swanton_bomb2 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Here is my Elemental Hero Spark Neos. _____________________________________ It's effect: "Elemental Hero Neos" + "Elemental Hero Sparkman"This card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. When this card attacks, it attacks all monsters on your opponent's field. If it destroys 3 or more cards that your opponent controls, increase your Life Points by 500 per destroyed card. If this card was destroyed by:•Battle: Opponent takes half this cards ATK as damage to your opponent•Spell Card: Discard all cards in your opponent's hand.•Trap Card:Add the activated trap to your hand instead of the Graveyard.•Monster Effect: Opponent skips his/her next Battle Phase. Rate it 1/10 please! Edited. Is this correct grammar? I did find the thread, and I used hints off it, but I'm not sure if I got it though, is this card have the correct grammar? Thanks for the help all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 OP'd OCG thread Effects are actually decent 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swanton_bomb2 Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 OP'd OCG thread Effects are actually decent 5/10 OP'd? OCG? What they stand for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 over powered. Make the positive effects balanced with negative effectsOCG: Official Card Grammar. See the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swanton_bomb2 Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 over powered. Make the positive effects balanced with negative effectsOCG: Official Card Grammar. See the thread. Thanks! I'll fix it!it may take a while though, I have to get off, so next time I'm on, I'll work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nishi-chan Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Hey kid, try this pic for your card, I think it's better(it seems less photoshopped) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swanton_bomb2 Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 thanks! I'll use it!where would I find the OCG thread? I can't find it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swanton_bomb2 Posted January 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 nvm the last thread, I got it already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 You know you can just update your first post instead of reposting...OCG FIXES:per=eachBattle: You opponent takes damage equal to half this card's ATK.Spell Card: Your opponent must discard their handTrap Card: Add the Trap Card to your hand instead of sending it to the GraveyardMonster Effect: Your opponent skips their next Battle Phase OCG is better but the effect really needs some balancing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swanton_bomb2 Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Thanks for the tip! I will change them. What would make the effect more balanced? Thanks for your opinion and OCG help. There's the improved card! How is it? I don't know what you mean by more balanced, crimsonwolf896. Please explain. But about the idea, what did you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 its ok6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nishi-chan Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 balanced means one good thing and one bad thing, two good things two bad thingsFor example, Elemental Hero Neos's DEF is 2000, and Elemental Hero Spark Neos has 1800 DEF. That counts has a bad thing, which means you can make his attack a little higher. Or just boost his DEF. The effect I'm not so sure... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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