☨βlack☨ Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 Okay, I finally read all 14 chapters. I will probably be doing your review in the YCM Review Thread, so I won't say anything until then. I actually like this FanFic. Never a dull moment. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 7, 2009 Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 your next chap coming anytime soon, Ryuchan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 for some reason I didn't received more of this threads alert on my msn... anyway chap 15 will be up today! I hope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 If you can't don't worry. I'll probably be too busy to review today anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Okay' date=' I finally read all 14 chapters. I will probably be doing your review in the YCM Review Thread, so I won't say anything until then. I actually like this FanFic. Never a dull moment. lol[/quote'] Oh thanks and thanks for advertinsing it on your Sig!I'll wait the review...anxious! BTW here it is Chap 15![spoiler=[b]Episode 15[/b]]Klara: So how is the situation up to now? Tenma: Well I must say that you are going to have visits soon… Klara: Really? That stupid of Dair lost already? ...I knew he was useless… Tenma: Indeed he lost…but that means that you are having fun soon…to bad that your sister has lost too. Klara: Lilly lost? ...that’s impossible Sisters Kinoshita never lose…. Tenma: It was a draw so she could wipe the floor with one of Ryu’s friends… Klara: Ha! ...By the way I never knew, what’s up with this Ryu guy what you have against him. Tenma was silent for a while. Tenma: That’s not your business, like you I’m just following orders from my superiors. Klara: Oh yeah? Tenma: Yes, now I guess you have to receive your visits it is just arriving…oh and Klara…don’t disappoint me… Klara turn off the screen where she was talking with Tenma and walked away. Klara: Why do you think I would do that? Turn. 15: Afraid to Fight, Painful Farewell. Asuka vs. Klara. Ryu is running thought the Stairs, he runs as fast as he can so he can reach Asuka soon. In that moment he sees some lights and feels the explosion of a concluding duel. On the other side of the tower Rintaro is involved by the combined attack of his and Lilly’s monster. After the light ceases, Rintaro in on the floor lying… as Lilly is on the other side of the room holding his shoulder. Lilly: This boy was really tough…he…who would think that I barely lose against him… After take a look through the window she sees somebody running on the other side… Lilly: Ah? Was there somebody running? ...no it is impossible…my eyes must be still tired for the duel… She then takes sit and stays near the window until she closes her eyes to rest.Meanwhile Asuka has finally reached 7th floor… which was empty. But Asuka was not sure. What she doesn’t suspect is that she not only was right. But she will find a terrible opponent. Klara: So what kind of stupid joke is this…I mean Dair looked pathetic…but you, you look even more pathetic than him. Asuka: What did you say? Where are you? Klara appear on the stairs…and walked through Asuka… Klara: I’m Klara and that’s all you need to know…let’s finish this now so I can’t get bored…or even better, I’ll see how much will you entertain me…I’ll make you lose by yourself…hahahaha Asuka: So you feel so sure about it? Klara stopped laughing and seriously answered Klara: Yeah, let just start this! Both girls shuffled their decks and put in each position Asuka:*I hope I can Stop her enough time for Ryu to pass through this room without being noticed* I’m ready, let’s start! Asuka and Klara: Duel! Both players LP are set on 4000. Klara: I’ll take the first turn. My first move is to activate my field Spell Card “Dark Cathedral” [Dark Cathedral: Field Spell Card - Once per turn, during the Standby Phase, the turn player can show his hand to his/her opponent, then his/her opponent chooses a Level 4 or lower monster among those card. The turn player may Special Summon that card in face-up ATK Position.] The room started to look like the inside of an old and dark church. Klara: So I thought I’d like to have a good Scenario for your defeat… Asuka:*Oh no this girl has some kind of insanity…* Why would you choose this place for battle me! Klara smirked. Klara: You will want to confess, when you face the fear of my gothic monsters. But let’s stop talking let’s keep dueling. I set a face down card and end my turn! Asuka: Ok now I draw and… Klara: The effect of my “Dark Cathedral” is activated. Now