Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 I have never seen a Valkyrie-type card since I've been on the forums, so I made one. Feedback/criticism/ratings are appreciated. Image credit is to *Kuroi88 on deviantART. Effect: As long as this card is face-up on the field, negate the effects of all non-Fairy Type monsters on the field for 5 turns. Each time a Fairy-Type monster uses an effect, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 250. If this card cannot directly attack Life Points when their are no monsters in your opponent's control due to the effects of a trap card, decrease this card's ATK by 500 and you lose Life Points equal to 1/2 the ATK of this card at that present moment. Is it balanced? OCG Errors? Tell everything you think is edgy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Tiny OCG errors but great! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Thanks, if you got some time, can you tell me the OCG errors, or things you think are weird-sounding? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 It should be Fairy / Valkyrieotherwise excelent card8.5342/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Thanks Moogle. I was thinking about that too. Put it 1st because it sounds cooler :/. Anyways thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moogleknight Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 no pro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Hmm? Maybe im a big newbie but I don't get what that meant xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magicmasterp Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 He meant 'no problem'. OCG corrections: Negate the effects of all non-Fairy type monsters on the field until the 5th End Phase after this card is summon. Every time the effect of a Fairy type monster activates (execpt this card) this card gains 250ATK and DEF. I haven't bothered to correct the last part for two reasons- its a bit confusing and if it means what I think it does it is NEVER going to happen. If this part is suposed to be a mitigating effect ou might want something different like "if this card attacks your oppoent directly you take damage equal to this card's ATK". The first effect might want to be limited to normal summons only (otherwise its a bit broken). The art work is really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Thanks for the corrections, ill do that in a little bit. The last part basically means that if your opponents has no monsters on their side of the field and this card attacks them and then a trap card like Magic Cylinder or Negate Attack negates the attack. Then the card's ATK and DEF decreases by 500 and after your ATK is decreased, take half of the ATK it has currently and reduce that much from your Life Points. That might of been confusing too lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magicmasterp Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 It's very confusing. It might just be easier to say "This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If this card did not attack this turn, this cards loses 500ATK and you take damage equal to half the ATK of this card." or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted January 19, 2009 Report Share Posted January 19, 2009 The bit at the end where it says "present moment" is wrong, you should get that fixed. Also it's pretty darn OP. The negative effect is confusing and doesn't hinder the card enough to be balenced, the rest is great and the pic is awesome. 7/10 nice work :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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