gatorcrunch Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 this is my econd set i think they are an imporovement from my first set rate them and tell me wht you think its my saiyan sagai do not take any credit or own these pictures tehy are from google images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beamsabre Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Where do we begin...?1) Correct the OCG errors...every one of your cards has at least one.2) Think your card effects through--imagine playing the card in the game. EVERY Yugioh card that is legal to play in advanced format has some upside and downside effect, every monster has decent ATK and weak DEF, and vice versa. Take Kid Gohan for example--the effect is to raise his ATK by 200 if your opponents monster ATK is higher. Your opponent just summoned Gemini Elf, a monster whose ATK is 1900; even with Kid Gohan's effect it wont stand a chance. On top of that, its a 4 star monster--Level Limit Area B and Gravity Bind will hurt this car immensely.3.) Power up the effects of cards that are named after attacks and special moves, but limit them to the characters that perform the move. Destructo Disc is a Krillin move, so jack up its ability (Example: Activate this card only if there is a face up Krillin card on the field. Destroy one of your opponent's face up monsters, then inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to the destroyed monster's original ATK.)4.) Remember field spells affect EVERYBODY, unless the card specifies otherwise. Your opponent can and WILL use your field spell effect against you, so choose effects wisely.5.) The bigger and more powerful the effect, the bigger the cost should be. Gallic Gun--have it wipe out ALL of your opponent's Spells and Traps, but set the cost that Vegeta must be on the field to use it. (see number 3 above). I would like to see you revamp the cards and repost them. I will wait and see what you come up with before I offer a grade. Good pics though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Wow, beamsabre,you said nearly everything i was going to say... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 1. some errors,e.g no full stops.2. The description about Tien isn't very descriptive.3. make a few of those cards even more effective. I was going to rate it 3 / 10 but since your new I'll rate it 5.5 / 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 -Pics could be better -Tiger's Overall Rating: 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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