black_buffalo Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 Dream catcher As I hang a dream catcher over my bedI can only think of all the things she saidYou will never make it in lifeNever graduate high schoolI hang the dream catcher Then I go to sleepI go to sleep and I see my pastIn the house with the ratsAs I wonder I here a scream and shoutOf all the pain that I had lostOf the pain of a boy being hitBy his grandparents with a stickGrandpa yells I am so sorry Will nana threaten his life to this storyAs I walk I can feel the painOf all the things they done and all the things they sayIf only you could see what I have gone throughThen you can judge me and my attitude To this day it still haunts meThe saddest day of the boy inside me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 quite good of a poem, and much better than the film Dreamcatcher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 1:What an awesome poem, I wish I had wrote it.2: Are you an Indian? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_buffalo Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 yes i am a native american Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prince_of_Death Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 good poem it describes me mostly except or the being beaten part even tough I was beaten a few times as a child. I sleep with a dream catcher in my room too. It makes me think of the movie. I have the movie at home, but only watched it once and I liked it and remembered every detail of it. anyway, thanks for the inspirational poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 "As I wonder I here a scream and shout".There... The only like with and that couldn't have been cut to make it better."Then you can judge me and my attitude."That line can be split and made to say sooo much more. Otherwise me like :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
black_buffalo Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 thank i never seen the movie dream catcher though lol bu im glad you like my poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 very good job :P10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 thank i never seen the movie dream catcher though lol bu im glad you like my poem don't bother watching it, it's a horrible movie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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