Jericho Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Made without a tutorial. Just some brushes from dA and a render from PR. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Yeah it does need some help. The text could be better. I kinda like the blending. For me the render is the best part of that tag. The background could be better. Use a different tut. Use one with like 30-45 or more steps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Yeah it does need some help. The text could be better. I kinda like the blending. For me the render is the best part of that tag. The background could be better. Use a different tut. Use one with like 30-45 or more steps. It says right under it that I didn't use a tut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Well then start using tuts and you should do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Yes it does need some help. The text could be better. I don't really like the blending. And the background could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 The canvas is to big. Try to get a good size fitting the render. I usually do a max size of 400 for width and 150 for height.The text is to big too. What program do you use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 =/ I will say, better than the Cube, but still needs help. -No text, pl0x. Trust me, stay away from text, for now.-Too monotone. There is almost no variation of color. -For your level of skill, the blending is very kickass. =D-No depth, from what I can see.-No flow.-No lighting.-Did you sharpen the render? It seems a bit overcontrasted or sharpened. =/ I agree with Zaca (Who, by the way, is the only one in this thread who deserves to CnC this tag), you need a smaller tag size. Read a few tuts. (My offer in your last thread is still there. ;D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 =/ I will say' date=' better than the Cube, but still needs help. -No text, pl0x. Trust me, stay away from text, for now.-Too monotone. There is almost no variation of color. -For your level of skill, the blending is very kickass. =D-No depth, from what I can see.-No flow.-No lighting.-Did you sharpen the render? It seems a bit overcontrasted or sharpened. =/ I agree with Zaca (Who, by the way, is the only one in this thread who deserves to CnC this tag), you need a smaller tag size. Read a few tuts. (My offer in your last thread is still there. ;D)[/quote'] This. I'm to lazy to write exactly the same in my own words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 For you 2nd this is pretty damn good despite what some other people might tell you :) The Only Advice I Have is: - Size it down a bit.- Get Better Text- Use C4D's- Photofilter, Gradient's, Etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 I love this, the Black can work well if you do some more colors with the same way you did that =D Anyway I suggest you stop using text for a little while =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Pretty good for your second go.First, don't bother with text at the moment, it's not easy to do right. The best thing to do at this stage is to get a 20px-ish brush, and brush about black/white on 2 new layers. Find the places that you want to be brighter and more in focus, and the places you want to fade out of focus. Then set them to soft light or screen/multiply and adjust opacity.Edit: Ignore Burst Legacy's last 3 pieces of advise until you have more experience and are comfortable with more basic stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Anyway I suggest you stop using text for a little while =/ I think my V2 has better text. Not great. Better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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