-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 what do you think about the new characters section.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 I really like it. It really paints more of a picture when reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 Thanks!!!!!!!!! This chap conclusion will be up in 1-2 days....XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 Awesome! But seriously, who was that Oda talking about when he said "but well if that is what the big boss wants....." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 That will be a secret...;)...at least by now....XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 so....what should we expect in the next few chapters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 so....what should we expect in the next few chapters? First of all this duel must conclude...Then we have to finish one already setup (existing) conflict between 2 important characters' date=' (you know what I mean)...and then the entry of a new charcter will start what I pretend....and maybe we'll see one of the [b']oldest[/b] characters in action.....so I can say we almost reach the start of one good part of the history...XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 Sounds good. So Iwao and Ryu will remach soon.Any info on the new character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 just let him reveal it in time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 mmmmm...Yeah...I guess you can wait sometime...It is not going to be late in appearing...(I meant that it will be soon) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 ok.....I guess I'll just wait for more of the story then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 look at it this way HyuugaKing, you never heard me complaining why you wouldn't reveal what I wanted you to in your Knights Tale fic because I knew you'd eventually reveal it soon anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 Oh yeah....ok. No prob then. I will happily wait then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 just like how I'm still waiting on your update, however long that'll take, HyuugaKing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 Yeah, I'm actually working on it as we speak.So I understand how tedious writing a Fanfic really is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 you're not the only one. I've experienced it myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Chapter 6 is Up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [spoiler=[b]Episode 6[/b]]Oda: Levia has just cleared the field for me, and now that you Life Points are exposed I’m going to summon my most powerful monster. Release 1 Level 7 Water monster to special Summon “Fountain Turtle, Ocean's Sustentor” [Fountain Turtle, Ocean's Sustentor: Level 8/WATER/ Reptile /ATK 3000/DEF 1200; Effect: This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 Level 7 or Higher WATER monster. As long as this card is face-up on the field, Umi cannot be destroyed. When this card is Special Summoned successfully you can add WATER monsters from your Deck to your hand whose total Levels are equal to the Released monster's Level. When this card is send to the Graveyard Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or Lower WATER monsters from your hand.] Suddenly water stars to fill the field and an Enormous Island emerge from the water…the island comes to be a Giant turtle Shell. The turtle roars and everyone on the arena looked shocked the summoning of such a powerful and huge monster. Oda takes his place over the turtle’s head. Ryu in the other hand was trying to not be taken away from the tidal created by the turtle… Oda: Well, Ryu…now the real stuff…has just started…Battle…“Fountain Turtle, Ocean's Sustentor”…direct attack…Crush Ryu’s Life Points…Maximal Wave… A huge wave is summoned and comes to Ryu. Ryu was paralyzed he has to be ready to intercept that powerful attack. Turn 6. The Lord of the ocean, desesperate tactics. The wave hit Ryu, knocking him from the platform…as the water disappear Ryu’s LP drastically goes down from 5000 to 2000. Ryu’s is lying on the ground. He slow gets up and climbs to the platform… Ryu: Man that was a hologram but still hurts a lot…*cough*…*this guy is taking this really serious* Oda: Yeah well I hoped it will last a little longer but I feel you just reach your limits…go and make your turn to finish this quickly…I end my turn. Ryu: Hey don’t underestimate me…I draw now…*Great I just draw “Storm Cloud Dragon”, but this card doesn’t help me now…not again that Giant turtle…I can’t even summon this…but…* I active my spell card “Tribute to the Harvest” [Tribute to the Harvest: Both players send 1 card from his hand to the Graveyard; both players draw cards from his/her Decks equal to half the highest Level among the sent cards (Rounded Down).]. And I sent a Level 7 monster, “Storm Cloud Dragon” from my hand to the graveyard, and you? Oda: Sounds interesting but well I’ll just send this Level 2 monster to the Graveyard. This means your card has the highest level here. Ryu: Correct and that also means that we both draw 3 cards. So after I draw, I normal Summon “Head Dragon –Duos” in attack Position, [Head Dragon –Duos: Level 3/LIGHT/Dragon/ATK 800/DEF 500; Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 “Duplicate Token” (Level 3/Dragon/Dragon/ATK ? /DEF ?) Whose ATK and DEF are equal to this card’s ATK and DEF. When this card is removed from the field, destroy that Token.]