Flavour Posted January 12, 2009 Report Share Posted January 12, 2009 [align=center]Welcome to Flavour's Splice Gallery! This is where I will post my Pokésplices for people to see. Remember, I am still new to splicing, and I hope to get better at splicing from this, so please give your CnC! This gallery will be updated every 1 or 2 days (mostly 2). You can also make a request for a splice, and I'll give it a shot. So, without further ado, my splices! [spoiler= Day 1] Squirmandersaur (Bulbasaur + Charmander + Squirtle) [spoiler=Day 2] Cyndileta (Chikorita + Cynaquil + Totodile) [spoiler=Day 3] Treekorip (Treecko + Torchic + Mudkip) [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted January 12, 2009 Report Share Posted January 12, 2009 start over looks terrible. no offense but my partner digimon in my sig looks better than that. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firefly Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 It's OK I guess. It's better than I could do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Splice 2 is up. Could you tell me the errors please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 This is out of the ordinary of what I usually see here. Your problems: On the first one the border of the bulb is the wrong color blue.But the biggest problem is that you have done so much shading, that the border doesn't show. Under the head you shaded with the same color blue that you used to color the border, basically covering the border. There is basically too many blue borders. Start over completely. On the second one however, you did a pretty good job. The only problems are that, again, you used too much of the same color border on the Totodile head. Add some black borders and you should be fine. There is also the glaring fact that you left some blue on the Totodile head. That needs to be fixed.That basically it, except maybe add some different color borderings on the flames?That's it. Keep it up! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 The 2nd one's head looks unnatural. The flame also doesn't work very well. It should look like it's coming from the pokemon's back. You have it looking like the fire starts in 1 small unit, then spreads out, which doesn't look good. no offense but my partner digimon in my sig looks better than that. No, no it doesn't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Thanks for commenting, guys! I will work on them, and update soon. To start, I'm doing al the Starters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Splice 3 is up! Updating soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 The 1st one is somewhat okay, the rest suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 On day 3, not only are the 'ears' attached worng, you have red around the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted January 19, 2009 Report Share Posted January 19, 2009 Day 1's needs work. The bulb on the head is crooked and doesn't look good. It's a good idea though and just needs the proper work done to make it good. Another issue is how you have the shell and tail. You have the tail over the shell, but the tail should be coming out from the shell. That brings up another problem, why is it yellow?. The borders are also messed up. The bulb has nothing but black borders, everything has light borders elsewhere. This basically messes up the light source and shading. You need to pretend there is a bright light in the top right corner, and image how it would color everthing. somethign like the blub would be really well lit, so it wouldn't have dark borders. The tail though would have darker borders since it's in the back and what not. Day 2's is better, but not perfect. The flames seem really messed up, probably because the border on it. The head seems a little too pale. The chin and the neck seem to be a little off on the right side. Day 3's has that red around the ey issue. The texture of the tail is off, so it looks really off, also it's size is off. On the right fin on the head has this black border on it that doesn't quite work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted January 19, 2009 Report Share Posted January 19, 2009 They are not your best work 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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