God-Card-Master Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Artwork by Deviant Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Your OCG is off and I suggest you make a longer more epandable effect. 6/10 keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 When this card is destroyed (by what?) you can Special Summon 1 WATER monster from (where?) Could have a more interesting effect. It's also a bit OP, but at least it's support for WATER monsters and not DARK. :/ 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmarian Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Yay..card with my name..sweet..and it is scary too... K.B. strategist - you are wrong ^^ ... he doesn't need to say with what that card must be destroyed..when he says : when this card is destroyed - that means that that effect activates on card effect destruction and on battle destruction too... He doesn't need to mention where he special summon monster because in standard rule monsters are always special summoned to your side of the field in face-up position..so that is written in rules and doesn't need to be written on card..on card should be written only exceptions of rules , for example that he special summons it to opponents side of the field - card must say it... Anyway lets rate it : Picture : 8/10 (it sure its scary and fits with name but i would like that there is more colors and more details)Balance : 5/10 ( overpowered, but if we look at crazy Tele-Dad decks this card would not be banned in TCG at all..i still rate it low because problems in metagame should not be fixed with making other broken cards..)Wording : 5/10 (mistakes are : "than" is not needed, "summon" must be "Summon" , "water type" - this doesn't exist lol , it should be "WATER monster", "out" should be "from"Total : 18/30 - not bad but u can much better...i hope my advices will help u make better cards :)Till next time!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 He doesn't need to mention where he special summon monster because in standard rule monsters are always special summoned to your side of the field in face-up position..so that is written in rules and doesn't need to be written on card..on card should be written only exceptions of rules ' date=' for example that he special summons it to opponents side of the field - card must say it...[/quote'] I meant where he is Special Summoning from. All cards must specify where you are summoning from, or else you could summon it from anywhere. Which would make this card extra overpowered and cause me to suggest adding the restriction anyways. You're right about the other part though, I just prefer to only see "when this card is destroyed" when it specifies if it was by a card effect or battle, or else (in my opinion) the grammar changes from "when this card is destroyed" to "when this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmarian Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Yeah.. i didn't even comment part "from where is it summoned" because u was right there...He can with that wording special summon it from his pocket XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 OCG correction:When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 WATER monster from your hand or Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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