lala7777 Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 this is a deck I am making I like suggestions but please don't complain or state the pic is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Golden Chaos Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Ok, I won't comment on the pics, but you really need to watch out for capitalization because your cards look so unreal, the first card's effect is sweet, yet unspecial, and the second is very very weird, a Level 4 Vanilla, not Tuner and ugly ATK & DEF, why did you make this thing?!Overall, 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 They're not good. First things first you should give the Vanilla an effect or as Mond mentioned make it a Tuner. Next you need to work on OCG and grammar. If you tried harder you could make good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala7777 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 cyber spirit is meant to be weak but when it is used correctly with some of the other cards in this deck it becomes a pretty good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Maybe give him a few more ATK points though. My main point though is that you fix grammatical and OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Golden Chaos Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 I sure predicted you had Support Cards for Cyber Spirit, the point is you need to make him more useable. So you could make him a Tuner and/or adjust his stats. Concernig OCG, reading alot of real YGO cards help alot, just imitate their wording and capitilazation and you should do fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala7777 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 two new fire cards the next cards will be support for cyber spirit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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