Silent Omega Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Yeah but in this fanfiction he's a bad guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Movie? I think you mean fan fic. But it would be damn nice if this was to BE a movie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I edited it and i agree!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 New Characters again! [spoiler=Alexandra McPhilleas]Name: Alexandra McPhilleasAge: 9Personality: A bit mature for her age, serious and caring. Bio: Alexandra is a young girl from the village of Dernshire, Britain, in the year of 1506. She was once saved by the Demon Slayer Evangelis, and she hopes to meet her savior once again... [spoiler=Evangelis]Name: EvangelisAge: UnknownPersonality: He is protective, good-hearted and somewhat mysterious. Bio: Evangelis has received the title of Demon Slayer by the Angel Damías, as he is neither alive nor dead. His sword is called Dürnaém, or DemonBane, and is infused with the Element Powers, allowing him to control Fire, Earth, Air, Water, Ice and Lightning. He has a weak side for the girl named Alexandra... [spoiler=Chapter 18: The Angel Evangelis...][align=center]Chapter 18: The Angel Evangelis… The next day, Alexandra woke up of the bright sunlight shining through her window. She yawned and rubbed her eyes, as she sat up in her bed. "Morning already?" she sighed, as she stood up and got dressed. This was her first day as a 9-year old girl, and she was not going to waste it away! "Hope I will meet Evangelis today…" she thought, as she went down the stairs. Her mom was in the kitchen, as she prepared breakfast. "Morning, sweetheart!" she soothed, as she bent over and kissed Alexandra on the forehead. "Today´s your favorite breakfast! Wheat porridge and honey!" Alexandra smiled, as she sat up on her chair and grabbed a plate. Her mom laid up some porridge for her, and topped it with some honey. She ate it all, and as she was eating, she kept thinking of Evangelis, and how he had saved her life once…on that winter day…… ***** "A-AH! S-Stay away from me!" The creature ignored Alexandra´s pleading, as it closed up on her. She huddled into a corner, afraid to death of the beast in front of her, as it´s fangs dripped of saliva and blood. It lunged at her, and she screamed and covered her head. But then, a stabbing sound was heard and the creature yelped. Alexandra looked up. In front of her was a young man with a jacket as white as the snow on the ground, and he held a broadsword in his hands. He had plunged it into the head of the creature, as he yanked it out and cleaned it on the snow. He turned to Alexandra. "You shouldn´t be out this day..." he said calmly. "The werewolves are more agressive these times..." he turned his back and walked away from her. "N-No! Wait!" she managed to shout after him. "Who are you?" "My name......" the man shrugged, as he looked at Alexandra and smiled. "My name is Evangelis......" ***** "Alexandra? ALEXANDRA!" she was waked up from her dreams by her mother. "Are you dreaming of that young man again?!" "Y-Yes...mother." she replied. "I did. About the day he saved me." "Well, just stay away from him!" her mom implied, as she started to wash the plates and spoons. "He is bad news!" "Ok..." Alexandra said quietly, as she went from the table and out to the marketsquare... ***** Meanwhile, at a large cornfield, a portal erupted. The Neo-Legion had arrived at their destination. "Man, that was quite a ride!" Knuckles was panting, as he wiped the sweat from his forehead. "Where are we now?" "Let´s see......" Tails took up his Time-Line Reader, as it showed 1506. "We´re in the year of 1506, and it looks like we´re still in Britain!" "Then we have to adapt as good as possible..." Lucario said, as he noticed a pile of old clothes that were thrown out in the field. "We must be very lucky, or someone knew we would come!" "I knew..." Everyone turned around, and saw a white-dressed man with a sword on his shoulders. "Who are you?!" Chuck shouted unpolitely. The man just shrugged, as he looked at them all. "You may call me Evangelis. And I have foreseen a group of heroes arriving at this very spot, as foretold by the High Angel Damías." "Damías?" Lucario sharpened his ears. "The Immortal Guardian of Mankind?" "Yes..." Evangelis smiled, as he looked at Lucario. "You must be the student of Sir Aaron. I have always wanted to meet you in person." He looked deeply into Lucario´s eyes. "You seem hurt. Not physically, but emotionally. Your master, Sir Aaron......Where is he? I need to speak to him." "He´s......not here." Lucario sighed. "And I fear that he will not listen to you, since his heart now belong to Organization XIII." "Oh..." Evangelis stood up. "My apologies..." "It´s ok..." Lucario wiped out a tear as he said it, and then looked at Evangelis. "We need somewhere to rest." "Ah, yes." He picked up a coin bag and threw it to Lucario. "This should be enough for all of you to rent a room at the local Tavern. I must leave now. Farewell..." And with that, he turned around and walked along a cobblestone path that went past the cornfield. "Who was that?" Sonic asked. Lucario smiled, as he and the others put on the clothes they were given. "He is...an old friend. An Angel." Lucario replied. "Angel?" Tails raised his eyebrow a bit. "But that´s not logical! There is no such thing as "Angels!" "Tell me then why you just met one?" Lucario chuckled, as he and the others got out of the cornfield and onto the road, as they followed it to the Tavern... To be continued...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 More Characters! [spoiler=Morgan LeFay]Name: Morgan LeFayAge: UnknownPersonality: Sadistic, cruel and cold-hearted Bio: Morgan LeFay is the leader of The Witch Cult, a mysterious, medieval gathering of all the land´s witches. Since witches aren´t accepted in the world of Men, they have decided to have revenge on the mortals for burning several of their sisters. [spoiler=Lionetta]Name: LionettaAge: UnknownPersonality: Cheerful and optimistic Bio: Lionetta is the daughter of the Pixie King, and thanks to her small appearance, she is not easy to hit! She is Carmensita´s closest friend, and she is usually found sitting on her shoulder. [spoiler=Carmensita]Name: CarmensitaAge: Estimated age is 78, but she is pretty young for her age.Personality: Calm in all situations, caring and protective. Bio: Carmensita is one of the Merfolk, but she has abandoned the life in the oceans to walk on land. She and Lionetta are close friends, and even if Carmensita has