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Yujioooh .VS. Crazymanguy4 ( 1 on 1 )


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Whos card is better  

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  1. 1. Whos card is better

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    • Crazymanguy4's


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Crazymanguy4:

 

[spoiler=OCG fixes]Bear of Darkness

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing 3 DARK Beast-Type monsters. When this card is Summoned, destroy all other cards you control. During each of your Standby Phases, discard 1 card, or destroy this card. If this card is destroyed by its own effect, decrease its controller's Life Points by 1000. If this card is destroyed by battle, remove this card from play. If this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, return this card to the bottom of your Deck.

 

 

Also, destroyed cards have no controller. Also, I don't like the 5d's OCG, because it was never brought to the US, but I won't rate off for that. However, because the card's name is what identifies the card, you have a capitalization error and that hurts it. Nonimportant words such as "of" or "the" are never capitalized.

 

The picture seemed a little dark at first, but I suppose it fits the name, so it's not too bad.

 

The main thing I really dislike against this card is that it's way too underpowered, even for 4000 ATK. I see that it takes 3 Tributes, DARK Beast-Types, no less. Then it started listing a bunch of negative effects. I was honestly expecting a huge positive effect at the end for such a drawback, but that didn't happen. So yeah, it's underpowered.

 

The rest of the card is okay, not that good. The OCG is okay, the name is a little simple, and has an error. The effect is way underpowered, and just seems like a bunch of drawbacks piled on top of each other.

 

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yujioooh:

 

[spoiler=OCG fix]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 Dragon-Type monsters on your field. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card's original ATK becomes the combined Levels of the Tributed monsters x 200. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, by paying 1000 Life Points, Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 2000 ATK or less from your Deck to your field. A monster Special Summoned in this way cannot declare an attack. For each Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 100 ATK.

 

 

Since it has "?" ATK, you needed to specify what its ATK becomes somewhere. And since there is another modifier in that same effect, it was better to specify that it was the original ATK that becomes the Levels x 200.

 

The main thing I disliked were the frequent OCG errors throughout the card.

 

The main thing I liked was the originality and balance. To me, it's one of those cards that would be underrated by a lot of people, yet still have potential in the right deck. I see its main use to be for Synchros, or to call warriors such as Exiled Force, and I'm sure it has more uses than that.

 

Crazymanguy4:

Creativity: 6/10

Balance: 5/10 (Underpowered)

Pic: 6/10

OCG: 8/10

Total: 25/40

 

yujioooh:

Creativity: 8/10

Balance: 9/10

Pic: 7/10

OCG: 6/10

Total: 30/40

 

yuhioooh wins my vote, and I will also vote in the poll.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing 3 DARK Beast-Type monsters. When this card is Summoned, destroy all other cards you control. During each of your Standby Phases, discard 1 card, or destroy this card. If this card is destroyed by its own effect, decrease its controller's Life Points by 1000. If this card is destroyed by battle, remove this card from play. If this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, return this card to the bottom of your Deck.

 

Correction: I had the bold part right, cause it's showing ownership of it's effect, therefore it is it's. Now the underlined, I'm not entirly sure.

 

Dude, the card has freakin' 4000 ATK and 3500 DEF stats!!! That's the reason he's got some negative effects.

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Crazymanguy4,

 

its = possessive

it's = contraction for it is

 

http://www.yourdictionary.com/library/misspelled.html (100 Most Often Misspelled Words in English)

 

# its/it's

 

* The apostrophe marks a contraction of "it is." Something that belongs to it is "its."

 

So, to reword that sentence, If this card is destroyed by it is own effect, decrease it is controller's Life Points by 1000.

 

Raviel, Lord of Phantasms is 4000/4000 and is only Type-specific and has a positive effect. Yours is 4000/3500, has another requirement (an Attribute), and has arguably 5 negative effects, with returning to the Deck being the iffy one. I can see some drawback, but in my opinion you overkilled it.

 

And yes, any time a card goes from anywhere to the Deck it is always returned (based on TCG examples).

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Yeah yeah yeah, screw my 6th Grade LA Teacher. My 7th never corrected me lol


so the scroes are 4/4 ? :D :?

 

No, check the poll, you have 4 I have 7. But since Arceus switched to me, and uh.......I think it's 3 to 8 then?? ?_? Ok, I'm gonna check the posts instead

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