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Bad composition' date=' some filters are kinda eh-ish & the colors are not selective. Not bad for 1 in a while.

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What did I say in my first post?

If you aren't going to offer CnC, then don't post. You've just told me what's wrong with it, without telling me how to fix it.

 

I've seen you do better Brush. :\

Not very good at all.

 

I'm perfectly aware.

My recent stuff has been really suck-ish.

Now stop with the pointless flaming and move along.

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Don't use text. It's too messy. Bad color scheme.

Look @ more PSDs and Tuts.

 

Text = win.

Messy how? Elaborate.

I like my colour (SPEAK ENGLISH, JABRONI) thanks.

I've read plenty of tutorials since I started GFX, thanks. This was a little something I made to try and get back on track.

 

You TCGJerks are so stubborn.

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Bad composition' date=' some filters are kinda eh-ish & the colors are not selective. Not bad for 1 in a while.

[/quote']

 

What did I say in my first post?

If you aren't going to offer CnC, then don't post. You've just told me what's wrong with it, without telling me how to fix it.

 

I've seen you do better Brush. :\

Not very good at all.

 

I'm perfectly aware.

My recent stuff has been really suck-ish.

Now stop with the pointless flaming and move along.

 

Hmm sorry...

 

Anyway, Try resizing it's width a bit & moving it more to the left. Forget about the middle. The middle is your enemy, move away from it. Try to use stocks rather than filter & colors I would use him in a city or on a field next to a river. I could give you the stock if I still have it. It will seriously make it look sexy. Try using light colors like Blue::Yellow::Green:: More likely CMYK.

 

@ Chevalier:: When have you come that bad? Weren't you that formal kid? But now your different =/ Doesn't matter though.

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Colors aren't done very well, you've got it all dull except these gold bands and some red on the left, it completely draws your attention away from the rest.

The "electric-like" sharpened bits that you have around the render are dull in a couple spots and should be giving off their own lights considering they are tiny lightning bolts

Smuding is bad, some spots are okay but others just turned out into these sharp mushes

Some spots are too sharp

Shouldn't be so wide, then you wouldn't have to worry about it not being empty and don't have to have some bad side parts like you do here

Text is rather ugly

 

Might be more, but you should have enough by now.

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