"Awaking of the Soul" Set introduction a 2nd card Added (Comments Please)

[cgtrack2013]

This set will focus around "Special figure cards" with hard Summons, and while they are in the graveyard, you will be able to summon 1 Special Spirit Monster that will be worth the wait.

 

Well without further more, here they are.

(Some card names mentioned in here are cards have not yet been completed)

[spoiler=My Introductory Card "Raging Spirit of the Destroyer" ] [spoiler=Card Lore] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned if a "Ragus the Destroyer" is in your Graveyard and by paying 500 Life Points. During the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, return it to its owner's hand. This card can be Summoned from your hand during an opponent's Battle Phase when the opponent Declares an Attack (make the new Target of the Attack this card), if you do so this card can not be Summoned your following turn. This card cannot be destroyed in Battle (Battle Damage is halved). If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. When this card Battles with a monster that has a higher ATK or DEF higher than this cards ATK decrease the opposing card's ATK or DEF by the ATK of this card. When this card destroys an opponent's monster that his it's ATK or DEF decreased by this cards effect, do not inflict Normal Battle Damage to the opponent, instead decrease their Life Points by an amount equal to the original ATK or Defense of the destroyed monster. If this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Spirit Guardian" from your Graveyard, ignoring the Summoning conditions.

 

An image that i created from a pic i found off deviantART and off an original yugioh Spirit monster background.

 

[spoiler=Spirit Guardian ]

[spoiler=Card Lore] This card can not be Special Summoned. This card can be Normal Summoned even if you have already Normal Summoned, Flip summoned, or Set a monster card this turn. This card can only be Normal Summoned by offering one Spirit Monster and one Warrior-Type Monster or one Warrior-Type Spirit Monster on your side of the field as a tribute. While this card is face-up on the field all Spirit Monsters you control gain ATK equal to the Level they are x50, and if you Summon a Spirit Monster during your opponents turn it is not sent back into your hand at the End Phase.

 

 

[cgtrack2013]

New Card Added

[N00B Hunter]

Ohhhhhh goodness.. First of all, it's not First Edition unless the stickers are gold. So either photoshop the stickers, or get rid of the circulation.

 

Secondly, your strategy counteracts itself. You cannot Normal Summon on a turn other than your own, during a phase other than your Main Phase 1 or 2. If you are Summoning during your opponent's turn, you are Special Summoning. But Spirit Monsters cannot be Special Summoned. So "Destroyer" counteracts itself, and "Spirit Guardian" is a lot less useful now...

 

I would recommend, first of all, that you CUT DOWN ON THE TEXT. These cards are realistic, so any card you post here should be treated as though it were put up by someone on the Yu-Gi-OH cardmaking team for critique. No card exists in the current TCG, with as many lines of text as your card.. it's simply not realistic (and this IS the realistic thread, is it not?). So cut down the text on both of your cards, mostly your really long Warrior-Type Spirit Monster's effect. If you want to, you can PM me and we can talk about it. However, I've been restrained lately due to school and other parts of life. I may not be able to communicate with you as well as, say "Noahyel" or some other high-level member.

[cgtrack2013]

ok thanks for the information, and now that u do mention it it is kinda long

[N00B Hunter]

Haha, just a little.. And who's "Ragus the Destroyer" anyway?

[cgtrack2013]

oh i havnt made that card yet, lol

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ok i got rid of some not as important effects but the cards "Required OCG text (This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by its own Effect. This card can only be Summoned if a "Ragus the Destroyer" is in your Graveyard and by paying 500 Life Points. During the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, return it to its owner's hand)." takes up alot of space so i dont think its as long as it realy looks? any suggestions people?