-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Hello this is the fan fic I've been working so hard since long time ago. Hope you like it. Ok then about some things you'll see in this story. 1- Many of the cards in this fanfic, are made by me...this will be solved by the writing of each card's effect, next to the first time it is named, I'll try to show all the stats and everything to make it more Understandable. 2-This fanfic have many characters, so please give me some time later to have an introductory space for them. 3-This is a detail....each sentence that have this:-sentence- is something the character says in a low voice as this:*sentence*will be used when the character thinks something or have a fast reaction like a Laugh, blush or something. 4-This first chapter will be the longest chapter since it will work as a special Episode. Nothing more by now just enjoy. Ryu looks at the letter Otogo Starts to shake in front of his face. Ryu gets mad. Ryu: Oh for Pete’s sake give me the damned letter now!!! Otogo: Ok but, you got to do all your house jobs before you can read it. Ryu: You must be kidding me right? Otogo looks at Ryu with an evil Smiling face….. Otogo: I’m pretty sure I’m being serious…. Ryu falls on his back….then stands up very mad Scene cuts…and then we see Ryu in his room at night, he is very dirty because of the jobs made that day and he is in his chair reading his mother’s letter: Dear Ryu: I know this have been hard days for you, I hope you can understand that what I’m doing is best for you and meanwhile I can fulfill my dreams too. I want you to become a strong man, so never give up in what you want to do. I got a surprise for you. I’ll send you a deck specially made for you. I want you to take this as a sign of my love for you. Also you will need it now. Hope I can see you soon. Anko Ryusaki Ryu: A deck? Wait a minute there is not deck here! Otogo: This is because I got it... Otogo appears from behind Ryu scaring him… Ryu: OMG! Why do you appear like this! You almost kill me! Otogo: Oh sorry, here you have your deck; it looks pretty solid I must say Ryu: Ugh so you took it to see it first ah? Ok I’ll take a look at it later. By the way Senpai-san I got a question. Why my mom says I’m going to need this deck. Otogo starts walking through the door as he says. Otogo: Oh Yes I almost forgot to tell you, you start school tomorrow. Ryu doesn’t seem to react to this Ryu: Oh so that was why…*Laugh*…Wait a minute…WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT??? Summary – Second period: Is a brand new day, but Ryu doesn’t seems very happy as he walks to the school. A few minute later he sees the school appears, it is a huge building and Ryu can’t take his eyes of it, then he stumbles over a girl…they fall and Ryu is now over her. Ryu:*Uh...What happened?* I’m sorry…are…you Ok? Asuka: *Blushed* Uh oh yes...Can you…move out …please? Then Ryu realizes that he is still over the girl. Ryu: Oh really, excuse me*Blushed*…am, Hi my name is Ryuichi, you can call me Ryu if you still want to talk me. Asuka: Oh *smile*yeah yeah don’t worry about that it was an accident, my name is Asuka. So are you going to the Academy? Ryu looks at the Academy once more and Answer Ryu: Yes unfortunately… Asuka: Then you must a good duelist, if you want to be accepted. Ryu: Why? Asuka: Because you have to make an entry exam didn’t know about it? Ryu:*Shocked* What???No way! Senpai Never told me about that. After that they got into the academy and separate to go and find their respective form and duel opponent. Ryu: Well the exam is a duel, so it can’t be that hard. Let see I got to find the arena 101. Oh Asuka-San is there, I’ll ask her. Ryu walk to Asuka. Ryu: Asuka-San!!! Hi, do you know where arena 101 is? Asuka: We are in that arena right Now. And that means we are going to duel now. I’m not happy now. Perhaps I just got to quit it. Ryu: Are you serious? Don’t do that, I want to duel you believe me you’ll do it fine…*Smile* At least make it for fun…that way you can take all the pressure out….XD Asuka looks at Ryu’s Smiling face, and decided to duel Ryu and Asuka: Ok, Let’s Duel!!! Professor: Now officially you start your duel, Remember each of your starts with 4000 LP the first to reach 0 loses, the loser of this match can have a consolation duel, but if you fail again you’re out, ready let’s get your game on! These words scared Asuka even more, and she looks his hand shaking and don’t know how to play. Asuka:*Oh no what do I do Now, Ryu looks so confident, and I am so scared* ugh I Normal Summon “Angel Lamb” in Attack Position [Angel Lamb: Level 2/LIGHT/Fairy-Effect/ATK 500/DEF 500; Effect: When this card is Normal or Flip Summoned, increase your Life Points by 500 for each LIGHT monster you control]. A light shines from the floor and a winged Lamb appears next to Asuka. Asuka: Now I activate my monster’s effect, when I summon it I can increase my Life Points by 500 for each LIGHT monster I control, and since I control my “Angel Lamb” I gain 500 LP(Asuka’s LP:4000+500=4500). I end my turn. Ryu: Ok I draw.*something is not right with that girl, why did she put that monster in attack position if she wasn’t going to defend it* I Normal Summon ” Head Dragon – Red Komouri” in attack Position [Head Dragon – Red Komouri: Level 4/FIRE/Dragon-Effect/ATK 1500/DEF1300; Effect: As long as you control 2 or more monsters, when this card attacks your opponent’s Life Points directly you can inflict 500 Damage to your opponent’s Life Points for each other monster you control.] Attack her “Angel Lamb”, Fire Breath! Ryu’s Dragon launches a hot breath from his mouth and vaporizes”Angel Lamb”. (Asuka’s LP: 4500+500-1500=3500). Asuka is immobilized; she lost the strength to fight. Asuka: Ryu-Chan I can’t go on, I always was bad at this please let me quit it. Ryu: No! Do not do that, remember what I said, forget this is a test, enjoy the duel, I won’t let you quit until you win this. Asuka looks at Ryu, he eyes show confidence now. Asuka: Alright, I’ll try… I draw now - Let’s see – Yes I draw what I needed! I Normal Summon “Magical Angel” in attack position[Magical Angel: Level 3/LIGHT/Fairy-Effect/ATK 1400/DEF 400; Effect: When this card is Normal or Flip Summoned Special Summon a Level 4 or lower Fairy-Type monster from your hand, increase this card’s ATK by 500 as long as you control a monster Special Summoned by this card’s effect.]. An Angel with butterfly wings jumps into the field. Then it starts to cast a spell that produces another light near Asuka. Asuka: This is the effect of my “Magical Angel” When I summon this monster; I’m able to Special Summon a Level 4 or Lower Fairy monster. And I choose this, “Miracle Angel” in attack position[Miracle Angel: Level 3/LIGHT/Fairy-Effect/ATK 800/DEF 1200; Effect: When this card is Normal Or Special Summoned you can add an Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand, you cannot equip that card this turn unless you equip it to a Fairy-Type monster.] Asuka shows the monster in his hand and put it in his duel disk. After she explains its effect she looks a card in his deck and shows it. Asuka: This is “Miracle Angel”, when I summon it I can add An Equip Spell Card from my Deck to my hand, and I choose this: “Angel’s Wings” [Angel’s Wings: Equip Spell card- Equip it only to a LIGHT monster. Increase equipped monster’s attack by 500. When this card is destroyed by a card’s effect, draw a card.]