Random Person Guy Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Rate? Effect for Card 1This card can only be Special Summoned when you have 1 or more WIND Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for every WIND Type monster on the field and in the Graveyard. Effect for Card 2This Card Gains ATK and DEF equal to the Level of the monster it battles x200 during the Damage Step only. If this card attacks, remove it from play and return it to the field during your 2nd Standby Phase after removing this card from play. Just in case you can't read the effects here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 -Very nice pics-OCG is solid-Effects are nice -Tiger's Overall Rating: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Aeronus: First off, you can remove the ": Air Dragon" in its name; the remnant suits the card just as well, if not better. Lastly, from where do you Special Summon Aeronus? Now, the criticism. If I am correct in mine instinct that it would be Special Summoned from the hand when the minimal requirement of 1 WIND monster in the Graveyard is met, then it is banworthy, as it transforms this card into an appallingly huge and aggressive Attribute-specific beatstick that could be even bigger as the Duel commences further. Star Phoenix: Rallis the Star Bird, only worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshiman™ Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 these are amazing for your first cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Random Person Guy Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Aeronus: First off' date=' you can remove the ": Air Dragon" in its name; the remnant suits the card just as well, if not better. Lastly, from where do you Special Summon Aeronus? Now, the criticism. If I am correct in mine instinct that it would be Special Summoned from the hand when the minimal requirement of 1 WIND monster in the Graveyard is met, then it is banworthy, as it transforms this card into an appallingly huge and aggressive Attribute-specific beatstick that could be even bigger as the Duel commences further. Star Phoenix: Rallis the Star Bird, only worse.[/quote'] I haven't gotten Cards sense The Pegasus Starter Deck. Please tell me what Rallis is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Lessee: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Rallis_the_Star_Bird That should do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 -Very nice pics-OCG is solid-Effects are nice -Tiger's Overall Rating: 10/10 OCG not solid. WIND Type=WIND monster, no type needed. Star Pheonix: This Card Gains=This card gainsAlso: x200=x 200, I have to tell many people this, there is supposed to be a space there. Want proof? Read the recent card, "The Calculator". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Ahem. This is a great attempt for your first cards. Not alot of OCG errors for a new member. Well there are quite a few but most low lvl members have alot of OCG errors. 2nd = secondLevel = (I'm not sure but;) I think its level instead of Level.WIND type monsters = When its an attribute, its only- WIND monsters. If your naming a type (dragon, machine, warrior, etc.) it says (example:) Warrior-type monster.Also, on the second card: (It is:) When this card battles with an opponent's monster, this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the level of that monster x200 during the Damage Step only. (Second effect on second card:) When this card attacks, it is removed from play. (this is not part of the effect but, this is just a substitute option in a different way for a correct effect) During your second Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 "Star Phoenix" that has been Removed From Play. First Card: (fixed effect:) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you have at least one WIND monster in your Graveyard. Increase the ATK of this card for each WIND monster on the field or in either player's Graveyard. Over all:6/10 for a new member. You need some better pics though. Also, hey crazymanguy4, its me adamandlogan except I changed my name 0.o... Also, I didn't copy your OCG fix with this guy. I came here when no one had posted yet and it took a long time to post... All... That... Stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you have at least one WIND monster in your Graveyard. Increase the ATK of this card for each WIND monster on the field or in either player's Graveyard. We don't need another nomi, fellas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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