes, once per turn. but why would you do it a second time if he's already lost most of his trap/magic cards and u get an increased chance of losing LP? (oh and the monster would probably be destroyed on the opponent's turn cause it has 0 atk/def points) It's a random sig changer i got ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 It's a random sig changer i got ;) Get it :lol: But I mean, remove from play from where, From the field. Oh, and his effect is not optional >_>.... So, the ultimately correct grammar using would be: Once per turn, during your main Phase, you can toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, remove from play all Spell and Trap Cards on the field. If you call it wrong, inflict 2000 Points of Damage to your Life Points. But don't mind for all what I say and just keep up your work;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark-Leon Posted September 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 Whoops... yeah, now i look at it >.< Forgot to say where i should remove it from and such. FIXING TIME! :P EDIT: Fixed and going to put them on the first page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest King of Games Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 I'd say that first card would better if the effect was for every LIGHT Fairy-type monster, not just either ex: LIGHT Warraior, Dark fairy or something like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 YAY!!! Your random banner shows Prince of Persia! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted September 10, 2007 Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 OCG7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark-Leon Posted September 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 what's OCG? :O anyways, here's a new one, tho i don't really like this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted September 11, 2007 Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 OCG= Official Card Grammar, and the 7 was the rating I gave your last card. At that time I never had my keyboard plugged in so I had to copy, and paste LOL goes to show how addicted I am to this site. :) I got a card you can do similar to the last card you posted. Flip all face-down monsters on the field into face-up attack position. The number of monsters flipped face-up by this cards effect is the amount of turns your opponent cannot declare an attack... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted September 11, 2007 Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 OCG is Official Card Grammar, a term which some members (like me) use. I believe there is some kind of "Official Grammar" so like Konami doesn't write: "When this card is flipped from face-down to face-up, select 1 monster Return thast monster to the owner's hand".No. Konami writes:"When this monster is Flip Summoned, return the monster on the field to it's owner's hand"or"FLIP: Return 1 monster on the field to it's owner's hand" See the difference? Oh, and excellent idea for a card, but what happens if you activate it in your opponent's End Phase? >_> PAIN XD And if you want it OCG-like, then write "Flip" in place of "turn", "Position" in place of "mode".Also, OCG is also low when you don't write necesarry capital letters. Like write dark and not DARK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark-Leon Posted September 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 heh, I'll work on that when i get home from school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 cool cant wait to se more of your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal_Reese Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 All of them are awesome! 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzairstheking Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 thoses are great for a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark-Leon Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 WHO MISSED ME? :P I made a new card, I don't really like it tho and still don't have a name for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 This Is A Old Thread But 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark-Leon Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 This Is A Old Thread But 7/10 It doesn't really matter right? Making a new topic would be annoying anyways ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Hey, Dark-Leon. I remember you. Pretty balanced effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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