Careless Whisper Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 The drums of which sound tribal to my ears,The strings of tranquility and radiance,Winds of sound reverberate the soft tears,The music plays as a bright symphony.The interesting thing about the chivesis that it never dies nor will it fade.It is music that drives us through our lives.It is music that takes our minds away.Through glass it shines like light through a prism.Separated so, delicately say,simply so, perfect subtle rhythm.Oh, the gentileness will never decay.Melodicly so, beautifully dass.So I'm grateful its time will never pass. (sonnet = poem of 14 lines, each line consisting of 10 syllables.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Good poem, although the 2nd and 11th lines are wrong in their rhythm.Keep it up! Sonnets are pretty tricky.. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest PikaPerson01 Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Cool story bra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Cool story bra I have a question. Why does everyone keep saying that to me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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