arkel Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 IMAGE CREDIT: GBlastMan, Rate, fix, discuss! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshiman™ Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 burry imagebad ocg6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkel Posted January 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 How is it bad OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haitaku Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 Not that bad, but not good. There are a few errors, and you should re-write the card: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. If this card is targeted by a card effect while it is in the Graveyard, destroy all monsters you control and Special Summon this card to your side of the field." If I'm right about my OCG (I haven't gotten bad ratings for it), This would be better.And yes, you should find a new image. No offense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If a card effect targets this card in your Graveyard while you control 1 or more monster(s), Tribute all monsters you control to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. Pics blurry. Useful effect though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkel Posted January 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 Not that bad' date=' but not good. There are a few errors, and you should re-write the card: [b']"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. If this card is targeted by a card effect while it is in the Graveyard, destroy all monsters you control and Special Summon this card to your side of the field."[/b] If I'm right about my OCG (I haven't gotten bad ratings for it), This would be better.And yes, you should find a new image. No offense. Well, there are a few reasons why I didn't do that. With the current effect, he can be Summoned by Mausoleum of the Empire. With yours, he can't. Second, with your effect I find him too broken because it doesn't require you to have a monster out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinKazama Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 burry imagebad ocg6/10 agreed with the blurry pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkel Posted January 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 Card update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted January 11, 2009 Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 [align=center]OCG Fix This card can only be Summoned by it's own effect. If this card is targeted by a Card Effect while in your Graveyard, destroy all monsters you control, then Special Summon this card. Bolded = Change to that Phrase (In other words, change your whole OCG. Picture - 1/2OCG - 1/2Balance - .5/2Uniqueness - 1/2Total - 3.5/6Grade - C A nice try, but honest Underpowered and not worth summoning at all. Try a bit harder next time ^-^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted January 11, 2009 Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 Probably 6.5/10 because of the bad OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkel Posted January 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 [align=center]OCG Fix This card can only be Summoned by it's own effect. If this card is targeted by a Card Effect while in your Graveyard' date=' destroy all monsters you control, then Special Summon this card.[/b'][/align] I think I see a few OCG errors in your own correction. "It's" should be "its". "Card Effect" should be "card effect". The word "and" should come before "then Special Summon this card". It's not too underpowered because now D.D. Crow becomes a costless Premat. Anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkel Posted January 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 CARD UPDATE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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