Unknown Set

[gwarg1]

Original, Complex New Set that will Blow you Off Your FEET!!!!!!!

 

I know the print is small so here is the lore

 

Card Lore: Aqua/ Unknown/ Effect

This card can be treated as a Monster, Spell, or Trap card. When This card is Activated, Set, or summoned, activate 1 of the following effects:

Spell: Discard up to 3 Spell cards from your hand, Inflict damage equal to 500x the number of Spell cards discarded.

Trap: Discard up to 3 Trap cards from your hand, Inflict damage equal to 500x the number of cards you discarded.

Monster: Discard up to 3 monster from you hand, Inflict damagequal to 500x the number of cards that you discarded.

 

 

 

I know some people won't like it. Some People just doesn't like me but I just wanted to be original. So come look at my set as I go on to being the best Card Maker on this Website.

[K.B. strategist]

Monster Card (Spell Card, trap Card)

Activated = activated

Summoned

Magic = Spell

Negate the effect of 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls.

Monster = monster

A few other wording problems too.

 

Original effects, it would be interesting if you could recolor them to indicate that they can be treated as anything. The first 1 is underpowered in all but a burn deck though, no one will -3 themselves just to inflict 1500 damage. Decent pics.

 

Overall very good for a new member. If you achieve flawless ocg and continue making good cards you will certainly arise to being 1 of the better card makers on this site. As for the best card maker... perhaps, but not in the near future.

 

8.2/10

[tommers2008]

K.B got most of the ocg errors... well here is some

damagequal damage equal you forgot a space (1st card)

 

This this isn't capitalized (both cards)

 

monster monsters (1st card)

 

You have aqua but in card you have pyro (1st card)... and your wording for the cards is off thats not how it should be wrote..

 

maybe this would go better..

This card gains 1 of the following effects, depending on the type of card it is being treated as.

 

 

your still very far from becoming the best card maker on this site.. like what k.b said you have to work on your ocg, that has to be good you can't just have good ideas and no ocg to follow it up...

 

on the cards.. good idea i like it 1st pic kinda dark but i will give you a 7/10

[gwarg1]

Thanx.... I admit, I do need to improve with ocg but I think my originallity is my main trait. And thanx for the idea i will change the catd color.

[D. Gray Man]

pretty good and long and pretty good cards for a newbie 7.9/10

[gwarg1]

pretty good and long and pretty good cards for a newbie 7.9/10

 

O My Goodness, You don't know how annoying that is. All you guys say is okay for a noob, noob this, noob that, etc. Don't disrespect a noob that can make better cards than you Kaden The Dark.

[Overlord Lucan]

While I agree that if the person isn't completely clueless you should'nt make exeptions just because they're new, I'm not sure you can state as a fact that your a better cardmaker then Kaden or for that matter anybody else, thats for other people to comment on not the actual card makers. (This is just the view of one newb)

[gwarg1]

Okay