Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Rates and comments are greatly appreciated. It's a bit wordy, maybe help me rearrange the OCG a little. Credit to ~Soulonfire11 on deviantART for the image. This is my newest trap card. Comments and feedback are appreciated. Credit to ~redwin12 on deviantART for the image. Here's my 1st Spell Card: Effect: Treats all LIGHT-type monsters as DARK-type monsters and all WATER-type monsters as FIRE-type monsters on the field for 10 turns. In order to negate the effects of this card on a selected card, the respective player must pay 500 Life Points. After the 10 turns are used, roll a die. If an even number is rolled, the state of all monsters stay the same. If an odd number is rolled, return the state's of all monsters back to normal. If spell cards were equipped to the monsters that were destroyed, destroy the spell cards also. Credits to ~xenoform on deviantART for the image. Effect: This card can only be activated if your opponent attacks a monster in attack-position. Negate the attack towards the selected card and redirect it to a different card on your side of the field. If your opponent's monster is unable to destroy the monster you redirected the attack to, your opponent loses 500 Life Points for every 500 ATK points the monster you redirected the attack to has. Credits to *BlondTheColorist on deviantART. I really do need a better name for this one, and I think there's some OCG errors. Credits to ~demaga on deviantART for the image. Effect: When this card is activated flip a coin. If you flipped heads, the duel is in Day-mode, therefore, increase the ATK and DEF of all LIGHT-type monsters on the field by 700. If you flipped tails, the duel is in Night-mode, therefore, increase the ATK and DEF of all DARK-type monsters on the field by 700. This card changes the time of day every 10 turns. After the 10 turns are up, return the monsters ATK and DEF that were increased by this card back to normal, and follow the opposite time of day effect on this card. If this card is destroyed, return all monsters that were effected by this card back to normal. I think it has some OCG errors, if you see some please tell me. Credits to ~lzuna on deviantART for the image. Effect: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the owner of this card must select a monster on their opponent's side of the field, the monster that is selected cannot attack for 7 turns. The card that is selected cannot be destroyed in battle. The only way the selected card can be destroyed under the effect of this card is under the effect of another spell/trap card. When this card is destroyed, the owner of this card can summon a monster from their graveyard that is 4 or lower stars in face-up attack position on their side of the field. The selected card that is returned from the graveyard to play cannot use their effect if it contains one. Credits to ~jeruki on deviantART for the image. Effect:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, whenever a player obtains 5 cards, the opposing player randomly selects 1 card from their hand and sends it to the graveyard. The cards that were destroyed under the effects of this card cannot be brought back into play under any circumstances. When this card is destroyed, both players must send their hands to the graveyard and then draw 5 cards. This card cannot be brought back into play after it is destroyed. Credits to ~expozure on deviantART for the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 A really good card, but could do without the Royal Flush text. Good picture. 9/10 =) PS, you need the artist's name for credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Thanks for the feedback, gave the artist's name, thanks for telling me. I'll take a look at your cards if you have any. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Theres an ocg error in the first one, but i wont tell you cause half of the fun is finding it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Yea I know I suspect an OCG error in the first one, it's so wordy in one part, I just can't find out what's wrong with it. It like makes sense but only if you read it slowly lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Theres an ocg error in the first one' date=' but i wont tell you cause half of the fun is finding it!!![/quote'] This is so lol I might have to sig it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Why thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe.King Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Bah. Boring.On the second one, what makes the exchange "fatal"?Well, they have nice pictures. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Well the "Fatal" part is the paying of 1500 Life Points, and that if that card gets destroyed quickly it was basically a waste of 1500 Life Points. Now I feel bad, is it like an embarrassing error? I reworded it entirely basically in the 1st one.Here's a present for you now: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 On the spell card there are alot of OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Yea I noticed it, I was changing it as soon as you posted Is this better? Treats all LIGHT-type monsters as DARK-type monsters and all WATER-type monsters as FIRE-type monsters on the field for 10 turns. In order to negate the effects of this card on a selected card, the respective player must pay 500 Life Points. After the 10 turns are used, roll a die. If an even number is rolled, the state of all monsters stay the same. If an odd number is rolled, return the state's of all monsters back to normal. If spell cards were equipped to the monsters that were destroyed, destroy the spell cards also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 more ocg on the 4th card, hard wording, also try renaming it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurohitsugi Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 all good except fatal exchange Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Fixed the 4th card up. chthonian I respect your feedback, but can you tell me what's wrong with it so I can try to improve it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Great cards My fav is "Opposites Soul." Wish I could find pic like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 try again on the fourth name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 try again on the fourth name How about now? If still not good, may I have some suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 thanks for the feedback so far guys, take a look at the others i posted, tell me your favorites if you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 No its a good name now and on Negation vortex where you say "7star or more monsters" try "Monster(s) with 7 or more stars" just a sugggestion, and how do you update posts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Click edit on the bottom of your first post and just add stuff in. Yea thanks for the rewording for that, it was awkward to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 no problem thanks for the tipalso, try getting a sig, its hard to find what you wrote cause its so small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Ok sure I will. I fixed the card up so you can try looking again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 New card added. Feedback please. Tell me if you see any OCG errors. Name suggestions also welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 They new one are cool. What about this for a name for vortex card- "Starburst Vortex" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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