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-Pics are awful and blurry

-Effects need to be way better

-Overpowered

-Grammatical Errors

-MAke sure all cards have effects before you post them. <_<

-Too many OCG errors to list

 

-Tiger's Overall Rating: 0/10

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These cards are indeed awful.I'll help you improve them though.

 

EFFECT:Instead of "When killed can summon Gaara-Shukaku" use "When this cards is destroyed you can Summon (specify from where) "GAARA-SHUKAKU"".

 

PICS:Except Shukaku's they are all blurry.When choosing a pic make sure to view it at full view to check it's quality.

 

POWER:The cards should not be too powerful(overpowered).

I understand why you gave Gaara 3400 defence but you could make it into something like 3000,2800 or 2500.You must also place the right stars at each monster according to it's stats.A monster with an ATK 1800 and DEF 3400 would normally have around 7 stars(I think).

 

NAME and TYPES:The name GAARA doesn't look good on a card.Use Gaara or even better Gaara of The Sand for a more intersting name.Unless you're doing Pop Culture cards avoid using fake types,although fiend stands for demon.Lastly always capitalise the first letter on types.

 

That's it for now.Never be discouraged by bad reviews.I get such reviews often myself!

 

Happy card making!!!

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