. Then I activate my “Angel’s Wings” and equip it to “Magical Angel” -Magical Angel’s ATK: 1400+500+500=2400-. It is time for my battle phase. “Magical Angel” goes for Ryu’s “Red Komouri”. Attack, Magic Powder!!! Angel’s wings spread a purple power that causes pain to Ryu’s Dragon and its breaks in many pieces. Ryu’s LP goes down to 3100(Ryu’s LP: 4000+1500-2400=3100). Asuka: Then I attack you with “Miracle Angel”, Light Strike!!! After that I end my turn. “Miracle Angel” hits Ryu with is shining rod (Ryu’s LP: 3100-800=2300) Ryu: Excellent, That’s what I as waiting, good turn now I got to play it. I draw! Normal Summon my “Baby Scout Dragon” in attack position [baby Scout Dragon: Level 2/LIGHT/Dragon-Effect/ATK 800/DEF 500; Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned look at the 3 top cards from your deck and put them back in any order.], now I activate my Spell Card “Scout’s Medals” [scout’s Medals: Quick Play Spell Card- Release 1”Baby Scout Dragon” you control to Special Summon 1 “Dragon M Scout” from your hand or Deck.]. This card let me Special Summon “Dragon M Scout”!!![Dragon M Scout: Level 5/LIGHT/Dragon-Effect/ATK 2000/DEF 1300; Effect: Active when you opponent controls 2 or more monsters, when this card attacks you can select 1 Spell or Trap Card you opponent controls and destroy it.]. And its effect will let me destroy you equip when my monster attacks, so “Dragon M Scout” Go for her Wind Shooter!!! Ryu’s monster destroys “Miracle Angel” and with a whirlwind destroys “Angel’s wings” too. (Asuka’s LP:3500+800-2000=2300). Asuka:*No, not again, I can’t keep failing I got to, I got to *Never give up!!! Remember, when “Angel’s Wings” is destroyed because of an effect I can draw a card. Ryu looks at Asuka’s face and realizes that she is more focused in the duel than he thought but at the same time she can’t be more frightened. Ryu: I set a face-down card, and end my turn. Asuka: My turn*Please, please let draw that Card.*I draw! *It’s here*I got it! Ryu looks at Asuka quietly… Asuka: I release my “Magical Angel”, to Advance Summon, “Angel’s General - Isis” [Angel’s General – Isis: Level 6/LIGHT/Fairy-Effect/ATK 2400/DEF 1200; Effect: When this card is Advanced Summoned by releasing a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster, destroy 1 face-up monster you opponent controls, then you can Special Summon a Level 2 or Lower Fairy-type Monster from your Graveyard.], it is time for my monster’s effect I will Destroy you Dragon Ryu looks at his face-down card “Dragon’s Escape” [Dragon’s Escape: Counter Trap Card –Negate the activation an effect of a 1 Spell, Trap or Monster’s effect that designate a Dragon-Type monster you control as its only target ].But he decided that he will not use it. His dragon is then destroyed and “Angel Lamb” appears next to Asuka. Asuka: First of all now that I destroyed your monster I can Special Summon “Angel Lamb” from my Graveyard. Then I attack you directly with “Angel’s General - Isis”, Shining Blast!!! Asuka’s monster attacks Ryu and its LP deplete to 0(Ryu’s LP: 2300-2400=0) Professor: And the winner is Kunewacha Asuka-san, you are officially approved, congratulations, now you can go and pick-up all your academy’s materials. Ryusaki Ryuichi you must go to arena 65 for your consolation match. Asuka: Yeah I win!!! After that Ryu walks to his consolation match, but Asuka stops him. Asuka: Ryu-kun, that was a good duel I have more confidence now but, I’ve got to know what that last card was, and why you didn’t use it. Ryu: Well, I couldn’t it was a bad card, No I got to win a duel you know, but I’m pretty sure that it will be good to see you more, wish me luck Asukan-san. Ryu gives Asuka a high 5 and then goes to the arena. Asuka stands watching as Ryu is leaving and smiles. Ryu:*Well that was close, now I got to win this, I don’t want to admit it yet but I think this year would be funny after all* To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation Asuka: Ryu-kun is good to see you really are in school this year. Iwao: So Asuka-chan who’s your new friend we have here. Ryu: I want to know the same thing of you, next on Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation. “Machination!, Storm Cloud Dragon vs. Cyber Vorse Raider”, I’ll never give up! [spoiler=Card of this episode]Asuka's Card http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/4051/135308cd2.jpg ' alt='135308cd2.jpg '> [Angel’s General – Isis] Star/Atk/Def| 6/2400/1200 Type/Family | LIGHT/Fairy/Effect Effect | When this card is Advanced Summoned by releasing a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster, destroy 1 face-up monster you opponent controls, then you can Special Summon a Level 2 or Lower Fairy-type Monster from your Graveyard. [spoiler=[b]Episode 2[/b]]Ryu: Ok, Now it’s my turn. Student: It will be your last turn, I got this already finished. Ryu is in his consolation game against another student, Ryu’s LP are only 800, meanwhile his opponent’s are 1700, Ryu has no monsters in his side of the field and his opponent has “Mad Dog of Darkness” in face-up attack Position. (ATK 1900) Ryu: We’ll see, now I draw! Seems like I draw what I was hoping. Student: And what could it be. Ryu: This, I normal Summon “Baby Scout Dragon” (ATK 800) in face-up Attack Position! Ryu’s opponent sees a little dragon appear next to Ryu, and then he starts to laugh. Student: No way. That’s your awesome card? It must be a joke. Ryu: Then you’ll see, I activate “Scout’s Medals”, releasing my Monster I Special Summon, “Dragon M Scout” (ATK 2000), I finally equip it with this Spell Card, “Dragon’s Golden Suit” [Dragon’s Golden Suit: Equip Spell Card - Increase Equipped Monster’s ATK by 800. When equipped monster destroys a monster by Battle, inflict Damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of the equipped monster. At the end of a turn you active this card destroy it.]. This card increases my monster ATK to 2800. Now go for it attacks his “Mad Dog of Darkness”, Wind Shooter!!! Ryu’s monster equipped with a shining dragon shaped suit, attacks the dog, and destroys it, Ryu’s opponent’s LP goes down to 800 (1700+1900-2800) Ryu: And now to finish things, the effect of my Equip Spell will make you 1000 damage so I win. Student: No way!!!!!!!! Ryu: Yes! Now I’m in! Proffesor: And the winner is Ryusaki Ryuichi, congratulations, you made in your sencond chance so welcome to the academy. Ryu starts to run outside he want to tell Asuka that they would be partners in the academy now. Turn 2: Machination, Storm Cloud Dragon vs. Cyber Vorse Raider Ryu goes to see Asuka and tell her about his victory, but when he gets outside the academy another guy appears and approaches Asuka. Iwao: You, Asuka-san I can’t believe you finally decided to enter this academy, what a shame we have to be partners again, you know you never was good at duels. A black curly hair guy, with a bad expression on his face, walks to Asuka and stands in front of her and starts to speak in a possessive way Asuka: Iwao-Kun don’t you ever say that again, I’ve grown a lot as a duelist; I’ve got friends that support