black_buffalo Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 Schmerz Wie ich die Vergangenheit innerhalb meiner Augen sehe Ich verwirkliche die Schmerz I nach links nach innen Ich sehe, daß a hinter diesem keinem weiß Ich sehe, daß a hinter dem, das Sie nicht wissen können Ich sehe Folterung und die Schmerz eines kleinen Zickleins Er sieht die Schmerz, die niemand sehen Er glaubt den Schmerz, die Sie nie fühlen Während er geschlagen wird, ist er in einer Kugel Das Schreien für Hilfe aber keine kommt Mit Quetschungen von einem Pfosten lief drei Stücke ein Wie er zu diesem Tag denkt Dieser Tag mit dem Pfosten Er vergißt nie diesen Tag Vom Hurt Schmerz Und Schicksal PainAs I see the past inside my eyesI realize the pain I left insideI see a past that no one will know I see a past that you may not knowI see torture and pain of a little kidHe sees pain that no one will seeHe feels the pain you will never feelAs he is hit he is in a ball Crying for help but no one will comeWith bruises from a pole broke in three pieces As he thinks to this day That day with the pole He will never forget that dayOf hurtPainAnd doom :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 Lolz, German Good poem, too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_buffalo Posted January 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 Danke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..:Grimmjow:.. Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 I like it..! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cypress Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 koodoz for u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_buffalo Posted January 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 Danke, das ich Sie aller wie meine Gedichte froh bin Thank you I am glad you all like my poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 ll bemerkte ich den englischen Teil nicht sogar, bis ich das komplette Ding in deutschem XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Well done of a poem, you going to make another soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Very nice poem! I like the style of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_buffalo Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 yes i will make another poem soon when i think of one and i just whant to saydanke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 yes i will make another poem soon when i think of one and i just whant to saydanke you should try making one that doesn't rhyme (sometimes those can be easier) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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