Mazerrick Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 well... this is my first card!i know pic is blurry, i dont know how to fix that. =(pic was from Google Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver The Hedgehog Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 its pretty good but a few OCG errors 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 thanks for raiting that high =) but... this may sound stupid but im new, what does OCG mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver The Hedgehog Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 i means certin card mistakes like if you say summon one blue eyes white dragon you have to put marks like this "Blue eyes white dragon" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 ok thanks :D :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP1991 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 In short words: OCG = Original Card Grammar.  Anyways, like that other guy said, a few OCG errors mess it up a bit, but overall, it's good. Might wanna fix the card text though. ex: "1 tuner + 2 or more non-tuner monster(s)"Once per turn, you can discard one card from your hand to increase this monster's ATK by 500 points until the End Phase." Note how I stated 2 non-tuners. It is a level 9 monster. All LV9's so far use 2 non-tuners. Overall, this is nice.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 OCG errors, which were pointed out. So i give you 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 wow im getting pretty good ratings thank you all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, you can discard 1 monster card from your hand to the Graveyard. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase of your turn."Â That should be the correct OCG I believe. There was a reason why I bolded the "ATK", it's the only thing that should be used when increasing/decreasing ATK/DEF power. So please, fix. And have fun creating more cards. :DÂ EDIT: Please don't forget IMG Credit, and my rating is 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 there i added the image credit to the first post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Sorry, I don't like it at all. 3/10 Because: Pic is very blurryOCG is awful, there are so many errors, I'm not even gonna list them! Again, sorry, but that is what I think. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 thanks tiger! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
couch Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 i think its sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet i give it 10000000/10 and thats your first card by the time youv made at lest 4 more cards youll be the best card maker on ycm=yugioh card maker keep making the great cards oh and please check out my alien and updated alien cards there my first cards to .........and there in popcultuer cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arioreo Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 My first card consists as follows:  I think it destroys yu-gi-oh but who cares? I've made better cards anyway. ArIoReO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hothead1118 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 it's ok and the pic is blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted February 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 thanks guys i figured out how to undo the blurryness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 7/10 For a first card as a Sychro, man, good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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