osnivlacos9 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 heyim new...this is the first one i madethe image is by mei was afraid this was an overpowered cardcan you respond to me maybe about if its too weak or strong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 It is OP and there i some OCG errosBlanced effect: When this card destroys a DARK monster as a result of battle draw 1 card from your Deck. Okay picture 8/10 (Good for a first card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
osnivlacos9 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 thank you for the replyis this better than the first one?http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/9715/215430ik3.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 thank you for the replyis this better than the first one?http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/9715/215430ik3.jpg you forgot the at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
osnivlacos9 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 i mean this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 that the same from before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
osnivlacos9 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 omgsrythis is confusinghere... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imperial Blaze Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 That's the same card lolz bad card OCG is bad pic is good but it isn't OP'ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
osnivlacos9 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 wth...ok w8..i feel like a nooblol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Not bad for a first, though it's pretty simple. Next time, think of something bigger :) 7.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 good, image, maybe lower the ATK, o raise the star level. and you have a few OCG errors, but nothing like most new guys. try making longer effects, with a good, and bad side. OCG: When this Card destroys and opponent's monster by battle, draw 1 card from your Deck. (can aalso be: 'draw 1 card from the top of your respective Deck',- but htats kinda old.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 wth...ok w8..i feel like a nooblol At last it not OP. as Spire said try some big monsters (maybe start to work on a set) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Nice....I give it a 8.95/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 for someone new, it is quite good although the ocg needs work. the pic is alright and im gonna give this a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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