Overlord Lucan Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 While heres my try at making a semi-original field card I know it probaly has OCG errors but I wasn't sure how to write this card, because i've never really seen an effect like it.Rate,Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiPro Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 yes it has OCG errors.it should say:Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the amount of damage you took. im not sure this is rite, but its better than the original you posted. (no offense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Heh no offence taken. But thats the wrong effect it's supposed to work like this, when somone takes damage the other person gains the amount of damage taken.(It works both ways to balance it out) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 yes it has OCG errors.it should say:Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the amount of damage you took. im not sure this is rite' date=' but its better than the original you posted. (no offense)[/quote'] no it shouldn't what are you talking about.?? it seems ok to me.. it might be worded slightly wrong but seems fine.. also Points its also capitalized Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiPro Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Heh no offence taken. But thats the wrong effect it's supposed to work like this' date=' when somone takes damage the other person gains the amount of damage taken.(It works both ways to balance it out)[/quote'] oh my bad, i didnt read the GAINING part... oops Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 *Fixed* thanks I must've missed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiPro Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 to me this sounds better.:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each time a player takes damage, his/her opponent gains Life Points equal to the damage the player took.yes it has OCG errors.it should say:Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the amount of damage you took. im not sure this is rite' date=' but its better than the original you posted. (no offense)[/quote'] no it shouldn't what are you talking about.?? it seems ok to me.. it might be worded slightly wrong but seems fine.. also Points its also capitalized it is worded wrong but since its a field spell, i dont think it needs the "as long as this card remains on the field" part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 I put it up but for some reason it seems too short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiPro Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 thats ok.the shorter the better.ppl will get tired for reading effects that are too long.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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