me. I don’t see you having any. Asuka was angry, she doesn’t expect to see Iwao and instantly take a defensive position, and Iwao see these words as an insult. Then Iwao starts to threaten her. Iwao: So you have friends uh? And who are they? Is that girl? I don’t think so. Perhaps is that one? No. Or, don’t you tell me is that guy behind you. Asuka Turn around and sees Ryu walking through them. Asuka: Oh, Ryu-kun. Ryu: Asuka-san is this guy bothering you? Iwao: Excuse me? What are you his boyfriend or something? Ryu blushes and answer. Ryu: No I’m not, I’m her friend, and I don’t like that you are here bulling her. Iwao: Oh yeah? Well I know Asuka-san from many years, and you consider that you are her friend already? *Laugh*, yeah you must be a worthless like her. Why I’m losing my time with you. Asuka then gets mad and starts to cry. Asuka: Shut up! Ryu is a very kind person and better friend and duelist that what you think, he helps me to become better! Iwao: Yeah? We’ll see, what do you think? Want to duel me? Ryu feels the challenge, and something starts burning inside him. He wants to duel as much as Iwao. Ryu: Why not, but why don’t we make a bet, if I win you will stop bulling Asuka-san Iwao: And if I win, you’ll be my lackey the rest of the year, deal? Ryu feels Iwao’s cruel intentions; buy in any case Ryu knows that risk never will be too much to stop his convictions. Ryu: Ok, I got nothing to lose. Iwao: *Laugh* First mistake, underestimating me, first and last mistake. Look we have some minutes before classes actually starts, and since I know I’m going to win this. We don’t need more than the 5 minutes that are left. So shall we start? Ryu: You said so. Iwao: Ok then. Come on let’s go to one of the arenas inside, there we can duel without interruptions. Ryu: Ok, Asuka-san please stay away from this. I’m going to fix it. I promise. Asuka sees as Ryu and Iwao left to his battle and secretly wish luck to Ryu. After that Ryu and Iwao are inside the arena, each one takes his position and turn on the duel discs. Each one shuffles their decks and draws 5 cards, they look at each other and at the same time they say. Ryu and Iwao: Duel!!! Iwao: I go first, I Draw! First I’ll Normal Summon “A – Autonomous Android” in face-up ATK Position! [A – Autonomous Android: Level 4/DARK/Machine/ATK 1800/DEF 1200.]Then I set a face-down card, and I end my turn. Try to beat that! Ryu:*Well he is starting to take this seriously, he made a good first move*-My turn! I draw! First of all I’ll set a face-down monster; then I will set a face-down card and end my turn. Iwao: That can’t be all you got, *Laugh*then it was like I thought you are worthless, now it’s my Turn. I draw! I activate my face-down card “Cyber Tech Virus” [Cyber Tech Virus: Trap Card – Release 1 Machine-Type monster you control to destroy up to 2 cards on the field.], with this I’ll destroy your cards. Ryu: Not that fast, I open my face-down card “Dragon’s Secret Infusion” [Dragon’s Secret Infusion: Quick Play Spell Card – Active only when 1 Dragon-Type monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. Increase your Life Points by 1000.] And although my “Baby Scout Dragon” will be destroyed, I’ll increase my Life Points by 1000. Ryu put his 2 cards in the Graveyard, then his LP increases to 5000 (4000+1000). Iwao: But I haven’t finished yet, I active my Spell card, “Broken Limiter” [broken Limiter: Spell Card-Until your next Standby Phase, any player can Advance Summon monsters with 1 tribute less. Any Player can only Summon 1 monster this way, and cannot Special Summon any monster during a turn they Advance Summon a monster by this card's effect.], this way I don’t have to Release any monster in order to Summon this Level 5 monster. Iwao shows the monster he is going to Summon and then place it in his Duel Disc Iwao: Alright, come here “Cyber Vorse Raider”!!! [Cyber Vorse Raider: Level 5/DARK/Machine/ATK 2350/DEF 1350; Effect: Each time this card destroys a monster and sent it to the Graveyard, you can inflict 700 Damage to your opponent’s Life Points]. And now it is time for a direct attack! Go,” Cyber Vorse Raider”, Cyber Blade Slash!! Iwao’s monster appears from the card and then is sent to slash Ryu with its blade. Ryu’s LP goes down to 2650 (5000-2350). Iwao: I End My turn, and now that my ace card is on the field, your chances of getting the victory are…well you should know!*Laugh* Ryu has recovered from the last attack and draw a card. Ryu: I haven’t finished yet. It’s my turn. Ryu takes a Quick look at his cards and smiles Ryu: Well I think this will be funny. I normal Summon “Head Dragon – Water Ghost” [Head Dragon – Water Ghost: Level 4/WATER/Dragon/ATK 1400/DEF 1600; Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned you can have an Extra Normal Summon this turn. In that case it must be an Advance Summon, and you must Release this monster as part of tributes need to Advance Summon that monster.] Iwao: That’s not great at all. It’s only a weak and useless monster. Ryu: I don’t think so; you know this is not the monster I was waiting for, remember that your Spell Card works for me too and I got an Extra Normal Summon thanks to my weak monster’s effect. Iwao: What? That only means. You are Summoning a monster that usually needs 2 Tributes! Ryu: Yes, you read my mind! And that monster is “Storm Cloud Dragon” in face-up attack position! [storm Cloud Dragon: Level 7/Wind/Dragon/ATK 2550/DEF 1550; Effect: When each face-up monster your opponent control are either, DARK, FIRE and/or EARTH attribute, by decreasing this card’s ATK by 1000, it can attack directly. During your End Phase change the battle Position of any number of face-up monsters on the field] The water like dragon shape of “Head Dragon – Water Ghost” starts to change into a cloud form that raises above both Ryu and Iwao, then a serpent like dragon comes from it and Rain starts to fall on the field. Iwao: No, it is impossible. That monster can easily kick my monster down. I won’t let it happens, I discard my “Mecha-Coat” [Mecha-Coat: Level 1/LIGHT/Machine/ATK 0/DEF 0; Effect: Send this card from your hand to the Graveyard. Until the End of the turn if 1 of your Machine-Type monsters you Control will be destroyed by Battle, it is not destroyed. Draw a Card.], then my monster cannot be destroyed this turn, and I draw a card. Iwao thinks that with this he will be safe…he sees his victory coming. Ryu doesn’t look amazed by this; he has other plans for this turn. Ryu: I never said I was planning to destroy you monster. My target this time is you!!! My monster’s effect let me attack you directly since you only control a DARK monster. But first I got to decrease my dragon’s ATK by 1000. Ryu points to Iwao and “Storm Cloud Dragon” open his mouth, creating a energy sphere from of clouds. The ATK of the dragon is 1550 because of its own effect. Ryu: Direct Attack! Storm Blaster! Ryu’s Dragon launch its attack, throwing the energy reunited that somehow passes through “Cyber Vorse Raider”, and hits Iwao directly, decreasing his LP to 2450 (4000-1550). Iwao dries his face and look at Ryu angrily. Iwao: So this is what you want. We have only two minutes left, and now I’m being seriously, and you, YOU WILL BITE MY DUST!!! Iwao’s expression is totally