. Finally I’ll set 2 cards and end my turn. Oda: Oh well, you didn’t do much…I’ll attack you now, “Fountain Turtle, Ocean's Sustentor”, destroy his Dragon… Oda’s monster summons the giant wave again, and this time not only Ryu but his 2 dragons were covered with water. Oda: So bad well it was a funny duel after all… Iwao was watching near a door, when he saw Ryu’s imminent defeat, he walks away but as soon as he crosses the door he notices someone standing near the door. Iwao:*Without watching the another guy*Interesting I thought every noob in this school shall be watching the duel The guy still from the shadows smirks…and answers. Guy: Hmm and what brings you here…aren’t you enjoying it? Iwao: *turned to see the other guy* Why should I do it I deserve to be right there…and even more I should have already finished it… Guy: Then things are like I’ve heard…you hate that Ryusaki guy….Ryu… Iwao…thinks for a while before answer… Iwao: I…I guess I do… Guy: Then that’s all I need…*Walking out of the shadows*, my name is Tenma, Ganter Tenma Jr…and you are not just a strong duelist, you have something in common with me, and I’ll need your services… The Tenma turned around and starts to walk to the shadows again… Iwao: Wait what kind of services...and what make you think I’ll do it… Tenma: Because I know you wanna do it too…you’ll know soon…and believe me you’ll do what I want… Iwao was about to follow Tenma but the noticed that something happened inside the arena. Tenma disappear… Oda: What? My wave has just had to finish him already, why? Suddenly from the water a giant energy dragon surge and dissipate it. Ryu’s still in the game and his two dragons had merged into a Spirit like Dragon. Ryu: I’m sorry Oda, but this duel hasn’t finished yet…I’m safe thanks to my trap card “Draconic Fury Form” [Draconic Fury Form: Continuous Trap Card- Activate only if you control 2 or more face-up Attack Position Dragon-Type monsters; select 2 of them and equip them with this card. The ATK of the selected monsters becomes 3000 and both are treated like only 1 monster (They both attack and defend as 1 monster). Dragon-Type monster(s) you control cannot attack, except the selected monsters. If this card is destroyed destroy both selected monster. If at least 1 of the selected monster is destroyed destroy this card.]. And you just see it here…My unique monster has the same attack than your…both are destroyed!!!! The energy dragon flies over the public and the dives into the Giant turtle sinking it and destroying it. Oda has just seen all of it amazed… Oda: That was very, very impressive; you have just defeated my greatest monster… congratulations. But…it is not over…Ryu: What? But I destroy it…why it isn’t over? Oda: I activate the special effect of “Fountain Turtle, Ocean's Sustentor”, when it is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard…I can Special Summon 2 Water monsters from my hand…they must be Level 4 or lower but, that is not a problem..I got them right here… Oda shows 2 cards from his hand and place it in his duel disk… Oda: I special Summon “Coral Merman” in attack Position [Coral Merman: Level 3/WATER/Fish/ATK 800/DEF 500; Effect: Increase this card’s ATK by 500 for each WATER monster on the field.] and “Coral Wall” in DEF Position [Coral Wall: Level 2/WATER/Aqua-Tuner/ATK 0/DEF 500; Effect: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, both players draw a card.], next thing…I’ll doing is…this my Battle Phase hasn’t end yet. “Coral Merman” Now that his great dragon has disappeared, direct attack! Go for his life points! The merman launches a needle barrage…and Ryu’s Life Points goes down to 200 (Coral Merman’s ATK is 1800 since there are 2 water monster’s on the field.)Ryu’s Lp 200 (2000-1800) Ryu: Ok, that let me activate my second face-down card…”Garbage” [Garbage: Trap Card- Active only when you receive Damage from a direct attack, select 1 card from your Graveyard and put it in your hand.]this will allow me to put my”Dragon’s Life Infusion” back in my hand. Oda: Interesting but…you have just made a mistake; you show your strategy…now I can counter it in my second main phase. I activate “Clear Water’s Mirror” [Clear Water’s Mirror: Spell Card- Send a WATER monster from your hand to the Graveyard. Select 1 Spell Card from your opponent’s Graveyard and active it as it was in your hand.]This let me use the effect of your “Tribute to the Harvest”, that let’s you’re a tough decision right? I know one card in your hand is “Dragon’s Life Infusion”, the other one must be your last defense monster...you was about to put a defense and increase your life points with your card. But now I send a Spell card… from my hand to the graveyard…now if you want to draw you’ll have to send your last monster unless, you send your spell card in which case all the life points, you sacrificed, were just a waste…*Laugh*…now your choice