terra101 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Check out my cards tell me u think and go easy i am new i am going to put very soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 From what I clicked on, I can see you put a lot of effort into these, but they aren't close to perfect. You are trying to make your effects long and good, and that is great, because it means you aren't lazy when it comes to these. You have some OCG errors, but most are easily understood. Some need better pics. Members are going to get mad at you for using the attachments. When you are in card maker, click on the card, and a code will come up underneath it. Copy and paste the exact code into your post, and the card should appear once you make the post. I think these will evolve into great cards if you fix all the small errors. Also, make more characters than just many Ichigos. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyenn Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Putting Lv2 isnT a good idea if it isn't a real Lv monster (like Armed Dragon and so)Shikai: You have to say from where you need to remove the Ichigo Card even if its anywhere but then it is quite overpowered...Also Ichigo Kurosaki card is only the card named exactly Ichigo Kurosaki, it doesn't include Ichigo Kurosaki Lv2 (not sure if you know this or not)Also you can special summon if there is its weaker version on the field is a bit odd since then you will have the weaker and the stronger as well on the field but that is only my opinion. A lv4 monster should never, never-ever have more then 1900 ATK if it doesn't have a disadvantage effect (you might have forgotten to add you can't normal summon this card?)OCG is very bad in lv3 plus its insanely OP: 2500, lv4 and after special summon with not that bad conditions it has 3000 ATK and can attack twice?Bankai: A 6 star should have max 2500 ATK and then no effect, doube attack with 3000 ATK is insane with these conditions.Bankai lv2: Way to OP effect, there are quite some ways to remove a card from play then its undestroyable and being able top draw 3 cards is awesome effect.Allover: Bad grammar and OCG. You most likely forgot to mention that these cards cannot be summoned/ special summon exept when the respective card is on the field. Also even so its quite powerfull, if you did not forgot to write that, then way too godmodding. (even more than the usuall "fan" made cards) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chidorilevel3 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 dont put attachments. srry dude put i dont bother with those, to get a code click on the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stardustarchfeind Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 these are my 1st cards plz comment havent made rukia yet so please keep looking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 these are my 1st cards plz comment havent made rukia yet so please keep looking The pictures and the card idea is good! But the OCG messes it all up. (SORRY!!)Maybe you should look at yugioh cards to understand pinpoints of effect setup on cards' date=' and maybe fixing the attack and defense too. I made these cards, and they were edited:Bleach-Revenge of the Substitute "If I were the rain, that binds together the earth and the sky, whom in all eternity will never mingle, would I be able to bind two hearts together?" -Kaien Shiba Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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