mad. As “Cyber Vorse Raider” and “Storm Cloud Dragon” roar, and Ryu, starts to being worried about how this duel is going to end. To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation Iwao: Now that I detroyed your "Storm Cloud Dragon", your precious ace card, You got nothing that can stop me. And my new Fusion monster. Ryu: Well I've never said that "Storm Cloud Dragon" was my ace card, actually I'll Show what my Ace card is. Iwao: What? Ryu:Next time on Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation. This is my Ace! Golden Knight Dragon! Ryu's Card Star/Atk/Def| Level 7/2550/1550 Type/Family | WIND/Dragon/Effect Effect | When each face-up monster your opponent control are either, DARK, FIRE and/or EARTH attribute, by decreasing this card’s ATK by 1000, it can attack directly. During your End Phase change the battle Position of any number of face-up monsters on the field [spoiler=[b]Episode 3[/b]] Ryu: I never said I was planning to destroy you monster. My target this time is you!!! My monster’s effect let me attack you directly since you only control a DARK monster. But first I got to decrease my dragon’s ATK by 1000. Direct Attack! Storm Blaster! Ryu has launched a direct attack from his “Storm Could Dragon” to Iwao’s LP; the attack couldn’t be blocked by “Cyber Vorse Raider” and fully impact on Iwao. Iwao dries himself, and look at Ryu. Now is his turn, Iwao decided that Ryu is not that easy to beat, but he now will focus himself on destroy Ryu’s dragon and his spirit with it. Iwao: So this is what you want. We have only two minutes left, and now I’m being seriously, and you, YOU WILL BITE MY DUST!!! Turn 3.This is my Ace! Golden Knight Dragon! Iwao looks at his “Cyber Vorse Raider” carefully, and then raises his face to see Ryu’s monster. He knows that his favorite card can’t beat him. After realize this he decided to make other moves. Iwao starts his turn after that. Iwao: Now it is my turn! I draw. *laugh*.Now we’ll have fun. Iwao sees his hand and plan what to do with them. After take a decision he starts his move. Iwao: I activate my Spell Card “Spell Researcher” [spell Researcher: Spell Card – Pick up cards from the top of your deck until you pick up a Spell Card. Put the Spell Card you pick up in your hand and the other cards in your Graveyard.]. So let’s pick up my cards now. Iwao pick up 3 monsters until he pick up his Spell Card…He sees the monsters and smiles then put them all in his Graveyard. Iwao: Now look how I seal your fate with these 2 face-down cards. Now I end my turn. Ryu: That was all I was hoping some ultra upgrade in your monster or something. Iwao closes his eyes and put a clever face. Iwao: When the time comes you’ll see my true strength. Ryu: I guess it is ok too. But that will not help you now. I draw. Ok I’m attacking your Life Points directly with my “Storm Could Dragon” (ATK 1550).Let’s go. Storm Blaster! Iwao smirks and declare the activation of 1 of his face-down cards. Iwao: Guess what. The time has come. I activate my Trap card. “Cyber Union Barrier” [Cyber Union Barrier: Trap card – Active only when your opponent declares an attack. Release 1 face-up monster you control to reduce all the Battle Damage you take this turn to 0. During the End Phase, Special Summon 1 Union monster from your Deck with an ATK equal or lower than the Damage prevented this way in face-up attack Position]. Now I can send my “Cyber Vorse Raider” to the Graveyard to reduce all the damage to 0. Ryu: Hey hold on a second. You just dumped your ace monster, just to prevent some damage? Iwao: Yes whatever it takes to beat you!!! Ryu: Ugh, then you just don’t receive damage, so? Now you have no other monster to defend you now. Iwao: Oh but you are wrong. Now that you turn is ended, I can Special summon 1 Union monster from my deck with an attack equal or lower than the prevented damage. Iwao then takes a card from his deck and Show it to Ryu. Iwao: And now I prevented 1550 Damage so I can Special Summon this monster with 1500 ATK. Go “E- Electro Elephant”!!! [E- Electro Elephant: Level 3/LIGHT/Machine-Union/ATK 1500/DEF 800; Effect: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your “A – Autonomous Android " or a Thunder-type monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase the ATK/DEF of the equipped monster by 300 points. In addition when the equipped monster attacks you can change the battle position of a face-up monster your opponent controls (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)] And now things will get worse. Meanwhile, Asuka is outside of the academy, sitting near the door. Asuka: Ryu-kun I hope you and Iwao are ok now but, why? Why he is again around me? *Back in Junior High when I met Iwao-kun I thought he was a kind and lonely guy. And I actually like it, but, I guess he is too competitive for me, I couldn’t beat him* Some teachers pass in front of Asuka talking about going to the arena Asuka: Oh No I’ve got to alert Ryu. Asuka starts running to the arena. Meanwhile Ryu and Iwao’s Duel continue… Ryu: Then I see, you change your strategy; I got to make something so I set 2 face-down cards and end my turn. Iwao: It’s my turn. I draw! *Laugh* First I’ll Normal Summon, “B – Burning Beetle” In attack Position!! [b – Burning Beetle: Level 4/FIRE/Machine-Union/ATK 1600/DEF 1800; Effect: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your “A – Autonomous Android " or a Pyro-type monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase the ATK/DEF of the equipped monster by 300 points. In addition when the equipped monster attacks inflict 500 damage to your opponent’s Life Points (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)] A mechanic red beetle appears next to the electronic elephant Iwao summoned in the last turn. Iwao: And that’s not all I activate my Spell Card “Machinery Recycling” [Machinery Recycling: Spell Card –Select 1 Machine Type monster from your Graveyard. Remove from play Machine-Type from your Graveyard whose total Levels are equal to double the selected card's to Special Summon the selected card, in face-up attack Position.] Iwao then pull out the monster in his Graveyard and show them to Ryu. Iwao: Now look, these are the monsters that were sent to the Graveyard so far. Thanks to my spell card I can Special Summon one of them as long as I remove from play other monsters. Now I guess I’m summoning this. Iwao takes and shows “A – Autonomous Android “a level 4 monster. The other monsters in his graveyard are: “Cyber Vorse Raider” (A level 5 monster), “Mecha-Coat” (A level 1 monster), “C – Cobalt Crow” (A level 3 monster), “D – Delta Dolphin” (A Level 2 monster) and “Heavy Mech Support Platform” (A level 3 monster), these 3 sent due “Spell Researcher’s” effect. Iwao: Then I remove: Level 3 “C – Cobalt Crow”+ Level 3 “Heavy Mech Support Platform”+ Level 2 “D – Delta Dolphin” (3+3+2=8) to Special Summon “A – Autonomous Android “. Ryu was seeing everything without anything to do as Iwao Swarm 1 monster behind other in his field. The monsters Iwao choose to remove appear on the field and disintegrate in particles that join themselves and form the android A. Ryu: So your final plan is to swarm as many machines as possible in your field? Iwao stopped being exited just to see Ryu’s face and