chosen a Land-Dweller life, she still uses her native people´s magic abilities. [spoiler=Ignitia]Name: IgnitiaAge: UnknownPersonality: Short-Tempered, agressive and destructive. Bio: Ignitia is a member of The Witch Cult, and Morgan LeFay´s personal advisor in terms of warfare and demolition. She has a very short temper, and when she ticks off, she destroys anything in her sight as a way of calming herself. [spoiler=Chapter 19: Witches, Pixies And Angels?][align=center]Chapter 19: Witches, Pixies And Angels? In a giant, dark dungeon, several black-dressed women were mumbling and whispering to eachother. They had been gathered here for a certain meeting. Suddenly, a black-dressed woman rose up from a pedestal, and the others went silent. "My fellow sisters!" She announced loudly. "I, Morgan LeFay, Master of The Black Arts, and Arch-Enemy of Merlin, has gathered you all, the finest of witches, sorceresses and demon-kin, here to this very meeting, to ask of your aid!!" The other witches were clapping their hands. "For several decades, we have stood aside, and watched our beloved sisters and mothers being burned or drenched of these foolish mortals! They have defiled our honorable reputation, as they force us to survive by stealing and murdering! Today, that WILL end! We shall unite...and strike down these foul opressors, that, I swear!! We will show the mortals the TRUE power we possess!! WE WILL BE VICTORIOUS!!!!" At her last statement, she raised her hand into the air, as a purple bolt of magic erupted from it and exploded in the air like fireworks. The other witches stood up and cheered loudly, as they too released magical bolts into the air, and then exploded in different colours. Morgan went down from the pedestal, and away from all the noise and cheering into a small, dark room. "What´s wrong, Morgan?" A voice asked, and Morgan turned around hastily and pointed her finger at the direction of the voice. There stood a young, purple-dressed witch, and Morgan sighed in relief. "Nothing, Ignatia..." she replied, as she sat down and held her head. "It´s just this migraine, that no Frog Liver Oil or Snail Eyes in the world will ever take away! It´s frickin´ killing me!!" "I see..." Ignatia replied, as she started to hover, lying herself in mid-air. "You really should try and calm down with all these meetings and gatherings! It´s not good for your blood pressure!" "And that should come from you?!" Morgan snapped back at her, but was quickly reduced to bending over her desk. "Oooohhhh......this is killing me!!!" "What if Evangelis shows up, Morgan?" Ignatia asked, a bit worried. "He is the only one with powers enough to kill us!" "Don´t worry about that......" Morgan got her sadistic smile and evil glister in her eyes back. "This time......We will be prepared..." ***** "C´mon, Carmensita! I wanna play more!!" In a small glade, a little pixie hovered around a girl sitting close to a creek in a forest. Her blue dress was waving in the air, and her purple hair soothed in it like waves on the water. She looked down in the creek, and watched the fishes swimming in it. She smiled, as she stretched out her finger, and the pixie landed on it. "Calm down, Lionetta!" She giggled. "You will break your wings if you continue like that!" "Nu uh!" she replied. "I´m as healthy as ever! And I wanna play!!" She flapped her wings, as she flied up to Carmensita´s head and playfully pulled her hair. "Ow! OW!!! Let go!" Carmensita moaned, as she stood up and tried to catch Lionetta. "Get back here, you little prankster!" Both of them giggled and laughed, as they rushed out from the forest, but then, Carmensita crashed into someone. "Oow! Hey, watch where you´re going!" "O-Oh, I´m so sorry..." Carmensita stuttered, but then, she looked up. In front of her was Lucario, and he stared at her. "A-AH!!" She crawled back towards a tree. "A-A DEMON!" "Demon?! Where?" Tails looked hesitatingly around, but Lucario smirked. "She means me..." He explained, as he walked up to Carmensita and stretched out his hand. "But I can assure you, young lady...I´m no demon. And neither are any of my friends." Carmensita hesitated, but then held his hand as he pulled her up. "T-Thanks......" She stuttered, as she examined Lucario and the others. "Have any of you seen my friend? She and I were playing. She´s this tall..." She indicated the lenght with two of her fingers. Sonic couldn´t help but to snicker. "Really? THAT small?" he chuckled. "Well, I´m sorry, but we haven´t seen any gnomes today!" "She´s NOT a gnome!!" Carmensita said sharply. "She´s a pixie!" The others were quite shocked. "Oooookaaayyy........." Gohan scratched his head. "Well, sorry Ms, but I don´t think we have seen any "Pixie" around here." Suddenly, his jacket pocket began to move, and out bursted Lionetta, and she was carrying a small gadjet. "Oooohhhhhh!! What´s thiiiiis???" She said playfully, as she began to shake and toss it around. Gohan was surprised. "Whoa! What the...!" He suddenly noticed what the gadjet was. "HEY! Give me back my watch!" He tried to catch her, but she flew up higher and stretched out her tounge. "Na na na na naaa naaa! Can´t catch me!" She said mockingly. Gohan just smirked. "Heh...you´re not the only one who can fly!" He replied, as he started to hover upwards. Lionetta stared at him, as he got up to her and grabbed his watch. "I´ll be taking this back, thank you!" He said and stuffed the watch back into the pocket. "Woooooooww......." Lionetta gasped. "You can fly without wings!! Are you a wizard? Or an Angel without wings? I WANNA KNOW!!" She darted around him, looking for any magical spells or hidden wings, but found nothing. Carmensita was impressed too. "Amazing!" She implied. "Who are you for mysterious strangers?" "Well, follow us to the tavern, and we´ll explain everything!" Lucario replied, as Carmensita nodded and whistled down Lionetta. Both of them followed Lucario and the others towards a nearby tavern...... ***** Meanwhile, back in Dernshire, Alexandra was walking amongst the endless crowd of people. She was trying to find Evangelis, but so far she hasn´t seen a single sight of him. She sighed deeply. "Evangelis......Where are you? You promised you would see me again...you promised..." "Then why do you think I would break that promise, young lady?" A voice replied behind her. She turned around, and saw Evangelis smile at her. "Evangelis!!" She laughed, and rushed up and hugged him. "You DID return!" "Yes, I did..." Evangelis replied, as he hugged Alexandra and lifted her up on his shoulders. "How about you and I