show me your hand. Asuka showed her hand. Klara: Oh you only got that monster. Well you can still Special Summon it if you want. Asuka: Sure! I’ll Special Summon “Command Angel” in attack Position! [Command Angel: Level 4/FIRE/ Fairy /ATK 1200/DEF 1900; Effect: All Fairy-Type monsters gain 400 ATK.] Direct Attack! Klara: That was really a precipitate! Now let’s make you pay. I activate my face down card “Nightmare Mirror” [Nightmare Mirror: Trap Card - Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Afterwards, discard 1 card from your hand.] With this card your attack not only don’t touched me but you will receive damage also! Asuka’s attack impacts on the mirror just to be reflected to her. Then her LP goes down to 3000. Asuka: No! What can I do now! ...I …I don’t know…why can’t I win…why I’m so weak! Klara: I guess It’s my turn…I draw. Now look at my hand I got 2 Level 4 Monster, choose one so I can Special Summon it by the effect of my “Dark Cathedral”… Klara Showed her hand Asuka looked at it trying to figure out which card to choose. Asuka: I choose the one on the Right! Klara: You will regret to choose that one! I Special Summon “Gothic Devil” in ATK Position. [Gothic Devil: Level 4/DARK/ Warrior /ATK 1500/DEF 1000; Effect: Once per turn you can guess the card at the bottom of your Deck, if your guess is right, add that card to your hand. If your guess is wrong, send that card to the Graveyard.]. Now according to the effect of my card ‘m able to guess the card that is on the bottom of my Deck… So I’ll ask for what I want to destroy you! My card is “Moonlight Memories” Klara took the last card of her deck and showed it to Asuka. The card resulted to be “Moonlight Memories” Asuka: Oh no, she guessed it! Klara: And that’s nothing compared with what will happen you now!Asuka: *I must be prepared for the worst* Klara: First I got to Summon “Gothic Wanderer” in Attack Position [Gothic Wanderer: Level 4/DARK/ Warrior /ATK 1500/DEF 1500; Effect: Once per turn you can flip a coin, and call it. If you call it right, switch the ATK and DEF of a Monster you control until the End Phase. If you call it Wrong increase your opponent’s Monster’s ATK by 200], then the card that will destroy you! I activate my Spell Card, “Moonlight Memories” [Moonlight Memories: Spell Card – Tribute 2 DARK Warrior-Type monsters you control. Special Summon 1 “Gothic Lord, Kiki Ono” from your hand, Deck or Graveyard] Then from the deepest darkness come the fear and the desperation. The night will fall as the light fades away…your ruin is in my hands. Asuka: What this girl is becoming insane! Klara: Please don’t ruin my fun…I’m enjoying as your face shows the horror and the bloody suffering…hahahaha Now meet your destiny, the executioner, the card that will introduce you to a world of Nightmares. I Special Summon “Gothic Lord, Kiki Ono” A pillar of purple Light appears on the floor. Suddenly from the pillar the form of a female Started to walk away the light and then it appears. Holding a Pair of rings, her eyes were cute but sad. The terror, according to Klara, Was that card. Klara: Is here! Meet the last monster you’ll ever see! [Gothic Lord, Kiki Ono: Level 9/DARK/ Warrior /ATK 2550/DEF 1550; Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of “Moonlight Memories”. As long as you control another Gothic Monster except “Gothic Lord, Kiki Ono” this card cannot be destroyed. Once per turn you can flip a coin, and call it. If you call it right, inflict 2000 Damage to your opponent’s Life Points. If you call it wrong inflict 500 Damage to your opponent’s Life Points] Asuka: You must be kidding that thing can make barely beat me in a turn? Klara: So you finally understand that you can’t win. And now let’s play. I activate the Special Effect of my monster. Let’s play on the roulette of death! Kiki Ono will flip the coin. And the result will determine whether you lose or not. I choose Heads! Kiki Ono flips the coin and as the coin rolled and fell Asuka and Klara looked at it. The result was HEADS.Klara: HAHAHAHA I knew it…poor girl not even the luck will save your butt. Now let’s punish you with all the power of my monster. Kiki Ono, use your effect on that girl. Give her your “Punishment Orb”! Kiki Ono joined her 2 rings and recited a chant that creates an orb of Dark Energy. When it was completed she throws it to Asuka. Asuka: Oh No! Asuka falls on her knees shocked by the impact she is about to receive, she was lost on that orb until… Michael: Asuka No! Suddenly Michael appeared and pushed Asuka away from the Dark Orb receiving it all. The damage inflicted by the orb throws him away. In that moments Asuka noticed that Michael is there and now is on the floor, then she noticed something that makes her feel pain and fear. Michaels’ Shirt was raged and below it she could finally see the bandages on his chest and the blood that now floods all along Michael’s body. Asuka: Michael!