answer. Iwao: Oh you have no idea. It’s time for me to active my face-down card “Machinery from the Different Dimension” [Machinery from the Different Dimension: Trap card – Active only when 2 or more Machine-Type monsters were Special Summoned in the same turn. Special Summon up to 2 remove from play Level 4 or Lower Machine-Type monster to your side of the field. During the End Phase of a turn you active this card’s effect destroy them] Iwao take two cards from his pocket, where he puts his removed from play cards. And put them in his duel disc Iwao: Then the two monster summoned by my card. Let’s do it “D – Delta Dolphin” [D – Delta Dolphin: Level 2/Water/Machine-Union/ATK 800/DEF 300; Effect: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your “A – Autonomous Android " or a Aqua-type monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase the ATK/DEF of the equipped monster by 300 points. In addition when the equipped monster attacks and destroy 1 monster by battle, draw a card (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)]and then “C – Cobalt Crow” [ C – Cobalt Crow: Level 3/Wind/Machine-Union/ATK 1300/DEF 500; Effect: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your “A – Autonomous Android " or a Winged Beast-type monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase the ATK/DEF of the equipped monster by 300 points. In addition when the equipped monster attacks, destroy 1 face-up Spell or trap card on the field (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)]. Ryu is shocked…Iwao Summoned a total of 4 monsters in a single turn. Ryu: F…fi…five…monsters…what are you going to do with that five monsters… Suddenly Ryu seems to remember something…He discovers Iwao’s Plan… Ryu: Wait a minute there is another set of monsters like this…the V to Zs you are going to fuse those monster!!! Iwao smirks again. Iwao: Seems like you got it, now I have A, B, C, D and E on my field I can remove them all from play to Special Summon my secret weapon!!! It’s time, you are going to feel the fury and the powers of my most appreciate creation. I Special Summon “Ultimate Union Assault - Megatech” in attack position. [ultimate Union Assault - Megatech: Level 10/LIGHT/Machine-Fusion /ATK 3000/DEF 2500; Effect: “A – Autonomous Android " + “B – Burning Beetle” + “C – Cobalt Crow” + “D – Delta Dolphin” + “E- Electro Elephant”; This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards you control (You do not use "Polymerization"). When this card declares an attack you can select a face-up monster your opponent controls and sent it to the Graveyard. Once per turn if this card would be destroyed by battle it is not destroyed.] B to E starts transforming into an armor being B the upper body part, and helmet. C The back and Wings, D split in 2 and form the arms and a blade, and finally E becomes the low body and Legs. They all the equip themselves with A, forming a giant robot. Iwao: Now I enter the Battle Phase; I attack with my “Ultimate Union Assault - Megatech”, but first! Its effect is activated and I send your “Storm Cloud Dragon” to the Graveyard. Now “Ultimate Union Assault - Megatech”, direct attack, Ultimate Assault!!! Ryu: I got to do something! I activate my face-down card “Reflux” [Reflux: Trap Card- Activve only when your opponent declares a direct attack with 1 of his/her monster. Negate that monster’s attack and inflict damage to both players equal to half the attack of that monster.] This will cancel your attack although we both receive some damage. Both players LP goes down by 1500 and Ultimate Union Assault - Megatech’s attack is stopped. (Ryu: 2650-1500=1150), (Iwao: 2450-1500=950) Ryu: OK these is no more time, I got to do my last move now! Iwao: Whatever I don’t see any way you can beat me now. I end my turn. Ryu draws quickly hoping to find something that can gain the duel and although he doesn’t seems to get it he is satisfied with is draw. Ryu: This is now o never. I Normal Summon “Head Dragon –Duos” [Head Dragon –Duos: Level 3/LIGHT/Dragon/ATK 800/DEF 500; Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 “Duplicate Token” (Level 3/Dragon/Dragon/ATK ? /DEF ?) Whose ATK and DEF are equal to this card’s ATK and DEF. When this card is removed from the field destroy that Token.] A small dragon and his Shadow form appear on the field. Ryu: Then I activate “Double Summon” [Double Summon: Spell card - You can Normal Summon 1 additional time this turn. You can only gain this effect once per turn.] With this I can Advance Summon my true Ace Monster. Iwao: What? Your own Ace? *Now I’ll see what you have for me* Ryu: I release my “Head Dragon –Duos” to Advance Summon my very soul! “Golden Knight Dragon” in Attack position [Golden Knight Dragon: Level 6/LIGHT/Dragon/ATK 2000/DEF 2200; Effect: When this card is Advanced Summoned by Releasing 1 LIGHT monster, increase this card’s ATK by 100 x the Level of the Released monster. In addition, if that monster had any effect, this card gains all those effects until the End Phase]. A golden armored dragon appears from a shining whirlwind and stands next to Ryu, then a shadow appears behind him and a dark form of the same monster appear from behind him Iwao: What’s happening!! Why do you summon two monsters at the same time? Ryu: According to my monster’s effect as I Released 1 LIGHT monster it gains ATK equal to 100 x the Level of duos, is that way my monster have 2200 ATK now, but as my “Duos” left the field my first token is destroyed. Anyway my monster have gained “Duos” effect so until the End of the turn I’ll have a new “Duplicate Token” from my monster, a token that will have the same ATK as the ATK of my “Golden Knight Dragon”, now I equip my token with “Dragon’s Golden Suit” increasing its ATK by 800, and he now have the same ATK points as your monster. Then I enter the Battle Phase, “Duplicate Token” Attack Iwao’s monster. Iwao: *Evil Laugh*…oh you fool…Even if both monsters have the same ATK points only your will lose since mine can avoid being destroyed once per turn. Ryu: I know that. Iwao: What? Ryu: Yes, when you destroy one of my monsters I can active my face down card. “Poison” [Poison: Quick Play Spell Card – Active only when one of your monsters is destroyed by battle. Half the ATK of a monster that destroy 1 of your monsters this turn], and the ATK of your monster is 1500 and also it can be destroyed now. Attack Mega Tornado! Ryu’s monster creates a golden twister and hit Iwao’s monster destroying it easily. Iwao don’t wait more and draw his card as the school bell starts to sound announcing that classes have started, in that moment Asuka comes running to the arena. Asuka: Ryu-kun, Iwao…the teachers are coming…we must go now! Iwao looks at his hand; he has “Mechanicalchaser” and “Limiter Removal”. Ryu: I’m sorry Iwao; we will have this for another time. Good work although, I’ll be waiting for it. After that Asuka and Ryu starts to run to the classroom leaving Iwao alone. In silence Iwao whispers a message for Ryu Iwao: Sure we have a second match and I’ll be waiting too. But then nothing will stop your Defeat! To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation Proffesor: Class Let me introduce you a new student, Rintaro Ihara Rintaro: Hi! i'm Rintaro I 'm the younger