Force_Flex Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 this is my first attempt at a long and complexicated effect... [spoiler= Img Cred / Card lore] img cred goes to ~camilkuo of deviant art, and the card lore is: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK, Warrior-Type monsters from your field or Graveyard. You can change the Type of this card from Warrior-Type to Fiend-Type or vice versa by paying 500 Life Points each time, for each Warrior/ Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard (depending on the attribute) this card gains 700 ATK. If there are more than 8 Warrior-Type/ Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard, you must pay either 2000 Life Points each turn or remove 1 "Dark Skulled Warrior from Hell" from play. no harsh critisizm and plz no spamming. Rate critique enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 for a first compound effect, 7/10. I Hereby State Thee:[AVERAGE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK, Warrior-Type monsters on your field or Graveyard. You can change the Type of this card from Warrior-Type to Fiend-Type or Fiend-Type to Warrior-Type by paying 500 Life Points. If this card is treated as Warrior-Type, increase this card's ATK by 500 for each Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard. If this card is treated as Fiend-Type, increase this card's ATK by 500 for each Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard. If there are more than 8 Warrior-Type or Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard, pay either 2000 Life Points each turn or remove 1 "Dark Skulled Warrior from Hell" from play. One major error. You don't state the original ATK of the card. fix that and I'll rate you. OCG fix is strange because of the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 i just edited it sorry bout that mistake me had a brainfart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 missed the last image tag... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 ah frick!!!! woopsies =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 one=1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massacrewolf13 Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 I love it! This is an increadibly creative and original card. I give it a perfect 10/10! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 why thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Errors stated already, and its kinda overused pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 i fixed the ocg and i haven't seen the pic around at all... mabey i just dont look around alot... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 Bad. Bad Effect. Bad Pic. Bad OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 if your going to say it's bad then tell me why and what ocg errors (if any) i have! dont just say "bad" its just plain stupid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 I know I posted before but, I don't think you should make references to Hell. And this is my fixed version of effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK Warrior-Type monsters from your field or Graveyard. You can change the Type of this card from Warrior-Type to Fiend-Type or vice versa by paying 500 Life Points each time.For each Warrior / Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 700 ATK. If there are more than 8 Warrior-Type / Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard, you must pay either 2000 Life Points each turn or remove 1 "Dark Skulled Warrior from Hell" from play. P.S You add commas where periods are needed.... And sometimes you add unneeded commas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 oh... i wouldnt call that bad ocg i would just say "too many commas where periods should be..." but thats just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 bumparaptor! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Command Knight Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 Nice card. Original effect and good picture . OCG errors have already been pointed out. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted January 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 bumpsies! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.