*Run towards him*Michael what happened to you! How could a hologram make you this why! Michael barely stands up enough to fall again on Asuka’s arms. Michael: This is not your fault I always knew that I couldn’t stay long in this world, but I meet you and I… Michael feels a pain that don’t let him speak. Michael: I don’t want to leave now… Asuka: But Michael, why, what’s all this about why are you so injured!? Michael: I made this to myself…*cough* I’m a warrior…a protector…a fighter will always... Be injured sometimes…It is just that I needed to come back to my place to heal myself….but I prefer staying here…for you… Asuka couldn’t take it anymore and started to cry. Asuka: No Michael no please don’t tell me that, please don’t leave me no! Michael: I wish I could…*closes his eyes*but I can resist anymore…I can’t stay in this world anymore…And the last blow was the last my body could take…Asuka *Cough* Asuka: No don’t talk, keep your strength to survive…to live! Michael: No…please…I’ll always protect you Asuka…even if I’m not here anymore…but now I have to… Michael’s doesn’t say anything…a silence surrounded the place… and Asuka’s last cry confirmed the truth that…. Michael had pass away…he died. Asuka: MICHAEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Asuka’s scream could be listened all over the building but there was nothing to do now. To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World GenerationMicheal:Asuka don't cry I promised you that I will always be by your side, and this is from now on, let's battle togheter, I will give my life once again for you, Next time in Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation; A Promise of Love and Sorrow, Battling for all the lost feelings., Let's do it! [spoiler=[b]Card of this episode[/b]]Klara's cardsStar/Atk/Def| Level 9/2550/1550Type/Family | DARK/Warrior/Effect Effect |This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of “Moonlight Memories”. As long as you control another Gothic Monster except “Gothic Lord, Kiki Ono” this card cannot be destroyed. Once per turn you can flip a coin, and call it. If you call it right, inflict 2000 Damage to your opponent’s Life Points. If you call it wrong inflict 500 Damage to your opponent’s Life Points Thanks Midnight Thief for your help!!!!!!!!This chapter is dedicated to you! 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ragnarok1945 Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Now THAT was tragic for Michael to die in Asuka's arms. Still, I bet you plan to have him revived in a future chap, so I'll wait for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted March 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 I totally forgot about this....BUMP...to keep it alive...until next update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 when r u continiuing this?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted April 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 I thought nobody read this anymore.....!!!!! Well I've been busy in this weeks...studying for exams and stuff.....I promise 1 or 2 New chaps for the weekend.... I'm changing some stuff....maybe extending the story for the first season a little so I can have more chaps..... By the moment I'll have to reorder some things and then the thrilling conclusion for the chapters going so far....! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I thought nobody read this anymore.....!!!!! Well I've been busy in this weeks...studying for exams and stuff.....I promise 1 or 2 New chaps for the weekend.... I'm changing some stuff....maybe extending the story for the first season a little so I can have more chaps..... By the moment I'll have to reorder some things and then the thrilling conclusion for the chapters going so far....! I was kicked for a month, that's why I couldn't review. Now I will be reviewing once again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Yay you are back....I'll have a new chapter soon...just as I finish my exams Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 that's good. Can I expect one in like two weeks or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Problaby 1 per