6dmafia Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 this are my first monster so please be kind got all artwork herehttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-18348.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 A jester of sortsYou stand holding your courtsOver minions of capitol hill.In a bath full of blood,All alone standing still,Under God you can fire at will. SummonedSpell CardEnd PhaseDeckGraveyardMain PhaseSummonedDraw PhaseYou should keep it at the End Phase that you can summon the next level monster.Get rid of the "Once per turn" for the summoning of the next level.Capitalize the type (Spellcaster) and try to fix your grammar problems. Good concept, though you should tread carefully with this one because a concept like this can easily become overpowered (Notice how "Magician of Faith" and "Dark Magician of Chaos" are banned). For example "The Jester Lv 4" is broken. Not only does it let you recycle a spell (giving you a +1), but you get to dump 2 more spells from your Deck to add to your hand later and to thin your Deck out. A couple of the others might be overpowered too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 lots of capitalization errors but okay for your first cards6.27/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
6dmafia Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Fixed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 I like the concept. Try adding Spell and Trap support type cards (also make some effects less powerful). I'll rate 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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