take a little walk through the city?" She nodded, and Evangelis smiled. He walked through the crowded mass, and into one of the alleys. "How did you..." Alexandra started, but Evangelis continued. "...Know that you like shortcuts?" He smiled. "I´m an Angel, Alexandra. Angels see and know everything. Besides...I heard you sigh when I started walking." Alexandra suddenly covered his eyes, and she giggled. "Let´s see if you can walk without seeing, Mr So-Good-At-All!" She laughed. Evangelis just smiled, as he continued through the narrow alley, dodging boxes, barrels and heaps of trash, as if he could see through Alexandra´s hands! "Wow......you really ARE an angel!" She sighed in awe. Evangelis put her down, and looked around. He seemed to be worried. "What´s wrong, Evangelis?" "Something is coming......" He replied. Suddenly, a nearby wooden house exploded and bursted into flames! "ALEXANDRA! Get out of here, NOW!!" He yelled, and pushed her away as he drew his sword. "B-But..." Alexandra started, but Evangelis ignored her. "GO!!" He yelled again. She quickly ran away, but something grabbed hold of her. "AAHH!!! HELP ME, EVANGELIS!!" She yelped, as Evangelis saw Ignatia holding her skirt. "LET HER GO!!" He shouted, as he swinged his sword. From it erupted a lightning bolt that charged at Ignatia, but she smirked and created a shield of flames around her, repelling the lightning bolt. The shield then turned into a dragon made of fire, as it roared and charged at Evangelis. His shirt was ripped off, and two, big, pearl-white wings emerged from his back, as he flied upwards and dodged the dragon. He was now in the same height as Ignatia, who cackled in a sadistic tone. "What ya gonna do now, huh?!" She smirked. "If you attack me, I´ll drop her!! Stand still, and I´ll fry your wings to a crisp!! Your choice, "Angel!" Evangelis hesitated, but then, he charged at Ignatia. "Pff! So predictable..." She dropped Alexandra, as she was sent screaming down towards the ground. Ignatia prepared for Evangelis to charge her, but to her surprise, he dived after Alexandra! "WHAT?!! MORGAN, STOP HIM!!" "Don´t worry, Alexandra!!" Evangelis shouted, as he got closer and closer to Alexandra, and stretched out his hand. "Grab my hand!!" She stretched out for it, but then, a purple blast of magic his Evangelis in the back, and he lost concentration. He turned around, and saw Morgan LeFay. "YOU!! ALEXA...." His word were drenched in a loud, bone-splintering splash. He looked down, and saw Alexandra´s lifeless body, drenched in blood, and her eyes staring into the air. Morgan cackled in a sadistic tone. "What is it, "Angel"? Lost a little pidgeon?" She smirked. Evangelis was furious. "YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!!!!!" He roared, as he charged Morgan with his sword... To be continued!!![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 finnaly!!!I was waiting for chapter 19!!Man i hate those witches....Man you really DO know how to make the most evil supervillains. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Yup! I have a really good imagination, and since today´s "Bad Guys" are kinda LAME in my opinion, I´ve decided that It´s my sacred duty to Raise the standards of all villains back to the Diabolical, Manipulative and Murderous Top where they belong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Somebody should've put a flag waving behind you while you said that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Lol! You think so? Well, I am kinda good to express myself, which I believe my Fan Fics are standing proof of! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 What you said almost made me cry[/sarcasm]LOL anyways can't wait till the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 More Characters!! Pretty many, huh? Also! A new, edited Profile of Lucario! [spoiler=Elizabeth]Name: Queen Elizabeth XVIAge: 25Personality: Rules with an Iron Fist, but is also gentle and caring. Bio: Elizabeth is the newly crowned Queen Of England, and she rules her people with wisdom and caring. She is a skilled swordfighter, but is also able to cast a few spells. This is her life secret, and no one exept her friend Cassandra and herself know about it. [spoiler=Cassandra]Name: CassandraAge: 20Personality: Childish in a stupid kinda way, but aware of the dangers that threaten her friends. Bio: Cassandra is a young Angel, and Elizabeth´s personal Guardian and friend. She is always willing to lend a helping hand, but usually mess it up because of her childishness. But she always makes up for it, and would never, ever leave her friends in danger! [spoiler=Updated Profile of Lucario]Name: LucarioAge: UnknownPersonality: Protective, kind-hearted and good-willed. Lucario´s Theme Song Bio: Lucario, the creator of both The Heroic Legion and The Neo-Legion, is now facing the greatest of tests ever exposed to him. To win back the love and respect of Sir Aaron, whose mind has been consumed by Organization XIII. He won´t stop at anything to reach his goal, and to once again feel the gentle touch of his beloved master and friend...... [align=center]Chapter 20: With The Aid Of A Queen... Up in her room, in the highest tower of Castle Burnstrang, Elizabeth looked down at the village of Burnglade. She sighed deeply. "The life of a queen today isn´t so hard as it used to be, like the days when my mother was queen. Ha! Back then it was always an endless line of anything from humble peasants that demanded lower taxes, to honorable warriors that swore the Royal Oath, and were then dubbed as Knights." She spoke to herself. She walked away from the window, and into her room. It was quite a beautiful room, which had walls painted in real gold and silver, the curtains in front of the crystal-forged windows were made of thin, red silk, and the bed had a madrasse filled with the softest of geese feathers. She walked over to her golden desk, and picked up a small, illuminating glass sphere. "Come out, Cassandra..." She whispered into it. "I have something to tell you..." Suddenly, the sphere began to glow, and then, a beam of light erupted from it, and darted around the room several times, until it stopped, and a girl with pearl-white wings appeared from it. "YIPPIIIE!!" She shouted happily, and stretched herself. "Finally I´m out! What´s up, Lizzie?" Lizzie was her nickname for Elizabeth. "Come with me..." Elizabeth said, as she and Cassandra went over to the window. "Look at them. Humble, yet hard-working people, just like myself. Do you see them ask of my aid?" "Eeeeeeeeeehhhhh......Nope!" Cassandra