week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 even better for me, I'll look forward to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Episode 16 is finally up. [spoiler=[b]Episode 16[/b]]A few hours ago. Iwao is walking outside the Graveyard; he was visiting the tomb of his old friend Hans after his duel with Ryu. Iwao:*A friend, is hard to believe. How I could forget what it means to have a real good friend? Hans, I denied all the memory of our friendship, and the good and bad time we’ve been through. * Iwao remembered the moment he met Hans, the day they became friends…and after that the day when he died. Iwao stopped on a bridge after remember that, and looked at the sky. Iwao: Now….I feel good again…for some reason…I feel relieved. Iwao then take his “Cyber Vorse Raider” from his pocket….and looked at it. Iwao: Well pal’ we did it well in the duel…now we got to…. Suddenly Iwao heard some familiar voices coming from the street under the bridge. He hides himself to not be seeing but still watches. Ryu: Come on! We have a few hours up to the demolition, we got to stop Tenma. Iwao comes from where he was hiding wondering what happened to them… Iwao: What was all that about? *thinking* mmmm …maybe…. Iwao Started running to Ryu’s Uncle Shop Turn. 16: A Promise of Love and Sorrow, Battling for all the lost feelings. Asuka: *What a beautiful feeling….love….met someone that makes you feel happy whenever he smiles you, whenever he talks to you whenever he kiss you….the love is like a magical sword that kills all the pain from outside…but it can also hurt…. *Asuka: Haseo-kun! Haseo-kun! A boy called Haseo….3 years older than Asuka...he is the son of one of Asuka’s father friends an Asuka has fall in love with him…is the first time she does….so is now a confusing feeling…she is only a 12 years old girl… Asuka: Haseo-kun! Haseo-kun!Haseo stop walking and turned to Asuka. Haseo: Asuka-san?...I didn’t see you running behind me…what happen? Asuka: Ah…me, I mean I…Haseo-kun I got to tell you something to tell you… Haseo: Hey you are really nervous what happen? Asuka is blushed Asuka: Haseo I…Li..k Suddenly girls appeared from behind and take Haseo’s arm Yakama: Haseo-kun….why are you so late the movie is starting… Haseo: Oh sorry I was talking to Asuka, by the way Asuka she’s Yakama My girlfriend…. Asuka: OH I see….well gotta go bye! Asuka started to run as she cries…* Asuka: I was rejected and that hurt....Love can be painful too….but more painful is to find Love and lost it. Asuka seems to wake up from a dream, and she find out the truth again she was still holding Michael’s body in her arms. Klara: So you finally reacted… Asuka turned her head to Klara still not understanding what happened. Klara: Look, are you ok? I didn’t mean to do that but I don’t understand why your boyfriend is death if I only. Asuka: Death…..he….is death…. Asuka cries again…. Asuka: Michael….why….why…. Asuka then looks at Michael’s face and use his hand to clean the blood on his face…. Asuka: You look so happy even now that you are gone….but why…why did you leave me. I need you here now….I won’t be happy anymore….why…. Klara: Hey we can just finish this if you want but…I guess is better that I call Tenma to tell him about this…I just. Asuka: No… Klara turned back again and looked Asuka standing again and taking the cards she left on the floor. Asuka: My heart is broken and the pain is too hard to keep fighting but, I’m here to help my friends and if I ever surrender…. Asuka’s voice breaks again but she shouts as she cries… Asuka: I will never forgive myself I don’t fight until the end….and Michael’s sacrifice would meant nothing.... Klara was surprised….but accept them challenge. Klara: So come for it is your turn now! Asuka draw his card and looked back to Michael… Asuka: Then I my turn now….Fist of all I will remove this dark battle field….I don’t want Michael in darkness anymore…..I activate the field Spell “Paradise Gate” [Paradise Gate: Field Spell Card – Increase the ATK of all Fairy-Type monsters by 200. Once per turn, you can reduce all the Battle Damage inflicted to you by 1 of your opponent’s monsters to 0.].The Dark Cathedral is destroyed and a golden gate appeared behind Asuka. Asuka: Now I’m sure that Michael will be received in heaven….now we are in heaven. I end my turn setting 2 face-down cards and that’s all. Your turn! Klara: That’s exiting I must admit that I loved battling you…But that doesn’t mean you have a chance to win…Your are 1000 LP left….I will blow them up just with my Kiki-Ono’s effect …Go for it… “Punishment