Kenji_Blackwell Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 This is the first card i have made. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 It looked okay until I got to the effect part :P All should be capitalized and period goes at the end. Generally, fake types are frowned on especially if you're not creating an entire group of cards to go along with it. But barring I guess it's not bad for your first card. Based on this card alone it would basically just be used as a defender since copies of it give 2500+ def. Also you need image credits. Overall: 5/10 (Keep trying)Pic: 7/10 (Needs credits and try to use pics with backgrounds)Usability: 3/10 (Not so much)OCG: 6/10 (Not a whole lot to rate, but yeah.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP1991 Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Well, it's not bad for a first card. Might wanna add a real type, like spellcaster. And this could be the effect:"While this card remains in face-up attack position, all spellcaster-type monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF." Nice attempt. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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