replied, as she hovered upside-down beside Elizabeth. "What´s that supposed to mean?" "It means..." Elizabeth looked at Cassandra. "That our people has learned to think for themselves for once. That they do not longer need to come dragging into my castle with stupid, ignorant questions!" She sighed again. "So much of a "Queen" I am..." She laid down on her bed, and looked up in the bed roof. It was a huge painting, filled with angels on one side, and deformed, twisted demons on the other. It symbolised the Ancient War, where the Angels triumphed against the Demons and Sinners. She didn´t really care of the war, but was intrigued of the fact that Angels and Demons existed. Cassandra suddenly hovered above her. "What´s wrong, Lizzie?" She asked. "You don´t look so well. Are you sick?" Elizabeth shook her head. "No......" She managed to smile. "I´m just fine, thanks for asking." She stood up from the bed, and in the exact same moment, two guards rushed into the room, and Cassandra disappeared with a "Poof" and turned into a cloud of white feathers. "M´Lady!" One of the guards were panting. "There are reports of witches in the village of Dernshire!! You must help the soliders there, M´Lady!" Elizabeth smiled. "Finally I am of SOME use!" She replied, as she took a sword sheathe from her desk, and strapped it around her chest. "Let´s go!" ***** "Hahahahahahahahahaaa! What´s the matter, Evangelis?! Can´t keep up?" Morgan LeFay was throwing purple magic blasts at Evangelis, but he kept dodging and slicing them. But she was right. For even if Evangelis was flying at his highest speed, Morgan was still one step ahead of him. "GIVE BACK ALEXANDRA´S LIFE!!!" He yelled, and lashed his sword at her. A lightning shockwave was formed, and it charged at Morgan. "Noctürnus...Silamencía...VOSH!!! Morgan muttered under her breath, and suddenly, her body dissolved into several, pitch-black ravens, and the shockwave missed. Evangelis cursed under his breath, and suddenly felt something behind him. He looked around, and saw Morgan lashing her hand at him. From it erupted something that resembled a thick, purple snake, and it charged straight at him! His sword glowed with light, as he charged the sepent and cut it in half. It dissolved, and Morgan cackled. "I´m sorry, sweetie...My job is to TAKE lives...not the other way around!" "CURSE YOU!!!" Evangelis yelled, and prepared to charge. But then, a fireball hit him in the back. Ignitia was homing in on him. "Ahahahahaha!!! Take THIS!!" She cackled, and waved her hand. Several, small pyreflies formed around it, and flew towards Evangelis. He dived down, and flew a few inches above the city road. The Pyreflies followed him, but some crashed into the road, and exploded violently in a fiery blast. Evangelis continued to fly, but the Pyreflies came closer and closer. High above, Ignitia was cackling sadistically and loudly. "AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!! Fly all you want, little insect!" She shouted at him. "But my Pyreflies will catch you soon enough!!" Suddenly, she saw a spray of water homing in on her Pyreflies, dousing them all! "WHAT?!!!! CARMENSITA, YOU B!TCH!!! I´LL HAVE YOUR HEAD FOR THIS!!!" Carmensita stood below, as her hands were stretched out. She looked up at Ignatia. "Not if I can help it!" She yelled back, and danced in a pirouette, as water strings surrounded her body. The water gathered above her head, until it formed a sphere, that she pulled back and lunged forward, as it erupted into a tidal blast, straight towards Ignitia! "Oh sh...!" Ignitia was drenched in the gigantic water wave, and Morgan yelped a bit. Evangelis smiled as he saw Carmensita, and turned towards Morgan. "Not so tough without your guards, are you?!" He shouted, but Morgan just smirked, as she charged up a purple magic blast, crackling with black lightning. "YOU SHALL FEEL MY WRATH!!! DIE, FOOLISH ANGEL!!!" She roared, and launched the sphere at Evangelis. But then, a blue energy sphere passed by Evangelis, as it collided with the dark-purple magic sphere. Both of them struggled, but the blue prevailed, as it breaked through the dark-purple one, and crashed upon Morgan. She yelled and cursed in pain, as she stared furiously at the one who had fired it. It was Lucario! "YOU!!!!" She yelled, and held out a warning finger. "YOU SHALL SOON FEEL THE WRATH OF MORGAN LEFAY!!" She floated down, and picked up the wet and unconscious Ignitia, and then, both of them disappeared in a black cloud. Evangelis smiled, as he noticed Lucario in front of him. "Lucario..." He said. "You certainly have a miraculous habit of showing up when you need it the most!" Lucario smiled. "I´m glad to see you´re unharmed!" He replied, as he hugged Evangelis. "Where are the others?" Evangelis asked, as he looked around. "They are at the Tavern. They were tired of all the travelling." Lucario said. "And when I, Carmensita and Lionetta heard explosions from here, we knew something was wrong." "It truly is!" Evangelis suddenly remembered, as he rushed over to Alexandra´s lifeless body. "Alexandra! Please, hear me!! ALEXANDRA!!!" She did not respond, as she stared lifelessly into the air. "YOU!" A voice behind them shouted. "In the name of Queen Elizabeth XVI, you are hereby arrested!" A woman stood behind them. She was dressed in a black-golden dress, and she had a sword with a golden handle on her shoulders. She smiled at Evangelis. "Scared you now, didn´t I?" Evangelis smiled. "Not at all." He replied. "It´s good to see you again, Elizabeth! How´s my little sister doing?" "Oh, she´s fine!" Elizabeth chuckled, as she suddenly noticed Alexandra´s body. "Who is that?" "It´s...Alexandra." Evangelis replied. Elizabeth rushed up to her, and put her hand an her throat. She sighed in relief. "She may still be saved!" She said, and pulled up a glass sphere from her dress. "Cassandra! Come out! We need cover!" She whispered into it, as it started to glow, and out bursted Cassandra. "TAAADDAAAA!!!" She laughed happily, as she swinged her spear. "One foggy town, coming up!!" And with that, the village was covered in a thick fog. "No, Cassandra..." Evangelis sighed deeply. "She meant to get us out of here!" "Oopsie!" Cassandra sounded embarrased, and with a quick lash of her spear, the fog lifted as fast as it had appeared. Then, her spear began to glow, and they were all teleported away... ***** Back in her dungeon household, Morgan was not pleased with today´s incident. "THAT ANGEL WILL PAY!!!!!" She roared, as she slammed her fists into a table, and created purple