Deity Mitsu's Self-Made Songs-5th Song Posted

[Deity Mitsu]

One of my favorite hobbies since I was 11 has always been writing songs and poetry when I get in certain moods. I had about 60 written songs on my old computer before it got cleaned,some of my favorites too:(.

 

Part of Me

 

Holding it deep within

Is a fear and a cause

Unforgiven is what you did

You show no pain,you suffer no loss

 

Regained,the truth remains

You were never the better part of me

 

Chorus:

Reckless sin is reliving

Held within is a saint retrieving

Opened up,there is no plot

To this sliced up story

Closing down your mind

Left you far behind

 

Keeping it locked inside

Is a pause in your breath

Nonetheless I still reside

In your light,in your debt

 

I should not owe you

I do not need you(Not the better part of me)

I do not know you

Like I thought I had before

 

Chorus

 

This will be the last day

You'll keep on taking away from me

Unforgiven is your sin

This will be the last say

You have in my story

You'll never ever take another part of me,no

 

Now I've left you far behind

(Yeah,just try to come and catch me now)

Left you far behind

(A break of trust I will not allow)

Resiting in my head

Those words that you said

Mean nothing to me now

Purity

 

All I feel is your kiss

All the lies on your lips

Mistrust on all your fingertips

Lock and load,get ready to rip

 

Chorus

Don't fall back

Don't withdraw

Its a part of your reality

Don't keep in line

Don't lose your grip

Or else you'll lose your faith in me

Let it in your mind

Let the light blind

Lose your purity

 

Blasting through your chest

Like a centimetre bullet

Wanna do your best

But you know you can't hack it

 

Losing purpose

Don't rehearse it

Just let it go,

Let it flow

Let it go yeah

 

Chorus

 

In your will you wrote a name

Completely decided by your switches,your change

Its all going down now

Time to let it go now

Just scream out

Leave no doubt

Say your all you wanna be

 

Chorus

 

Let it go

Lose your purity

Let if flow

Lose your purity

Let it out

Lose your purity

Leave no doubt

Lose your purity

 

Loophole

 

I am endlessly

Breaking free

Toward the thing I strive

Breathlessly

You'll taste defeat

And I will unrestrain

 

Chorus:

Gotta find that loophole

To the greater things in life

See the pages start to unfold

Till' I get my purpose right

I will never let go

Of what my dreams have made of me

Its my hour gotta reload

Today I'm breaking free

 

Overly

Looking over me

Ignoring my potential

Well I'll make you see

Whats to be

And what becomes of god

 

I'm your future

I'm the line

Of which you crossed

When our worlds entied

 

Chorus

 

Let me live till' you let die

I'm gonna give it till' you stand by

You better run,no time to hide

I'm sensing a change in our worlds tide

x2

 

Last Line

 

As the phone calls get shorter

All my words get older

Are we out of our way

Or are we looking for space

 

My blue skies keep falling

This echo recalling the words that I said over again

 

Bridge:

And if you were less interested

Maybe it would be the best if

 

Chorus:

We break this off

Inside never knowing

Who we love

Or where were going

A new beginning is the end of something beautiful

Will this be the last line of our story

 

Easily remembered

The feeling has rendered

My mind and my heart useless

Something inside me is begging for you

To take me the way I am

 

Bridge

 

Chorus

 

I'm done with playing now

Hesitation has been buried in the ground

I know now that you were never right before

I'm sick of you saying how

I've changed so much(Changed so much),no

And this will be the last line

This will be the last line

Yes,this will be my best line of this story

 

Eternally

 

(Make me feel alive inside

Make me feel aliiiive)

 

This is the hardest I've wanted

To

Breathe

This is the longest time I've gone without warning

I need

To be

 

A catapult in the study of life

Through all the pain,the good,the strife

(I will never not live tomorrow)

 

Finally free I see it now

What I was meant to be

Strong is what I'm feeling now

This is all for me

 

Chorus:

Eternally I feel it now

The power of the bind

I'm chained to all that I can't be

I'm breaking out,showing the real me

 

I don't need your time to make myself feel

A-

Aliiiive,no

Slowly it crawls right through my veins

The

Ties

 

Have failed me again

But this is not the ennnd,no

Whats rising inside

Will show you what you did

(I will never not live tomorrow)

 

Chorusx2

 

The madness flowing in my head

All those words and things you said

You will not stall me this time

(Make me feel alive inside)x2

(Make me feel aliiiive)

[gustov_ya]

thats good

ur really great at that

[Deity Mitsu]

Thanks man!:D

[TheLastGod]

Hey I like writing songs too.

[Reverse Rebirth]

IDK much about song writing but, it looks nice

are you planning on becoming singer when you grow up?

[Deity Mitsu]

Actually,no,I'm a wannabe soccer star :P.

[gustov_ya]

Thanks man!:D

anytime

[Reverse Rebirth]

Really I also play soccer ~ (Not to toot my Horn) but I'm a pretty good player, I also play Football.

[Deity Mitsu]

Second song added.:)

[Guest]

nice job Diety, i would buy the cd *if on cd* and listen to it all the time

[tehodis]

Such a good song! Would you mind if I attempt singing it? I have some ideas. I may also be able to convince some of my friends who play instruments to make some music. =D

[Guest]

tehodis if u do that think i can get them, i would like to hear, maybe add them to the 500 track cd im trying to make *At 250 right now*

[Kocrow17]

Great songs. I wanna here them, record yourself and post it on youtube/photobucket so I can hear!

[tehodis]

DM, you're so talented. I may be able to hold a tune, but I can't write songs for the life of me.

[TheLastGod]

your songs can totally beat mine really I haven't really been singing lately (yes I do have a band).

[Guest]

ya i listen to music all the time and im trying to add, and i would like to add these to my cd if they are made into real songs if thats ok DM *Listening to TONIGHT TONIGHT TONIGHT 4th bleach starting track number 20/125 on my bleach only cd*

[Deity Mitsu]

Be my guest tehodis.I've made recordings,but only with my band who have unfortunately broke up do to my drummer quitting because I called him queer sarcastically.:P

[TheLastGod]

Ouch sorry for you our band are friends and will never break up unless somebody moves

[Deity Mitsu]

If you want more songs,keep the good stuff comin!:PI'll probably have more up tomorrow.

[tehodis]

Be my guest tehodis.I've made recordings' date='but only with my band who have unfortunately broke up do to my drummer quitting because I called him queer sarcastically.:P

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Awesome. =D I'll try to get some of my friends together to try something out once I'm feeling better.

 

And sorry to hear that. Some people just take things too seriously.

Could I/we hear the recordings? That'd be awesome!

[Guest]

hope u get better tehodis, i cant wait to hear and add thoses to my collect of music

[Deity Mitsu]

I'll see what I can do. Last time I tried to use the CD they were on,it said all the files were corrupt.

[TheLastGod]

Those really good songs I might post some of our songs we sing

[Reverse Rebirth]

If you don't have a studio near you a good way to record your music is with an MP3 Player.

[tehodis]

I use my computer. Or at least I will next week, when I buy my new microphone. 78 bucks, but it's worth it. =D