Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 okay so here it is revisedCard Text:This monster is also treated as Dragon-Type. This monster can attack your opponent directly. During your Battle Phase, if this monster is in face-up Attack position, it must attack first. When this monster inflicts damage to your opponent, the controller of this card takes damage equal to half this monsters ATK. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponents Life Points that would reduce his/her Life Points to 0, negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. I got rid of summoning condition, should I put it back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magicmasterp Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 I think dragon would be better- can use it for Dragon's Mirror then. I'm not sure if this card needs the limit on its summoning conditions as the other effects encourage VERY conservative use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacoby746 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 i think it should be a dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 This is a reply to magicmasterp true, and having 3000 atk leaves a large margin between it and zero, it wouldnt necesarily drop your opponents life points to 500 so you could just wipe them out, because you could end up with 2950 lp left and of course, your losing 3000 lifepoints, even if you go after a monster with it. i suppose it would be a good combo with a card that you pay life points to attack more than once and then "rainbow life" and bam youve got 10000+ lp and theve got 2999-lp i dont know how bout OCG or a rating? any one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Dragon, hands down! Thunder wouldn't even make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacoby746 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 instead of sacrafice say tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Thx Jacoby, ill go with what you people are saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Seems decent, 8.5/10 It sould be thunder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Fix: This monster can only be Summoned by Tributing 3 Dragon-Type monsters you control. This monster can attack your opponents directly. During your Battle Phase, if this monster is in face-up Attack position, it must attack first. When this monster inflicts damage to your opponent, the controller of this card takes damage equal to this monsters ATK. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponents Life Points that would reduce his/her Life Points to 0, negate the attack and end the Battle Phase.____________________________________________________________________________________________ Underpowered. It would have you lose in 3 turns or less. And stay with Thunder for the type. Dragons are WAY overdone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 it can be any of this 2 possibilities. just think about it: Thunder Dragon from TCG is Thunder-type, but it can be Dragon-type too (and this is just an e.g.). so it's your card, your choice Moogleknight. do whatever you wantand by the way: nice card: 10/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 It is true what DeMeNTed said about everyone doing dragons, im surprized there are any left, so this is what ill do, ill make it thunder, shorten up the effect, and add in that its also treated as a dragon.but im confused about what demented said about underpowered, because if if i increase the attack, ill lose even faster, what r u saying? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Lower the damage done to yourself in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Ok ill revise it again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 You messed up your OCG after that revision: Card Text:This monster is also treated as Dragon-Type. This monster can attack your opponent directly. During your Battle Phase' date=' if this monster is in face-up Attack position, it must attack first. When this monster inflicts damage to your opponent, the controller of this card takes damage equal to this monsters ATK. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponents Life Points that would reduce his/her Life Points to 0, negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. I got rid of summoning condition, should I put it back?[/quote'] Fix: This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. This monster can directly attack your opponent's Life Points. During your Battle Phase, if this monster is in face-up Attack Position, it must attack first. When this monster inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, the controller of this card takes damage equal to the ATK of this card. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points that would make it equal 0, negate the attack and end their Battle Phase. I might of switched something in there, but I think a lot of them are better of fixed like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Its been altered since then, and on the end where you say negate the attack and end their Battle Phase.its not neccesarilly during their battle phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Oh alright, sorry. Good card, 9/10. Like the effect and Pic. Edgy on the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 ya i agree, i couldnt get the name just right, suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Well the "Rai" part is fine, just "Thunder Dragon", honestly I just tried to make a dragon and my name was "Thunder Dragon" lol. It's very hard to come with another name for them imo. Maybe it can be like "Harpie's Pet Dragon". Make Rai a person and make this card like "Rai's Thunderous Pet Dragon". Something like that :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magicmasterp Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Now you've gone to the other extreme- its now rather broken.All a player needs to do now is attack twice with it, switch it to defence mode and blast away with some direct damage or another big monster. The loss of 3000 LP is not going to worry anyone (people sometimes pay 4000 for a Solemn Judgement). The original effect was only weak because of the limit on its summoning. Like I said before the original effect meant it needed to be used concervatively (or smartly). Here's my rating for each print:Current (broken) version: 2/10 (broken cards score very low with me)Original effect: 6/10Original effect without summon limit: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Hey good thought, so ill make a Raishould i start a new thread with him, or keep going withthis one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Good Question.... well I would make a new one since it's a new subject for this dragon now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 k then, lets let this one drop off the forums, how do you lock it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 No idea, I think mods can only do that. If you want to get rid of it, delete it is all I can say, then say in the next topic "Fully Updated Version" or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 k ill do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massacrewolf13 Posted January 19, 2009 Report Share Posted January 19, 2009 God knows that there are plenty of high-powered dragons in this world. I say make Thunder. This card is awesome, I give it a 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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