sparks on impact. Ignitia and three other witches around it were shocked. "B-But, Morgan..." One of the witches replied. "W-We had no idea that the Mermaid would appear so soon!" "And we do not know anything of that blue-furred creature, either!" Said the second one. "He may be a Demon!" "Or an Angel in disguise!" The third replied. "ENOUGH!!!" Morgan slammed her fists again, creating even more sparks. The witches were scared this time, and everyone exept Morgan and Ignitia left the table, murmuring about what that blue-furred beast could be. Morgan sank down on the table and held her head. "Uuuuuggghhh!!! This is KILLING me!!!" Her migraine has gotten worser, and she felt like her head was about to blow right off the throat. "We´ll destroy that blue-furred devil!" Ignitia said calmly. "We shall!" Then, she left Morgan alone, as she stepped out of the room... ***** In a blinding flash of light, Elizabeth, Cassandra, Evangelis and Lucario appeared in Elizabeth´s Bedroom. Evangelis hurried over to her bed and put Alexandra on it. "Lucario, was it?" Elizabeth looked at Lucario. "I will need your powers as well! She fell really hard, and I fear that my powers won´t be enough." "O-Okay!" Lucario stuttered as a reply, and Elizabeth smiled. She and Lucario went over to Alexandra, and Elizabeth cracked her fingers. She stretched out her hand over Alexandra´s chest, as did Lucario. Her hand was engulfed in ghostly, blue flames, and Lucario created a small, transparent Aura Sphere. Elizabeth brushed off the flames into the sphere, and it glimmered like a star. Lucario carefully placed the sphere on Alexandra´s chest, as it sank into her body. Then, her entire body glowed blue, as the light got brighter and brighter. Then, after about half a minute, the light faded, and Alexandra opened her eyes. "Uuuuhhhh......" She moaned, as if she had recently woke up. She looked around, and quickly noticed......"EVANGELIS!!" She flew up to him and hugged him. "You DID save me! I knew it!" Evangelis looked quizzingly at Elizabeth and Lucario, as both of them nodded. He smiled. "Yes, Alexandra..." He whispered softly. "I saved you...with some aid." He turned her towards Elizabeth, Cassandra and Lucario. "Go on. Say hi!" "H-Hi." She managed to stutter. "Hiya! I´m Cassandra!" Cassandra replied. "I´m Lucario." "And I am Queen Elizabeth XVI." "T-The QUEEN?!" Alexandra leaped out of the bed and stood straight up. "W-Where am I?" "You are in the city of Burnglade, and inside Castle Burnstrang!" Elizabeth replied, as if she was honored of the presence of a small, humble peasant child. "Please, accept the hospitality that I and my servants have to offer, and make yourselves at home!" "Thanks...but no thanks." Lucario replied, as he looked out the crystal glass. "I just want to return to my friends, to The Neo-Legion! Can you take me back?" He then asked Cassandra. "Okie Dokie!" She said happily, but as she was about to swing her spear, a black vortex formed, and out stepped N-Lucario and Sir Aaron! "Sir Aaron!!" Lucario´s smile turned into a frown, as he showed his teeth and growled. "Why are you here?!" He yelled at him. "I am here for you...old friend." Aaron replied coldly, although Lucario could sense a bit of sweetness in his words. It was...unavoidable, and almost alluring. He stretched out his hand. "Come with me, Lucario...and we may live as friends...Forever..." Lucario stepped closer and closer to him, as he reached out for his hand. "Yes...yes...just a little bit closer, and we will be together for as long as time itself endures!" As Lucario was about to grasp Sir Aaron´s hand, something slapped his hand. "Shame on you!" The voice was familiar, as Lucario woke up and looked beside him. It was Sonic! "Haven´t your mom ever told you not to take candy from strangers?" He chuckled, as his face turned from happy to serious, and he stared at Aaron. His smile turned to a frown, and he stared at Lucario. "You fool!!" He yelled, as he levitated backwards, and N-Lucario stood in front of him. "Kill them!! In the name of the Honorable Organization XIII!!!!" N-Lucario cackled sadistically, as he cracked his knuckles. "This is going to be fun!!" To be continued...[/align] Next Chapter: Destroyed Homes, Crushed Dreams! Coming Soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 Wow nice one, The best one I've read so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 21: Destroyed Homes, Crushed Dreams!][align=center]Chapter 21: Destroyed Homes, Crushed Dreams! N-Lucario charged up a Negative Aura Sphere and threw it at Lucario. He was about to dodge it, but then someone jumped in front of him and deflected it. It was Gohan! He looked around to see Lucario, and smiled a bit. "You Ok?!" He said. "Y-Yea...I´m fine!" Lucario replied, as Gohan nodded and turned into a Super Saiyan. He charged N-Lucario and punched him in the face, as he crashed into a mirror and shattered it into a million pieces. N-Lucario had cutwounds on his back, as he stood up, only to get smacked in the face again and get pummeled through the wall! He suddenly regained footing, as he landed in the corridor on the other side of the wall, dodged Gohan´s third attack, and kicked him hard in the stomach. "AGH!!" Gohan grabbed his stomach in pain, but quickly realised that N-Lucario was about to punch him, as he deflected his fist and counter-attacked. Both of them punched and kicked eachother senseless, but they kept on. Suddenly, N-Lucario turned into small fragments, as he dispersed and reappeared behind Gohan, and blasted him with a Negative Aura Sphere. Gohan crashed through one of the crystal windows and out in the air, but he quickly regained his sense and started to hover, only to find N-Lucario in front of him as he was kicked in the chest and crashed into one of the towers. From her window, Elizabeth, Cassandra and the others saw what happened. "Oh no!!" Cassandra was worried. "We need to do something!!!" "I think I know how!" Lucario replied, as he looked at Sonic. "Are the others here?!" "We sure are!" A voice behind them replied. There stood Tails, Knuckles, Naruto and Neji, prepared for a battle. "Good! Now, listen very carefully..." Outside, Gohan recovered, as he created a shockwave of body energy to clear the rubble from himself. He stood up and looked for N-Lucario, and spotted him standing on the wall of a tower. "You´re mine!" Gohan yelled, as he clasped his hands together. "Kaaa......Meee......Haaa......Meee......HAAAAAA!!!!!" He lunged his hands forward, as a Kamehameha-Wave bursted from them at N-Lucario. He just smirked, as