Jace Beleren Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 hey its been a while since the last time i made a card here: As long this card remains face-up DEF position on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a Spell card is activated, this card can Attack your Opponent's Life Points directly As long this card remains face-up ATK position on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a Trap card is activated, when this card is sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, Special Summon 1 LIGHT Monster from your hand to the field As long this card remains face-up on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a your opponent Summons a monster, this card cannot be attacked if there is another LIGHT monster on your field plz rate and comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 My recommendations: As long this card remains face-up DEF position on the field, increase your Life Points by 500 each time a Spell Card is activated, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. As long this card remains face-up in ATK position, increase your Life Points by 500 each time a Trap Card is activated. Wen this card is sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, Special Summon 1 LIGHT Monster from your hand to the field. As long this card remains face-up on the field, increase your Life Points by 500 each time your opponent Summons a monster. This card cannot be attacked if there is another LIGHT monster on your field Not too sure what you can do with this though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 hey its been a while since the last time i made a card here: As long this card remains face-up DEF position on the field' date=' increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a Spell card is activated, this card can Attack your Opponent's Life Points directly [img']http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/9563/191438dt1.jpg[/img] As long this card remains face-up ATK position on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a Trap card is activated, when this card is sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, Special Summon 1 LIGHT Monster from your hand to the field As long this card remains face-up on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a your opponent Summons a monster, this card cannot be attacked if there is another LIGHT monster on your field plz rate and comment [align=center]OCG Fix - Child of the Full Moon-Tear As long this card remains in face-up Defense Position on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a Spell card is activated. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Bolded = Change/Add that phrase. Picture - 1.5/2OCG - 1/2Balanced - 1.5/2Uniqueness - 2/2Total - 5/8Grade - C+ Might I suggest decreasing the Life Point recovery to about 600? OCG Fix - Child of the Full Moon-Raven As long this card remains face-up on the field in Attack Position, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a Trap card is activated. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, Special Summon 1 LIGHT Monster from your hand. to the field Bolded = Change/Add that PhraseItalic = Remove that Phrase Picture - 1/2OCG - 1/2Balanced - 2/2Uniqueness - 2/2Total - 6/8Grade - B+ A nice try. Again, Try decreasing the Life Point recovery. OCG Fix - Child of the Full Moon-Serenity As long this card remains face-up on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a your opponent Summons a monster, this card cannot be attacked if there is another LIGHT monster on your field. Bolded = Change/Add that PhraseItalic = Remove that Phrase Picture - 1.5/2OCG - 2/2Balanced - 1/2Uniqueness - 2/2Total - 6.5/8Grade - B+ Nicely done all around. +1 Rep for you.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 *slaps self* didn't see he said DEF position and I feel like a noob compared to that reviewMy rating: 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoitZBRiAn21 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 THERE PRETTY COOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 *slaps self* didn't see he said DEF position and I feel like a noob compared to that reviewMy rating: 8.7/10 I can't believe I keep screwing up on my math. I fixed my review and changed the grades accordingly. Still an overall nice set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 thanks guys for your comments any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 As long this card remains in face-up Defense Position on the field, increase your Life Points by 1000 each time a Spell Card is activated. This card can attack your opponent directly ( no need for Life Points ) the same goes to the other card I personally dont like those picseffects are not bad, ocg needs alot of work 6/10 srry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 1st and 3rd ones are good 2nd one isnt really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Thank 4 the commentbump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 well OCG errors pointed out so 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 thanx 4 your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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