Uchiha Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 i like it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Your opinion doesnt count.I'm waiting on some skilled people to come and rate.(no offense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitey Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 i don't know if i'm skilled or not, but my opinion is that you could do without the border and the render is kinda fading to the left...i dont know you you meant to or didn't mean to do that, but i don't like it. but other than that, it's pretty good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 The picture is scary looking. 0_oAlso, I think there are too many shapes and designs on the sides. I could definitely do with less.I don't know if I'm "experienced" enough for you, but that's my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 9/10 seems very creative Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Get rid of the border >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Ugggh... Lets see... Okay, the render is good, the girl looks creepy, the text is way out of style, the colors fade to much on the left and are to dark on the right, and the border could be better without. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Where do you get the c4ds I'm lacking good c4ds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 IF you didn't add text it be great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Seems topazed, the focal is in a bad position. Some C4D's are just popping out of nowhere. Text is not bad. Lightning is in a bad position. Compo needs work. Depth needs work. Flow is ruined a bit. Remove the border like Altair said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Ew. Not even close to your best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Actually the focal IS in a good position but the depth and flow is killed with the fact he whored Topaz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Actually the focal IS in a good position but the depth and flow is killed with the fact he whored Topaz. Focal is kinda too big but yeah I can see what you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 I feel as if it would be better without the render.You could have gone with a abstract look.Not a fan of the stroked text also.Render seems out of place =/Kinda looks as if it was shoved in their.Not bad tho not bad. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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