brother of second year... Natsume: Rintaro, stop being so childish!!! Rintaro: But, Big Brother... Natsume: Next time on Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation. Beasts! Birds! Brothers! Battles! [spoiler=[b]Card of this episode[/b]] Iwao's cards Ultimate Union Assault - Megatech Star/Atk/Def| Level 10/3000/2500 Type/Family | LIGHT/Machine-Fusion/Effect Effect | “A – Autonomous Android " + “B – Burning Beetle” + “C – Cobalt Crow” + “D – Delta Dolphin” + “E- Electro Elephant”; This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards you control (You do not use "Polymerization"). When this card declares an attack you can select a face-up monster your opponent controls and sent it to the Graveyard. Once per turn if this card would be destroyed by battle it is not destroyed. [spoiler=[b]Episode 4[/b]]Ryu and Asuka are sitting in the classroom having a break… Ryu:*Well…..it’s been two weeks since I started to study at the academy and I must say it, thing are going better than I thought. Asuka and I become good friends quickly, is pretty nice to talk to her she is kind and cute, and…what I’m saying* In that moment a tall blonde guy comes and sits next to Asuka and Ryu… Ben: Hey guys what’s up! Ryu and Asuka: Hi Ben! Ryu: *Oh yeah that is Ben…we met him during the first class, he comes from some kind of duelist family, but he’s a rebel. His Parents are the owners of the “Matsumure’s Dojo”. That reminds me how weird I’ve been acting lately, never thought I would make friends so fast, but I still miss my older town and friends…but well as I say I made good friends here too and…* Ryu turns his head and sees Iwao sitting some desk behind them, watching his cards. Ryu:*Yes I forgot, he is in our same class too, at least he didn't cause us any problem yet, and he stops bullying Asuka too* Asuka: Ryu-kun. Are you there? Asuka slaps Ryu’s head to call his attention Ryu: Oh sorry, I was thinking Ben: it’s Ok, so as I was saying…. In that moment a professor come into the classroom Professor: Ok, guys please attention! I got something to tell you… The students stop talking each other and look at the professor Professor: Ok, a new student is starting today, please be nice with him. The professor comes out and then enters again with a short red haired Boy… Rintaro: Oh, Hi My name is Rintaro Ihara… Turn 4. Beast! Birds! Brothers! Battle! Professor: So Rintaro take a sit wherever you want Rintaro then look which place he can’t take and noticed that he can only sit next to Ryu…. When the professor leave the classroom Iwao stands up and walk to the door, Rintaro was going to sit down and both of them crosses Rintaro: Hi my name is Rin… Rintaro couldn't finish Coz Iwao just pass through and ignoring him Iwao:*What does this dwarf want from me* Rintaro feel disappointed with this, and just sit down in the place he was assigned. When he feels a hand in his shoulder he turns and sees Asuka Asuka: Hey don’t feel bad about what Iwao, he is just a not very friendly person. By the way my name is Asuka, so you name is Rintaro right? Rintaro agreed with his head, then Ben sits next t him and along Ryu and Asuka Start to talk. Ryu: So Rintaro you look younger than us, how old are you? Rintaro: I’m 13…why? Ryu, Asuka and Ben were amazed on how a 13 years old boy was in the academy already Ben: So you are a prodigy ah? Maybe he is the duelist all people talk about. Ryu: What? I’ve never heard about it…. Rintaro: I don’t know what you are talking about neither Ben: So you don’t know about it? We have an international student right here, someone important, and the most amazing is the fact that the boy has just entered in first year. That’s why everyone is so concerned about newcomers… Asuka: And what is so amazing with this guy? Ben: Well he is the son of someone important a legend of duels and it is from this country, but this guy is not only well know, he has more reputation than anyone can think, actually he has a record, he has never lost a match in the last 3 years. Ryu: Oh, I understand now why you asked me all of my life the day we met each other. Ben blushes and smiles Ben: Yeah well, everybody could think it is you, you know you come from another city, and your uncle and mother were Pro Duelist, and you haven’t lost any duel since you come here… Ryu: But I do. Remember? Asuka, entry exam Asuka: I know you let me win…I’m grateful you do but come on you haven’t got to lie to me… Ryu: So you realized… Asuka: Pretty much from the beginning… Rintaro: Oh well, and you thought it from me too? Ben: Well yes, I’m pretty sure I heard your surname before at this school so you must be well known, and you are a young talent so… Rintaro: Oh But I’m not….And you must hear it because my big brother is in this school… Ryu: So you have a Brother here cool, he can tell us everything about school…. Asuka: Ben your family is well known here too, don’t they have that dojo…thing? Ben: Yeah well. We have some tradition…my family is duelist too, they all uses Warrior decks… Asuka: And why do you say they... don’t you use it too? Ben: Well While Asuka and Ben discuss about Ben’s Deck…Ryu comes Iwao enter to the classroom again… Rintaro: You and that guy don’t get well right? Ryu looked at Rintaro kindly and answered… Ryu: No I’ve only dueled with him once but, I don’t know why, but I have a strong feeling when we dueled. I was just enjoying it, and I have the feeling that he was doing it as much. Also he was the strongest opponent I’ve ever had. I’m wandering for a rematch Rintaro: So do you think he is a good person? Ryu looks at Iwao one last time Ryu: Yes I think he is. In that moment a teacher comes and asks everyone to take his places…. Professor: Ok Class, please sit down. We are starting reading chapter 3 of Phases of the duel…. Rintaro: -Hey Ryu-san, so tell me is true that you haven’t lost a duel in all this year?- Ryu: -Well, I guess no…except for those I told- The professor was next to Ryu and Rintaro…. Professor: Is My class so boring guys? I think you’ll enjoy them standing outside too…Now!!! Ryu and Rintaro stands up and walk outside…. Ryu: Oh man I was never punished at school before….. Rintaro: I’m sorry Ryu-San…. Rintaro and Ryu spend the rest of the class standing outside the door…. After class Asuka and Ben goes and find Ryu and Rintaro on the lockers…. Ryu: Hey we can go home now….Luckily we didn’t have to stay on detention… Rintaro goes outside and sees someone he starts to run to him happily… Rintaro: Big brother I’m here!!! Big brother!!! That guy turns around and sees Rintaro coming… Natsume: What are you doing here? Masato: Who’s this little annoying brat? Natsume looked at his brother and then to his friend…. Natsume: It is just my little brother, give me a minute and I will take care of him. He walks to Rintaro who sees him quietly…. Natsume: Mom and dad will be mad when I told them that you are here instead of your school…come with me. Now! Ryu, Asuka and Ben come to help Rintaro… Ryu: Hey what’s up, he is your little brother you can’t treat him like that…. Natsume: And you just should be care of your business, I’m his brother so this is among family…Ok? ...Now Rintaro, come with me I’ll tell everything to mom and dad and they will make the decisions… Rintaro: But Big Brother….I