Destinyends Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Hello everyone these are my first two cards. please tell how I did out of a scale of ten. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 there too small, i cant read them[/topic][/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 lol. 1 Word: NOATTACHMENTS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 lol. 1 Word: NOATTACHMENTS!!! its 2, and it should be: NO ATTACHMENTS, NOOB!!! wait thats 3 :lol: its nice to know somebody else got my humour. but seriously, when you make a card, generate it to finish it, click saveclick the cardwait...a code will appear under itcopy that code...? easy right, if yu read the rules you would know this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Rules, you shall read, young one [/yoda]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 ^_^ wahey, you took my advise *waits for prize*  card ratings:1)divine beast are 10+ starsATK too highbad OCG, you dont need the - ?[spoiler=OCG correction:]For every face-up LIGHT monster on the field, this card gains 500 DEF. This card is unnaffected by the effects of Spell, Trap or Monster effect Cards. also, why is it a ritual mosnter with no ritual cost? im guessing its blue because its a divine beast. 2)oath keeper?again, why are you using the - ? [spoiler=OCG Correction:]While this card is face-up on the field, no Trap Cards can be activated. Control of the equipped monster cannot change. Every time a Trap Card is sent to the Graveyard, increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 50.  Okay, OCG maybe a little off, but its definatly better than yours :? why are you using the '-' anyway? jsut write the effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destinyends Posted January 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 ^_^ wahey' date=' you took my advise *waits for prize*  card ratings:1)divine beast are 10+ starsATK too highbad OCG, you dont need the - ?[spoiler=OCG correction:']For every face-up LIGHT monster on the field, this card gains 500 DEF. This card is unnaffected by the effects of Spell, Trap or Monster effect Cards. also, why is it a ritual mosnter with no ritual cost? im guessing its blue because its a divine beast. 2)oath keeper?again, why are you using the - ? [spoiler=OCG Correction:]While this card is face-up on the field, no Trap Cards can be activated. Control of the equipped monster cannot change. Every time a Trap Card is sent to the Graveyard, increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 50.  Okay, OCG maybe a little off, but its definatly better than yours :? why are you using the '-' anyway? jsut write the effect? Thank you for the pointers; I'll try to remember them in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 good, because that means, all though your 1 star, people wont look down on you as a noob, Â make good cards and youll be flourished up to higher star level, i mean im 5, and nobody calls me a noob except for noobs. (because im too good ;) )Â and isnt my member card just the BEST?! (in my sig) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Make more cards. But don't make OPd cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Don't use attachments. You need a little work on these cards, but hey, nice job. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Please use IMG Tags. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destinyends Posted January 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Please use IMG Tags. "IMG tags?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Sorry I didn't notice you had posted the cards further into the thread. Could you please post all your cards into your first post if you know how to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destinyends Posted January 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Id like to thank all those that have commented so far and I have taken your advice and reposted my work at the top of the page with all the modifications. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assanaut Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Weird, sloppy grammar. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destinyends Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Good evening, Ive noticed that all of my cards so far are special effect cards so I decided to bring out a regular old fashioned fighting monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destinyends Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Here Are some new ones I thought up before bed last night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkBlooded Prince Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 These cards look cool, but your wording on a lot of them is wrong. Many of them are way OP'ed. The one card that caught my eye was Bahamut, King of Dragons. This card is Pretty powerful but not powerful enough to need slypher as a fusion material. Maybe Blue-Eyes, Red-Eyes, and Choas Emperor Dragon would be a more sutable tribute for a fusion monster of this caliber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destinyends Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 These cards look cool' date=' but your wording on a lot of them is wrong. Many of them are way OP'ed. The one card that caught my eye was Bahamut, King of Dragons. This card is Pretty powerful but not powerful enough to need slypher as a fusion material. Maybe Blue-Eyes, Red-Eyes, and Choas Emperor Dragon would be a more sutable tribute for a fusion monster of this caliber[/quote']Thanks for the input. I chose the two dragon gods because they seemed the most logical considering all the powers that many stories have given to this power beast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Destiny don't forget to update the first post with the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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