he fired a Negative Aura Sphere at it, and the two attack collided and neutralised eachother. "No......YOU´RE mine!!" N-Lucario replied, as he turned into fragments again, and teleported behind Gohan and gave him a punch in the back. As he staggered, N-Lucario followed up by kicking him in the back head, making him unconscious, as his blonde hair reverted to black, and he fell into the ground far below. As he was about to fire another Negative Aura Sphere, he heard a loud shout. "STOP RIGHT THERE!!" He looked up, and saw Naruto and Neji running down the castle walls. He smirked, and fired it at THEM instead! Naruto made a hand sign. "Tajuu: Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!!" Hundreds of Naruto-Clones were now running down the wall, and Neji jumped at the Aura Sphere. "Hakke Kushou: Kaiten!" He spinned around, and created a blue chakra field around himself, as it repelled the attack, and sent Neji backward. But he recovered fast, and landed on the same wall effortlessly, and continued to run down from it. Suddenly, a Naruto-Clone jumped at an unprepared N-Lucario, and kicked him hard in the chest. "U..." He uttered, as N-Lucario flew backwards. Behind him was a tower, but as he came close to it, the walls crashed open, and Knuckles jumped out and punched him back towards the clones. One of them jumped forward and kicked him upwards. "ZU..." N-Lucario flew upwards, and as he slowed down, he looked down and prepared to fire a Negative Aura Sphere, but was distracted of a Shuriken that sizzled by. He looked back, and saw it return like a boomerang. Suddenly, it was replaced with a Naruto-Clone, and it kicked him into the wall. "MA..." N-Lucario crashed through the wall, and was inside the castle again. As he got up, he noticed the real Lucario in front of him, and he was blasted out again by an Aura Sphere. There, yet another clone waited for him, as it kicked him up in the air. "KI..!" As N-Lucario reached the top of the castle, all hundred clones, and the real Naruto appeared above him, as one after the other kicked him back down. "NARUTO RENDAN!!!!!" All of them yelled, as the last, and real, Naruto kicked him down, and he smashed upon the ground with a massive impact. All of the clones exept one disappeared, as he and the real Naruto landed in front of the massive crater the impact caused. N-Lucario stood up on dizzy legs, and he was more furious than ever! "GGRRRR!!!! I´LL RIP YOU APART!!!!!" He roared at them. The clone and Naruto just smirked sarcastically at him. "I don´t think so!" They said in unison, as they pointed behind N-Lucario. He looked around, and saw Neji! He had his one arm stretched out, and his other stretched behind him, and he stood bent down. A mystic aura-like energy erupted from his body, and his eye-veins were thicker. "Feel the wrath of the Hyuuga Clan!!" He shouted, as he charged N-Lucario. "Eight Trigrams: Two Palms..." He struck N-Lucario two times in one of the arms. "Four Palms..." Another four hits in his chest. "Eight Palms...Sixteen Palms...Thirty-Two Palms...Sixty-Four Palms...One-Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms...Two-Hundred Fifty-Six Palms...Five-Hundred And Twelve Palms...One-Thousand Twenty-Four Palms! Eight Trigrams: Hyuuga Final Explosion!!!!!!" He had hit N-Lucario exactly 1024 times, and at the last punch, the ground in front of Neji erupted, and N-Lucario threw up blood. He was flying backwards, straight at Naruto. The clone had disappeared, and he held a Chakra Ball in his hand! "Don´t forget about me!!!" He roared, as his eyes were red and the scratchmarks expanded. He lunged the sphere forward. "RASENGAN!!!!!!" A massive explosion erupted from the sphere, and a large shockwave was formed, as all the castle windows were shattered into pieces. As the dust cloud from the explosion settled, they saw N-Lucario lying in a massive crater, unconscious and with wounds across his body. Neji was panting, and his veins around his eyes shrinked back to normal. "Heh! That was easy!" Naruto chuckled. Neji looked a bit worried. "Yes...almost TOO easy!" He replied. Suddenly, N-Lucario opened his eyes, as he stood up in the blink of an eye, bent down, and jumped up powerfully, as he landed inside Elizabeth´s room again, next to Aaron. "You really underestimated me, Lucario!!" He shouted, as he charged up a Negative Aura Sphere. "No!" Aaron stretched out his hand and halted N-Lucario. "But, Sir Aaron!! They are weak! They must die!" "Not now, N-Lucario." Aaron replied coldly, as he looked at Lucario. "They must know what they are dealing with..." N-Lucario gruffed. "Fine! You got lucky THIS time!" Then, they disappeared in black vortexes. Lucario seemed to be hurt. Not physically, but emotionally, as he bent his head down. A tear fell from his eye. "So this is what happened to Sir Aaron." Evangelis said, a bit shocked. "How...horrible!" He saw that Lucario was sad, and he walked up to him and patted his shoulder. "Don´t worry......You will find a way to save him. I know it!" "T-Thanks..." Lucario stuttered, as he wipedd out the tear from his eye. He looked at Tails. "You know what to do." "Right!" Tails replied happily, as he took out a small device from his pocket and tossed it on the floor. A portal erupted from it, and they went through...... ***** Meanwhile, Morgan LeFay was walking down a long set of stairs, as her steps echoed between the walls. "That damn Angel!!" She thought. "He has ruined my plans for far too long! But now......I will put an end to it!" She stopped in the entrance to an underground chamber. Several torches lit up in ghost-like blue flames, and the room was revealed. There was no floor, just a black, gaping abyss. There was a stone bridge that led across to the center of the abyss, and there was a platform with a pedestal. On the pedestal, a black orb was hovering, which crackled with purple electricity. She went across the bridge, and stood in front of the orb. "The Dark Requiem Orb......" She sighed in a joyful tone. "You are the most prized of my arcane objects. And now...you will help me to overthrow my enemies..." She reached out for it. She could feel the power pulsating from it, as if it was alive. "MORGAN!!" Someone yelled behind her. It was Ignitia. "Don´t you dare!" Morgan just smirked. "And why not?" She replied coldly. "After all...It´s mine, and I can do whatever I wish with my things..." She ignored Ignitia, as she touched the orb, and took it from the pedestal. Nothing happened. She smiled, as she began to chant in a foreign language: "Vatsuun...Soketha...Daemonica...Nosferathûs...