Ryu: Rintaro don’t let him treat you this way…you may be 13 but that doesn’t be a reason why you can’t be here Rintaro: I…I know…Big brother I can show why I have been accepted Natsume looks at Rintaro’s Eyes, they looked determined; Ryu was seeing him in the same way. Natsume: mmmmm Ok I know what you mean, then let’s duel, maybe you can show me how much do you progressed. Rintaro and Natsume take out their own duel disks and prepare to duel. Rintaro: Ok I’ll take the first Turn, Normal Summon “Quicksilver Cat” in face up Attack Position; [Quicksilver Cat: Level 3/LIGHT/Beast/ATK 800/DEF 800; Effect: When this card is sent to the Graveyard Special Summon 1 “Quicksilver Cat” from your deck in face-up Attack Position.], The I Set a Face down and end my turn. Natsume: Ok Then I’ll tell you why you make a mistake…Now it’s my turn. *Mmmm, I’ve drown “Garuda the wind spirit”, then with those I can make lots of damage* I activate My Ritual Spell Card “Fly among the Golden Clouds”, this card will let me send one monster from my hand to Special Summon “Royal Windcoat Falcon” [Royal Windcoat Falcon: Level 4/WIND/Winged Beast-Ritual/ATK 1850/DEF 800; Effect: This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of “Fly among the Golden Clouds”. When this card is Ritual Summoned, destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field, if you destroy Spell or Trap card by this effect, draw a card.] So I can destroy your face down card. A great falcon comes out and creates a whirlwind that blows up Rintaro’s card Natsume: And I haven’t finished….By removing my wind monster I can Special Summon “Garuda, the wind Spirit” [Garuda, the wind Spirit: Level 4/WIND/Winged Beast /ATK 1600/DEF 1200; Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 WIND monster in your Graveyard from play. As long as this monster remains face-up on the field, you may change the battle position of 1 of your opponent's face-up Monster Cards at each End Phase of your opponent's turn.] Ryu: This is bad now, he has 2 monsters and can attack Rintaro directly, and he doesn’t even have is Trap card to support him. Ben: Even worst, one of the 2 cards he has in his hand could be another monster remember he haven’t normal Summoned yet. Asuka: Oh No that’s so bad!!! Natsume: You are correct!!! I got a third monster ready to be summoned, I Normal Summon “Windcoat Banisher” [Windcoat Banisher: Level 4/WIND/Winged Beast /ATK 1500/DEF 1200; Effect: You can remove this face-up card, to negate the activation and effect of a Spell Card and destroy It.], Now I can attack your “Quicksilver Cat” with my “Wind Coat Banisher”. Quicksilver cat disappeared in Windcoat Banisher’s mantle before Rintaro is hit with its weapon. Rintaro’s LP goes down to 3300(4000+800-1500). In that moment Rintaro’s Graveyard glows…. Rintaro: Right My Quicksilver cat’s effect let me Special Summon another each time it is destroyed….So my life points will be safe…I’m not going to lose yet… Natsume: Then let’s see how you handle this! “Garuda, the wind Spirit” attacks your second Cat…Then I’m assuming you are going to summon one more right? Rintaro: Yeah you are assuming right… Garuda launches a whirlwind that flew the second quicksilver cat away….then a third one appears from Rintaro´s deck. Rintaro’s LP goes down to 2500 (3300+800-1600) Natsume: My last attack of the turn, Royal Windcoat Falcon, goes and destroys his cat and this time it will not come back!! Finally the last cat is destroyed and Rintaro’s LP goes down to 1450 (2500+800-1850). Rintaro clean his eyes, closed by the wind and smiles…he was happy… Rintaro: See brother I pulled the strings to lead to this situation Now I can make the move and go for my victory… Ryu: He was planning it… Natsume: I set a face-down and end my turn… Rintaro quickly takes the initiative… Rintaro: In my turn, I draw a card, then I show you what I was talking about, use my spell card ”Des Mew” [Des Mew: Spell Card- Active only when there is 3 “Quicksilver Cat” in your Graveyard. Destroy each card your opponent’s control.] And with this I’ll destroy each one of your cards Natsume: Idiot! You are always so careless. Didn’t you notice that I could avoid that! Rintaro, starts think what is up with what Natsume said, in that moment, the effect of des mew appear on the field, 3 Quicksilver cats are summoned and starts to meow, but before any cards is destroyed, ”Windcoat Banisher” goes and cover the 3 cats and itself with its Invisible mantle, and after that they all disappear… Rintaro: What! Natsume: Stop being shocked…It was my Windcoat Banisher’s effect and you knew it… Rintaro: Oh, yes *Damn. How could I miss that? Now I’ll have to think in another way to win…* I Normal Summon “Lonely Grey Wolf” [Lonely Grey Wolf: Level 4/WIND/ Beast /ATK 2300/DEF 1200; Effect: You can only Normal or Special Summon this card, when you control no monsters. As long as this card is face-up, when you summon a monster, you must send it to the Graveyard, if you can send this card to the Graveyard.]…Battle Phase I attack Garuda with my wolf!!! Natsume: And I activate my face down card “High Diver” [High Diver: Trap card- Activate only when 1 of your Wind monster is attacked. Change that attack to a direct attack. After this card resolves destroy any non-Wind Monster that attacked this turn.] Rintaro: Then I hit your Life Points. Now I’m closer to win. Natsume’s LP 1700 (4000-2300) Natsume: No I’m closer to get my victory… it’s my turn and I release "Garuda, the Wind Spirit" in order to Special Summon my “Garuda, the Sky Lord” [Garuda, the Sky Lord: Level 5/WIND/ Winged Beast /ATK 2150/DEF 1850; Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 "Garuda, the Wind Spirit" you control. When this card destroys a monster inflict Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of all WIND monster you control x 100. Return any number of WIND monsters from your side of the field to your hand to shuffle that many cards from your opponent's side of the field in his/her Deck. Then he/she can draw that many cards from his/her Deck. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Release 1 WIND monster you control, then Special Summon 1 "Garuda, the Wind Spirit" from your Graveyard, ignoring any Summoning conditions.], Now to declare my victory I return my “Royal Windcoat Falcon” to my hand to return your wolf to your deck…..and finally my last direct attack!!! The evolution of Garuda generates a whirlwind that flew Natsume’s falcon and Rintaro’s wolf away, and then Natsume declares the attack. Garuda, the sky lord summons a descending tornado, that hit directly to Rintaro knocking him down…as his Life Points become 0. Rintaro was smiling. Ryu and the others run to see if Rintaro wasn’t hurt. Later Natsume is walking to his house carrying Rintaro on his back along with Masato. Masato: Hey don’t you think you were a little thought with your brother? Natsume: You don’t know my brother as I do, he was hoping a long time to have this match, I’m very proud of how he played today…I always knew he has a huge potential but he is too young…I got to protect him but he can know this… Masato Laughs Masato: I knew you were a good big brother…. Natsume: I guess so Rintaro who was asleep stills smiles, and said Rintaro:-Big Brother Thank you- To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation Ryu: This second year boy Saeki Oda is a formibadle rival. Ben: Yeah he has beaten almost each studentin the academy last year... Ryu: OMG, he must be powerful...Next time in Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation; Invincible Water Deck, Roar of Levia! [spoiler=[b]Card of this episode[/b]] Natsume's cards /b] Star/Atk/Def| Level 5/2150/1850 Type/Family | WIND/Winged Beast/Effect Effect | This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 "Garuda, the Wind Spirit" you control. When this card destroys a monster inflict Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of all WIND monster you control x 100. Return any number of WIND monsters from your side of the field to your hand to shuffle that many cards from your opponent's side of the field in his/her Deck. Then he/she can Draw that many cards from his/her Deck. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Release 1 WIND monster you control, then Special Summon 1 "Garuda, the Wind Spirit" from your Graveyard, ignoring any Summoning conditions. This Post reaches it's limit...More chapters will be added through the thread.... Where Others Chaps Are: Chapter 5: Page 3 Chapter 6: Page 4 Chapter 7: Page 6 Chapter 8: Page 6 Chapter 9: Page 7 Chapter 10: Special - Page 7 Chapter 11: Page 8 Chapter 12: Page 8 Chapter 13: Page 10 Chapter 14: Page 10 Chapter 15: Page 11 Chapter 16: Page 11 Chapter 17: Page 12 Chapter 18: Page 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Lots of grammar mistakes, you know? And don't write things like:*Now we see Ryu sitting next to a desk…Like if he knows we are here, he turns to see us and keeps speaking* That's horrible...xDTry making the story more vivid, not that... The story... It is too early to say weather it is good or not... But, let me know when the next chapter is on.;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Lots of grammar mistakes' date=' you know? And don't write things like:*Now we see Ryu sitting next to a desk…Like if he knows we are here, he turns to see us and keeps speaking* That's horrible...xDTry making the story more vivid, not that... The story... It is too early to say weather it is good or not... But, let me know when the next chapter is on.;)[/quote'] agreed but i know that ryu can do betteri liked the idea of this story thoughkeep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 it needs move description, more substance. its not bad though and shows a lot of potential. i look forward to more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 I like the idea, but as Ned sayed, improve your grammar. The story is a bit too "childish" at the beginning, so tell me when ep 2 is up ;) P.S: Need help? I can make you cards for free ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 OK I added the second chapter,now. Hope you like it. As for all the coments, thanks. You see this part of the history is not as complex as anyone wish but don't worry, it is just the beggining. Actually I had pull some strings of the plot but in a very unnoticeable way, so I hope you follow me into what this history will turn to. Meanwhile I'll enjoy that you keep reading it and comenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 Wow this is like Yugioh GXPretty good but you have waaay too many grammar mistakes. Try reading through it and correcting them.Apart from that I really enjoyed reading your Fan-Fic:P So far... 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 I'm glam You enjoyed it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 I enjoyed it, despite some of those errors, and i do think you may have had a few too many big things happen in that one day (could just be me, meh), I'd rather it wasn't script format, but it's fine that way as well. I do like those custom cards, well, good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 "Storm Cloud Dragon"? Almost the same as my Dark Cloud Dragon ;) It would maybe fit in your Deck =) PM me. Anyways, you still have some grammar errors, but keep it up ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ғαlşє 0ρρяєşşịợи Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 i like it, its intersting, keep up the good work ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 I posted Third Episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Read all 3 eps so far. Well done of your dueling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 I've read Chapter 2.Opinion:A few improvements, but still far away from a good fan fic...(don't get mad or sth)Grammar is you biggest enemy. But, hey! I keep telling you this all the time...^___^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 I've read Chapter 2.Opinion:A few improvements' date=' but still far away from a good fan fic...(don't get mad or sth)Grammar is you biggest enemy. But, hey! I keep telling you this all the time...^___^[/quote'] Grammar isn't going to matter that much if we can understand the gist of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 I've read Chapter 2.Opinion:A few improvements' date=' but still far away from a good fan fic...(don't get mad or sth)Grammar is you biggest enemy. But, hey! I keep telling you this all the time...^___^[/quote'] Grammar isn't going to matter that much if we can understand the gist of it True, but a good fan fic has a good grammar, too. Read Chapter 3...Opinion:It's not exciting... A good story makes you anxious - it makes you want the new Chapter...That's not the feeling I got after reading this...;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 well some chapters don't always have to make you want another (unless he intends to leave every one on a cliffhanger) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 The pic of Iwao's fusion... Sucks =P No offense. I agree with Ned, this chapter wasn't good, since it wasn't enough exiting... I excpect more from you next time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Impossible to find some picture that match what I wanted....got to draw it...It is not easy you know... about the chapter...well....the duel doesn't ends I know.....I want them for a better and more exiting rematch.... Please Be patient I haven't introduced all the characters yet that's why this will be slow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 ;) If you need help with pics, I can draw humans... Not robots, well... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 well I got the pics for the next 3 chapters...so i'll tell you XD... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 that's good, mind putting the pics here then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 well then I'll spoil the next three chapters.... about the 4th chapter I'm woorking still on it since....I have been told that stories aren't interesting...so I'll try to avoid unnecesary content Goota work on shortening the story and delete the fillers...and so.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 fine with me. Just don't make the story TOO short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 And that's why I'm trying to shorten it, Because it is too long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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