Orb”! Asuka: Yes you got head again…That’s what I needed! Klara: What? Asuka: I activate “Angel’s Ring” [Angel’s Ring: Continuous Trap Card: Active when your opponent inflicts Damage to your Life Points other than Battle Damage. Negate that effect and Increase your Life Points by half the Damage prevent this way. You can only use this effect once per turn.] Klara: So you just dodge my final Movement with a cheap trick ah? Asuka’s LP goes up to 2000. Klara: Seriously this is Nothing I can fight again……It is just that this game is becoming more interesting…and…I will make this even more interesting now Just wait and see! Asuka: *I’ll stand as much as I can Ryu…just reach the top and beat Tenma…it is all up to you now.* Asuka’s top deck shone a little…but none of the girl noticed it… Meanwhile…. Ryu has reached the 14th floor. The last floor before Tenma father’s office. Ryu: I made it; I made it and just got 30 minutes left….I just gotta get through this last floor and… Voice 1: Oh come on you believed it was going to be that easy? Voice 2: He…I guess this kids today never understand that games can only be won when you make the correct moves… Ryu: Ah! Damn it…what is this… You are 2 guys White: Correct we are the Duelist Duo…White and Black…and we protect this last floor… Black: Yeah we didn’t expect someone could ever reach this floor. But I guess something was wrong with Tenma guesses Right Brother? White: You are right but as I tell we are the correct move…the last wall between this kids and Tenma’s Office. Ryu: You 2? Black: Yes…that means you have to beat us…before you can go further…hahaha Ryu: Damn it I got not time to duel twice…What should I do?Black: You think you can duel us one by one? White: I guess this guy doesn’t catch the concept of tag duel…we only fight in pairs…it’s a special rule if you wanna go through us, we have to beat us both in a single duel…in pair… Ryu: What? I can’t…I don’t have a partner…you knew this do you? White: Hahaha correct and unless you can tag duel us You will never reach the last floor! Ryu: No I don’t have time! And my friends are all behind me…I can’t believe this I lost to Tenma just for this…No! … Iwao: That’s not a problem if you have a partner to tag with Right…? Iwao…comes from the stairs and stands next to Ryu. Iwao: After all Tag duels need 2 people to Fight No? Ryu: Iwao? What… Iwao: I’m doing here?...Long story…and you don’t have much time do you?...Let FIGHT! To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World GenerationAsuka:Just another turn...that's all I ask... some more time to help my friends. Klara: You last enough darling, it is time to Finish this once and for all, Next time in Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation; Yang.Terrible Confrontation, Miraculous Aparition [spoiler=[b]Card of this episode[/b]]Iwao's cardsStar/Atk/Def| Level 5/2350/1500Type/Family | DARK/Machine/Effect Effect |Each time this card destroys a monster and sent it to the Graveyard, you can inflict 700 Damage to your opponent’s Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Two thumbs way up, Ryuchan. Looks like this fic didn't decline the slightest bit during the month I was gone. You did great yet again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Yep And Now that my exams are even closer to finish I can put more effort on the Great tag duel that's coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Take your time. My exams are only fast approaching, which doesn't give me the time to spare much on here anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 Dude....bump. I hope this gets updated soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 it's been 8 days, hyuugaking. I'm sure Ryuchan just wants to get the academics out of the way first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted April 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 Correct I got an exam soon...but updates will be done by the weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 That's what I thought, Ryuchan. Fortunately I'm in the same position you are and therefore understand perfectly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 After a while I finally post Ep 17 enjoy it![spoiler=[b]Episode 17[/b]]Ben: So, I finally found you. Hidoru: Yes I was expecting you to come here. Ben has reached the 10th floor where he finally encounters Hidoru. Ben: I still don't forget how you beaten me before, it was a lose that make me think I was not good to become the successor of my father's dojo but, i guess it turned out