Íncarnítía...Delírûs...Saêktaam!" Suddenly, the room was shaking, and several cracks were formed in the walls. The Orb glowed purple, and started to levitate away from Morgan, back to the center of the room. "Morgan!! What have you done?!!" Ignitia yelled, but then, the orb blasted out two purple beams, and one of them pierced Morgan! The other rushed towards Ignitia, and pierced her as well! Then, both of them glowed purple, as their body parts twisted and deformed. Morgan laughed with a twisted, deformed laugh. "AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!! FINALLY, EVANGELIS......YOU WILL FEEL MY WRATH!!!!" ***** A portal bursted open, and The Neo-Legion stepped out. "Here we are again!" Sonic said happily, as he stretched himself. "Mobius! Home Sweet......WHAT?!!!" They looked around. They had arrived in the neighbourhood that Sonic and Amy lived in, but all they saw was burned-down houses and dead bodies. Tails was about to throw up, Knuckles was shocked, and Chuck was scared to death. "W-Who could have...done this?!" He stuttered. "Most likely Xigbar and Xaldin!" Gohan replied furiously. "No..." Lucario interrupted, as he had his eyes closed and looked for certain Aura signs. "I do not sense their Aura......they are not the ones behind this!" "But then...who is it?" Chuck asked nervously. "Ooohh...Isn´t it sad?" A voice said in an ironic tone "I thought you knew, Chuck! It´s your ol´ Uncle Shadow!!" They turned around. There was Shadow, Kiryu, Hamou and Arou, all of them smirking sadistically. Sonic was furious. "YOU!!!" He yelled at Shadow. "YOU DAMN BASTARD!!" He charged at him and tried to punch him. But he dodged and gave Sonic a knee in the gut, and kicked him back. Sonic gasped for air, and Shadow chuckled a bit. "What´s wrong...old friend?" He smirked. "Getting too old? Or are you just too busy with your b!tch of a wife that you´re getting rusty?!" He jump-kicked Sonic in the face, and he was sent crashing into a house. "DADDY!!" Chuck yelled, and rushed to his father´s aid. Lucario stared at Shadow. "Why are you doing this?!" He roared at him. Shadow smirked again. "For revenge!" He replied. "And now......how about you and I have a little...showdown, eh?" To be continued...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Wow I am impressed!!And man that Shadow and his traitorous ways!!What happened to Amy and the others? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 You just have to wait for chapter 22. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter 22: Power Of Rage And Twisted Dimensions.][align=center]Chapter 22: Power Of Rage And Twisted Dimensions. "SHADOW!! STOP THIS NOW!" Lucario yelled, as he dodged a Chaos Spear attack from Shadow. He just smirked, as he landed in front of him and clutched his fist. He lunged it at Lucario, but he deflected it and punched Shadow in the face. Suddenly, he glowed in a blue Aura Flame, and he smirked. "Thanks for the short lessons, Neji!" He said to Neji, as he punched Shadow in the arm. The arm suddenly turned numb, and Shadow growled in pain. Lucario continued to punch Shadow, and his punches went faster and more powerful. Lucario then finished by kicking Shadow in the chest and sended him crashing into a burning house. The house collapsed above him, and Kiryu, Hamou and Arou were awed. "No problem!" Neji then replied, but then he turned serious. "I...sense something. Byakugan!" His eye-veins grew thicker, as he focused his eyes at the collapsed building. Something moved there, something evil. "He´s still alive!" "Indeed I am!" Shadow teleported in front of Lucario, and punched him in the gut. Lucario staggered in pain, and Shadow smirked. "Now do you feel it?! Do you feel the pain?! GOOD! Cause that´s the same pain that I had to endure ever since I joined you spineless lot of cowards and whiners!! You´re sickening, mocking, and haunting me with your restrictions and rules, and I´ve had enough!! TIME TO SEE YOU DIE!!" He raised his hand, but then he was sent backwards. He looked up, and saw Sonic at Lucario´s side. "Stop it Shadow!" He roared. "Can´t you see what you have done?! All this because of your stupid rise to power! Houses burned, families murdered in cold blood, all because of you! I thought that we could help you to overcome those feelings, but it seems like we have to increase the medicine dose a bit!!" His fur turned golden, and his hair spikes stood up. He was now Super Sonic. "It seems as I have no choice but to fight!" "Oh, really?" Shadow smirked, as he turned to Super Shadow. "Well if I am to go down, I´ll drag your lifeless corpse along with me!! Let´s finish this, Sonic! ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!!" ***** Meanwhile, at a tropical island in the year of 1520, Jack Sparrow sat on the beach and gazed upon the sea. "Fuzzy-head must´ve been caught by those British bastards by now." He muttered, as he raised a bottle of rum and drinked a bit. A thought of saving them flimmered through his head, but he just shrugged. "Nah. They probably get outta there themselves...And leave ol´ Jack alone with his rum..." He chuckled a bit, and drank some more. Suddenly, the sky turned dark, and Jack thought a storm was coming. But then, the entire world began to deform and twist, as he was suddenly standing in mid-air! "What the bloody hell?!" He said surprised. "Either I had too much rum, or I am dreamin´!" The world returned to normal, but he was no longer in his world. He stood in a hall made of purple materia, and in front of him was a large arena. "Well......If this is a dream, might as well sleep." He said to calm himself, as he laid down and started to snore...... ***** "DIE, SONIC!!" Shadow roared, as he charged at Sonic and punched him in the face. Sonic quickly recovered, as he and Shadow punched and kicked at eachother like crazy. They warped back and forward, up and down, everywhere and anywhere, as they constatly tried to outsmart eachother. But they kept on fighting eachother, they were equals. Suddenly, Shadow teleported back to the ground, as he aimed his hand at Lucario and the others. Sonic stared at him, and suddenly realised what he was about to do. "SHADOW!!! DON´T YOU DARE!!!!!!!" He yelled. But Shadow just smiled. "Why shouldn´t I?" He smirked evily, as a yellow energy ball formed in his hand. "I can kill them sooo easily......just as I did to that stupid b!tch of yours!" Sonic flared up with anger. "DON´T YOU DARE TO TALK ABOUT AMY LIKE THAT!!!" He roared. "WHERE IS SHE??!!!!" Shadow smirked. "At your house......waiting