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a deal with evil (modified)


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[align=center]OCG Fix

 

When this card is activated, destroy all cards your opponent controls. This card's activation cannot be negated. During each of your Standby Phases and End Phases, you take 500 damage. This card is unaffected by your card effects.

 

Bolded = Change/Add that phrase (In your case, change the whole thing.)

 

Picture - 1/2

OCG - 1/2

Balanced - 1/2

Uniqueness - 2/2

Total - 5/8

Grade - B

 

Picture needs to be better and you should study up a little on OCG. Although, yours isn't as bad as others i've seen. The card seems balanced at first, but then the fact that you take 1000 damage each turn makes the card underpowered. Especially since the effect is only a one time activation.

 

Overall, a nice try. Good job.[/align]

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