to be the other way aruond...I become stronger in order to defeat you once and for all, and I have to admit....that I'm really excited this time. Hidoru: So as I, but don't you ever think I'm expecting a better duel from you this time, as I'm more than sure that your destiny is to lose once again.... Hidoru pointed to Ben. Hidoru: You are weak and your failure will be greater this time, when I beat you! Ben closed his eyes, then he just got his duel disk ready. Ben: You only talk but, come on! show me you are able to do what you said and I'll show you how I got my skills improved...just wait and see! Turn. 17:Terrible Confrontation, Miraculous Apparition Asuka continued her duel against Klara, the scales tells this is Asuka's final turn since Klara got the upper hand even against Asuka's powerful comeback. Ultimately she performed a combo that allowed her to lock both Battle and effect Damage launched to her, now is her turn and the card she is about to draw could change it all. Klara: Maybe you could Skip my damage effect once but my second card will reach you for sure. I activate "Dormant's Soul" [Dormant's Soul: Quick Play Spell card: Negate the effect of a card that increases your opponent's Life Points.]. This way you Life Points are 1000 instead. And since My battle Damage was negated I end my turn!. Asuka: It's my turn then! Klara: Maybe you could last a turn, but this game is mine no matter which card you pull now. Asuka: It is true, how can I possibly win....I know my deck well and I don't have any card that could stands against the powerful Gothic monsters...I'm lost already? I which I cold stand another turn...but I can't go on...I'm to sad to keep dueling I wanna be with Michael now I just... With her eyes closed she draw a card. In that moment a strange feeling cross her. She look to Klara but she wasn't there anymore. Still she was in her field spell. she looks to one side and the other but o one was around. Asuka: Where am i? Klara! Ryu! somebody help me! Voice: Don't worry you are not lost. I call you here to tell you something. Asuka turned again and still didn't see anything. Asuka: Where are you, who are you? why.... She suddenly realizes that the voice she hears was familiar. Voice: Don't be afraid I promised I'll be with you no matter what. Asuka: Do I know you? Coz A light coming from the golden gate Blinded Asuka, and an angel like being comes from it. Asuka couldn't see his face but something makes her trust him. Voice: I'm here to be with you coverer. Asuka: What? who? Oh my god is... A blinding Light took Asuka back to normal as she heard the voice of Klara calling her. Klara: Asuka! Are you OK? You are just gone! Asuka was holding the card as she cried. Asuka: I just got. The most beautiful thought painful feeling. He's here, with me. Klara didn't understands anything until she...suddenly noticed something missing on the room. Klara: Where? Where is the guy! Asuka turned back and sees that Michael's body has vanished. Still holding her card, she worries for Michael until she noticed that the Golden gate was opened. In that moment the same strange feeling come to her hand. Asuka: This was what he was trying to tell me. Klara: What? Asuka: I can't explain it but this card can tell the answer all the questions. Asuka looked the card an with a Smile she prepares to play it. Asuka:Michael. Asuka didn't speaks but put the card in the monster slot then a Shining Light appears from the Golden Gate. Then Asuka reacted. Asuka: With this card my heart has come back to me. Here he comes..."Mikel, the Celestial Archkeeper"! [Mikel, the Celestial Archkeeper: Level 6/Light/Fairy/ATK 1800/DEF 1800; Effect: When your Life Points are Equal or Lower than this card's original ATK, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. As long as your Life Points are Equal or Lower than this card's original ATK, increase this card's ATK by your current Life Points. As long as this card is face up on the field other Fairy-Type monsters you control cannot be target of Spell or Trap cards your opponent controls.]