for you to join her." He replied in a certain, cold-hearted tone. "It would be......unfitting if you didn´t go and see her." Sonic gave Shadow a last, cold stare before he took off to their house. It was the only house that haven´t been razed, as he landed outside and flung the door open. "Amy?! AMY!!" He shouted, as he searched through the house. No response. "AMY! ANSWER ME!!! IT´S SONIC!!!" Still no answer. He flung their bedroom door open, and found her lying face-down in their bed. He sighed in relief, as he reverted to his normal form and walked up to her. "Amy..." He said calmingly, and sat down beside her. "It´s ok...I´m back..." She was unusually quiet. "Amy? You´re ok?" He turned her face up, and was horrified. She had a bullet hole in her head, and the blood was still flowing from the wound. She stared emptily into the air, and she had a scared look upon her face. "A-Amy......n-n-no!" Sonic stuttered, as his eyes watered. "N-No...no! NOOOOO!!!!" Sonic bursted into tears, and he hugged Amy´s lifeless body. He suddenly felt a hand on his shoulder, and it gently fondled his head and cheek. "How...tragic." A familiar voice soothed in a charismatic way. "She was all alone...no one to look after her...exept me. And I, of course, had tired of her way of nagging at me, constantly trying to protect your son from me. I had no other choice than to finish her off. Hope you´re able to see through this...in due time..." The one behind him was Shadow. He knew it, and suddenly felt his anger burst to the surface. "Y-YOU......YOU GOD DAMN MONSTER!!!!!!!" He turned around and lunged his fist at him. Shadow grabbed it, as he bent Sonic´s fingers backwards. They cracked loudly, and Sonic yelped in pain. Shadow smirked, as he bent them all the way back, and Sonic´s fingers snapped off. He screamed in agony, as he grabbed his hand and wimpered. "Oh, how the mighty have fallen, eh?!" He cackled, as he grabbed Sonic´s hair and put his hand in front of his face. A yellow energy ball formed in it. "NOW, DIE!!!" He was about to fire it, until he heard a small whimper from the door. "M-Mom?" Chuck was standing in the door, and his eyes were teared. "MOM?! ARE YOU OK?!! MOM!" He rushed over to her, and saw the bullet hole. "M-MOM! NOO!!" He stared at Shadow. "UNCLE SHADOW! WHY?!!" "Because, my dear Chuck..." Shadow replied coldly, "Your stupid wench of a mom was keeping your daddy back from fighting! And now, I have finally awakened his potential! But, much to my dismay, your father has weakened! So therefore......he must die too!" Chuck suddenly stood up, and Shadow felt a huge amount of power emitt from him. Chuck had tears in his eyes, and he clutched his fists. "SHADOW!" He roared, and the power was even more pressing for Shadow. "YOU......YOU...STOP NOW!!" Chuck started to burn with golden flames. "I´VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU AND YOUR KILLING!!! YOU ARE JUST A JERK!!! SO YOU JUST TAKE YOUR HANDS OF MY DAD!! I´M GOING TO MAKE YOU PAY......SHADOOOOOOWWW!!!!!!!" Suddenly, Chuck´s green fur turned golden, and his hair spikes stood straight up. A shockwave erupted from his body, and the roof and several walls blasted off. Shadow was intimidated by the raw power that Chuck emitted, and he actually cried in fear. Chuck stared straight at him. "W-W-WHAT THE......W-WHO THE H-HELL ARE YOU?!!!" Shadow yelled. Chuck smirked, as he walked up to Shadow. "I am Chuck...The Hedgehog." He replied, as he suddenly punched Shadow in the chest and sended him flying towards Lucario and the others. He crashed into the ground, as he was sliding along it, ripping it up, and crashed into a wall. Chuck appeared right next to Lucario, and smiled at him. "C-Chuck!" Lucario stuttered. "Y-Your power is......Incredible!!" Chuck nodded, and saw Shadow standing up again. "Oh no you don´t!!!" He yelled, as he charged at Shadow and landed a flurry of punches at him. Shadow acted like he was pummeled by thin air, and then, Chuck kicked him into the air and followed after him. He grabbed Shadow´s leg and tossed him down, and he crashed into the ground. Chuck charged up energy and unleashed a volley of Chaos Spears at him, as they exploded violently upon impact. When the debree settled, Shadow was lying in a puddle of blood, and he coughed it up as well. He dizzily stood up, and Naruto saw an opportunity. He charged at Shadow, as he charged up a Rasengan. Shadow looked at him confused, as he lunged it forward. "RASENGAN!" He yelled, as the attack blasted him away several metres, and he crashed into a tree. Kiryu, Hamou and Arou rushed up to him, and tried to help him. But Shadow growled in dissapointment, as he blasted all three of them into bits. "P-Pathetic...scum!" He stuttered, as he fainted. Lucario sighed in relief, as Chuck landed next to him and reverted to his normal form. "Now..." Lucario said calmly, "We must get Amy and Sonic. There is still time to save her." "R-Really?!" Chuck said. Lucario nodded, as Sonic at the same moment returned with Amy. "Now, let´s go!" Lucario clapped his hands, as a portal bursted open. "To our headquarters!" All of them nodded and rushed through... To be continued...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 It's a nice chapter!!And what will happen to Jack?BTW I AM IMPRESSED WITH CHUCK'S POWERS!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Well, I kinda got the inspiration from the DBZ Cell Saga, when Gohan turns SSJ2 for the first time and Pwns Cell, remember? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Yep.good time...Good times.I miss the old days.and I'm going to guess what time Lucario is going.The time when Mobius wasn't burned? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Eeeh...no! Remember: Lucario created a portal in chapter 4, right? And if he was to use that portal again, it would return them to the PLACE he created it on, not the time it was created. Things a little clearer to you now?;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Yep,So is Shadow finnally dead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 :shock: No, he isn´t dead! After all, Shadow is one of the main characters. He just got a little wacko for not being able to destroy as much as he wanted. He´s still a good guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 He is??it's the end of the world!!Anyway he is a GOOD guy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Yes he is. Although he doesn´t show it so often. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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