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Holo Greek God card


Goldeneagle

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  • 1 year later...

You can shorten "If this card attacks or is attacked" to "During the Battle Phase" (it also makes it more consistent with current OCG wording).

 

"This card gains 300 ATK for every Olympus Counter" is "Increase this card's ATK by 300 for each Olympus Counter" in current OCG.

 

Speaking of Olympus Counters, you forgot to capitalize the first mention of "counter" in the lore text.

 

Overall, your card is balanced; not terribly elaborate or powerful. Despite its ability to swiftly build its ATK to a maximum of 3700 ATK (assuming a Battle Phase is held during each turn), it has no defensive effect(s) to prevent it from being destroyed by other effects or by battle.

 

The holoing on the image gives it a nice and befitting "rain" effect as well.

 

Stylish Rank: Smokin'! 9/10

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