Stagger7 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massacrewolf13 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 1. No Divine Beast2. Where it says [Genesis/Dragon(or whatever it is)/Effect] It should just look like this: [Genesis/Effect] Those 2 things aside, I give it an 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Really over powered, like the Ahrma's Guard who has 2100 atk, 4 stars and no bad effect, and ya, no divine-beast, the rest is pretty over powered because of their effects, all your cards have no drawbacks, there not balanced, and alot of OCG, You also need to work on capitalization. good pics though 1.023/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magicmasterp Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Not bad.I think the effects on your cards want wording better. I agree with Moogleknight about Arma's Guard- it should have an effect like 'destroy this card if you don't control "Arma" or another Genesis type monster.' Also Arma seems a bit weak to me. All that said though, the cards look nice so 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 Dude You did a good job, but i agree with most of the coments, you need to limit your cards. I made all of my monsters Devine, but i just liked the name & i had no idea what the meaning was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 OCG errors. Pics nice. No fake types. Make the Genesis a Sub Type for ex: Warrior(SPACE)/(SPACE)Genesis. Try NOT to use Divine-Beasts when possible Not bad for a n00b. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver The Hedgehog Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 9.9/ all exelent but that cross my heart is a pic of sasuke and itachi from naruto Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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