darklord33 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 This is my first card. Pls rate.[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 hmmmm... its a good idea and i like the pic (dart from ledgend of dragoon) but he looks like he should be fire (thats his element) and you should say "To attack you must pay 500 Life Points" a few more ocg errors but... hey oh wel for ur first card ill say 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooper scooper 3422 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 He should be fire type but everything els looks pretty good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wizzy Wazzy Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Nice card, change it to fire and it will be better 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darklord33 Posted January 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 re to force_flex: you can say: "unless you pay 500 life points this monster cannot attack" (look for example on "blue-eyes toon dragon") and i would like you to list the OCG errors because i don't see any. PS: you are right i will change it to fire ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 "This card's original ATK is equal to the difference between your and your opponent's Life Points." You need to specify it's DEF stats. Not bad overall for a newbie.I'd like some art credit though.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 "You must pay 500 Life Points for this card to attack".Simple, but it's Pretty Good for a Member of your Rank ^_^. Keep it up. Just remember to add more Complexity to the Effects ;)-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black mist Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 It was good for a first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 good try for your first card.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bwong123 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 very well done. wordin needs a little work, and like everyone else, fire attribute would b niceeffect is really original. keep up the great work8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Effect: The original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the difference between you and your opponents Life Points. You must pay 500 Life Points to attack with this card. Not bad at all, good for a first try anyway. Keep up the good work ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darklord33 Posted January 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 thx. it came over me a little later that i had to specifie the DEF. (it's DEF should be zero ;-)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 The name is badass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Good card for your first.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 500 Life PointsIt is OK card I guess... It has an original effect, but it needs to be more complex. ;)And like Kitty said, you need to define its DEF. But, for a first try - well done!7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
electrum2008 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 good just change to a fire attribute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doogle423 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 No,sorry pic look a bit off centre and bad quality too id give you a satisfactory 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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