Elemental equipments

[Brule]

This is a post i made a few months ago, and had posted here, but without much sucess, well, i am trying again, see if you like it ^^

 

 

 

 

there you go, what yours guys think about?

 

images:

 

Earth Orb: http://farm4.static...._bc72fd1856.jpg

Fire Orb: http://wc3banlist.de/fireorb.png

Water Orb: http://farm4.static....e745d07d0_m.jpg

Wind Orb: http://exper.3drecur...vibrant_tmb.jpg

Elements Fusion: http://i38.tinypic.com/talx87.jpg

 

Edit - fixed some OCG and added new pictures

[Parting Shot]

The OCG could use a lot of work. First, attributes are in all caps when used in effects (EARTH, FIRE, WATER, WIND, etc.). Second, Spell and Trap are always capitalized. Monsters are never referred to as "he" like you did in the last one. Also, the last effect of "Elements Fusion" is redundant and unnecessary as each of the other spells protects the equipped monster from being destroyed by battle with those attributes. And, it's "by battle" not "in battle".

 

Nice effort, though ^_^

[xzMasteRzx]

Needs alittle work but it pretty good, especially for those old E-hero players

Score: 8.5/10

[Brule]

The OCG could use a lot of work. First' date=' attributes are in all caps when used in effects (EARTH, FIRE, WATER, WIND, etc.). Second, Spell and Trap are always capitalized. Monsters are never referred to as "he" like you did in the last one. Also, the last effect of "Elements Fusion" is redundant and unnecessary as each of the other spells protects the equipped monster from being destroyed by battle with those attributes. And, it's "by battle" not "in battle".

 

Nice effort, though ^_^

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fixed and added some new images, take a look now, and improved a little the fusion, this way you free the slots on spell field =]

[Brule]

returning to the site now, so bumping my old thread =)

[Donquixote Doflamingo]

They were quite good, nice effort though, 8.5/10

[Sidepipe]

Pics: 8/10

OCG: 6/10

Effects: 8/10

Originality: 8/10

Total: 7.5/10

Not bad!

 

As xzMasteRzx said almost a year ago (O.o), pretty good for E-hero players.

[Matico]

well the first 4 are around 5/10 and the larst 3/10

not realy impresed by them.

 

-Matico

[Brule]

Pics: 8/10

OCG: 6/10

Effects: 8/10

Originality: 8/10

Total: 7.5/10

Not bad!

 

As xzMasteRzx said almost a year ago (O.o)' date=' pretty good for E-hero players.

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thanks for the rating =) any tips to improve OCG?

 

@matico

 

please, tell me what you didnt like it, what is wrong with the card, to see if i can change

 

dont put just "i dont like random lower point here"

[ragnarok1945]

you're reviving one old thread there

 

the pictures aren't impressive at all, and neither is the OCG

 

6/10