. Suddenly Micheal Appears from the card having being turned in an Angel. Mikel: I came back. Asuka, I have made you a promise, and I'm fullfiling it now. I know it may sounds wierd but that's the reason I was not able to being in your world to much time. Asuka: Micheal So you! Mikel: I'm a monster spirit, I came to this world in order to prevent it from a great evil that is coming but My memories were shattered when I faced another evil Duel Spirit. And I became partialy a human, like when you met me. But soon I figured out the truth of my nature after being attacked by some duel monsters. It is so sad that that happened after I met you. Asuka: Micheal...I mean Mikel...what are you saying? Mikel: I was supoused to be a warrior, I was sent to help here but i'm weak, and the most important thing for me now...is you. Asuka: Mikel...You are the most important thing to me too. I... Klara is stil watching shocked how the duel is turning out she cant believe what she sees. Mikel: But now. I'll have time to Explain Myself later, We have something going on, right. Asuka: Oh Right. Asuka was lost Lost in te happiness of having Michael back. Mikel: Ok by my effect I increase my ATK from 1800 to 2800, then I recieve a bonus from "Paradise Gate" (3000 ATK). Now Asuka as you command. Asuka: Ok, I attack your Monster Go Mikel! Mikel: Feel my attack, this is for Asuka, Paradise Light! Mikel raised his Sword Summoning a pillar of Light from the Golden gate that tooks "Gothic Lord, Kiki Ono" and some of Klara's Life Points away. Asuka: Is your turn. I can doo anymore now. "But I can Believe this Mikel is back" Klara was on her knee, with a Smile on her face. Klara: Asuka I got to say It I loved to play with you, so Thank you for this good duel, but it is being time to finish it. I activate my spell card "Necromance Tuning" with this card I can Summon a Sychro monster by romving all my gothics in the Graveyard. Now feel fear of the most powerful Gothic monster! Synchro Summon "Gothic Raven Maiden" [Gothic Raven Maiden: Level 9/Dark/Fiend-Synchro/ATK 3000/DEF 0; Effect:1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more Non Tuner Monster(s)This card cannot be destroyed in battle (Damage calculation is applied normally). Once per turn, you can flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, you can look through your opponent's Deck for a Monster Card and Special Summon it on your opponent's side of the field in face-up Attack or Defense Position. The Summoned Monster cannot declare an Attack or change its Battle Position. If the Summoned monster is destroyed by this monster, it is Special Summoned to your side of the field until the end of the Battle Phase you destroyed the monster Special Summoned. THe Summoned monster is sent to the bottom of your opponent's Deck instead of the Graveyard when destroyed. If you call it wrong, your Life Points are halved.], and Finally I equip it with "Gothic Scythe!" By Equip this to My monster I can Send 1 card from my hand to the Graveyard and inflict damage to your Life Points equal to half my monster's ATK. Now I Win, Gothic Raven Maiden! Use the Gothic Scythe and Finish her! Gothic Raven Maiden Rapes the Paradise with her scythe and a powerfull Darkness Blast go to ASuka. Mikel: Asuka! Mikel Covers Asuka with his wings protecting her from the Scyhtes Attacks. But Asuka's LP still goes down to 0, so she lost the duel. Mikel: I will always be by your side now. And I will always protect you. As Asuka's duel disk turned off by having her Lp at 0 Mikel's figure disspaears, but Asuka holds his card in his hand and kisses it happilly, Klara gives her a hand to get up and togheter they leave the room. To be continued. Next on: Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World GenerationBen: I promised myself not to lose against someone like you anymore I'm more than sure I got the necesary to face you and beat you once and for all, the real question here is, are you aredy to face me again? Next time in Yu-Gi-Oh! : New World Generation; Cry of the Thunder. Thunder King Dragon - Rai Mahou! [spoiler=[b]Card of this episode[/b]]Asuka's cardsStar/Atk/Def| Level 6/ATK 1800/DEF 1800Type/Family | Light/Fairy/Effect Effect |When your Life Points are Equal or Lower than this card's original ATK, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. As long as your Life Points are Equal or Lower than this card's original ATK, increase this card's ATK by your current Life Points. As long as this card is face up on the field other Fairy-Type monsters you control cannot be target of Spell or Trap cards your opponent controls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Nice card of the ep, and excellent dueling as always. You're doing great, Ryuchan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted May 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Oh thank you it is supoused to be what Michael....Now Mikel looks like XD New chapter soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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