is… Ryu is has his eyes closed as listened Oda’s voice. Ryu:*It is true I take all the ricks but nothing seems to make me go closer to victory…in fact I’m losing now…I’m hopeless?...that’s why you leave me here mom?...no, she wouldn’t let me give up…if I ever going to see her again…I’m not going to be a quitter*I choose my monster card…”Golden knight Dragon” Iwao has just come back to see the duel and listened Ryu’s choice… Iwao: His ace card…I see he will…*Smirks*…he will risk all…I know it…somehow I know it… Ben, Rintaro and Asuka: Don’t give up, you can do it! You can…Ryu-kun! Ryu: I know…that means we both draw 3 cards… Oda: I can’t understand you…but whatever…I end my turn… Ryu: And it is my turn…*I hope the risk worth*, I normal Summon “Head Dragon – Shadow Envoy” Attack Position [Head Dragon – Shadow Envoy: Level 4/DARK/Dragon/ATK 1800/DEF 1500; Effect: During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.]. I attack your “Coral Wall” Oda’s Life Points goes down to 1400(2750+500-1850) Ryu: I place a face-down and end my turn…. Oda: That’s all? *Smirks* you were predictable…now I’ll take this duel Once and for all…I send my “Warrior of Atlantis” to add my second”A Legendary Ocean”to my hand and I activate it…then I release my “Coral Merman” to Advance Summon… “Minor Dragon – Daedalus” [Minor Dragon – Daedalus: Level 6 /WATER /Sea Serpent /ATK 2100/DEF 1500; Effect: Send "Umi" on your side of the field to the Graveyard to destroy all cards on the field except this card.]. This is the last Daedalus card I got, and now not even your “Dragon’s Life Infusion” will save you… Ryu: *Smiles*but what I place face-down…wasn’t “Dragon’s Life Infusion”, my face-down card…is “Holy Ejector” [Holy Ejector: Counter Trap Card - Remove from play 1 monster you control and 1 monster your opponent control. During the respective 2nd standby Phase after this card’s activation Special Summon each monster in its own side of the field.]. This will take your Dragon and mine from the field… Oda: No! Impossible... Asuka: Yaaay Ryu-kun!!!Ben: That was awesomeIwao: He actually did it…*smirks*…I knew it…he can’t lose…except… Iwao left… Ryu: Now it is my turn…Ryu: My last card is “Monster Reborn”…With this I Special Summon “Golden Knight Dragon” from my graveyard. (ATK 2000)…Last attack…direct to his Life Points. Golden Tornado!!! Golden knight dragon attacks Oda….and his Life points becomes 0 (1400-2000) Oda falls on his knee and Ryu goes to help her stand up. The students are euphoric; for the great victory…Among the spectators, the academy rector, applauds…while Oda, watch him conformed… Oda: It was a great match Ryu…I believe, you can do great things here at academy…good luck from now on…and take care… Ryu: Oh...that sounds weird…but thank.Oda:hahahaha Ben, Rintaro, and Asuka go down to the platform and hold Ryu in their hands, and congratulate him, everyone was happy…but Iwao has met again with Tenma, and seems like they finished discussing the plans, Tenma goes again…and Iwao stands smiling… Iwao: So that was what he wanted…I must admit I wanted that too…the time has come…Now I have to finish what we began once and for all… To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World GenerationRyu:That new student Tenma Ganter...he is a jerkBen: Yeah I kno, he cam't treat us like that and his is always with his butler and is just anoying...I'm gonna do something about himRyu: Ben no it must be dangerous.....Next time in Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation; Thunder, Ben's Turn [spoiler=[b]Card of this episode[/b]]Oda's cards/b]Star/Atk/Def| Level 8/3000/1200 Type/Family | WATER/Reptile/Effect Effect | This card can only be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 Level 7 or Higher WATER monster. As long as this card is face-up on the field, Umi cannot be destroyed. When this card is Special Summoned successfully you can add WATER monsters from your Deck to your hand whose Level are equal to the Released monster's Level. When this card is send to the Graveyard Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or Lower WATER monsters from you hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 your dueling remains superb. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Wow you read it pretty fast!!!!!!!XD Thanks...XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 I sped read it because I'm busy tonight. I'll do it properly tommorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 alright then...XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 you should have known such a long chapter cannot be read that quickly and thoroughly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Crap, I can't read this tonight, gtg, I'll read it when I get back from practice, k? Can't wait man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 I know that's why I asked in the first place...anyway..I'm glad you still followthis history...that mk me really proud..the same that Hyuugaaking... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 looks like you'll be getting two proper reviews later on, Ryuchan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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