Instinct Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 I haven't really made any single cards since July so I may be a bit rusty on the OCG. It has a small effect but I hope you like the general idea. [align=center] When this card is Summoned, place 1 Counter on each Monster Card Zone that is not occupied. This effect can only be activated if both players control at least 1 monster. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, neither player can summon a monster on the selected zones. During your Standby Phase, both players can Tribute 1 monster to remove 1 Counter on their side on the field.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Good job only 2 OCG errors your side of the field=your fieldsummoned=Summoned good effect. Interesting pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 OCG has been pointed out and this card unlocks new possibilities :D good work!9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 i think the tribute should be discard, if you summon this card when opponent has no monsters, the other player can never summon a monster to the field, and thus cannot tribute to make a empty space Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Good job only 2 OCG errors your side of the field=your fieldsummoned=Summoned good effect. Interesting pic. 9/10 Wrong. It's your side of the Field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 The OCG errors are pointed out was the correct fixing if you check the OCG thread then you will see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Good job only 2 OCG errors your side of the field=your fieldsummoned=Summoned nice card, but I think you should add some cost to it, or changing Tributing to discarding, cuz if the opponent had no monsters on the field when u summon this card , ..... u know the rest ^_^ suggestion:When this card is Summoned while your opponent controls more monsters than you ............ continue the rest of the effect. you have many ways to make it sounds original, but it's your card afterall ^^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 I suggest stating the effect can only be used when both players have at least 1 monster to make the effect valid and workable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Unique, and balanced. Good job. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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