4 BEST cards so far! Still studying OCG.

[Assegai]

I am creating a deck around Great Birds/Phoenixes! I have carefully planned out this 40 card beauty, but only have these 4! Please rate these, for if they are good enough, you'll be suprised by a deck eventually! The Great Phoenix will be the most powerful card in the deck, but it will require the sacrifice of the four Great Birds, soo... The "Great Birds" are as listed.

Bird of the Torrent

Bird of the Flame

Bird of the Earth

Bird of the Winds

 

 

 

 

 

Bird of the Flame Effect: 1 FIRE tuner + 1 or more WIND non-tuners

 

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you may special summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand to the field. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can equip it to 1 FIRE monster. The ATK of the monster becomes the ATK of this card.

 

Bird of the Torrent Effect: 1 WATER tuner + 1 or more WIND non-tuners

 

When this card is Synchro summoned, you can destroy one Level 4 or lower FIRE monster and send it to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to increase the attack of this card by 200.

 

Birth By Phoenix Effect: You can special summon 1 "Warrior of the Great Phoenix". After this card is activated, move it to the bottom of your deck.

 

Great Phoenix Call Effect: You can Special Summon 1 "Bird of the Flame". If this card is destroyed before being activated and sent to the Graveyard, you can put this card back on the field. After this card is activated, it is removed from play.

 

Rate?

[WipEoutpulse]

These suck.

[K.B. strategist]

Ignore the idiot above me.

 

can, not may

Special Summon

1, not one

"to the field" = not needed

"you can equip it to 1 FIRE monster you control"

Synchro Summoned

"You can destroy 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster and send it to the Graveyard on the field."

attack = ATK

"You can Special Summon 1 "Warrior of the Great Phoenix/"Bird of the Flame" (from where?)

move = place

"If this card's activation is negated, add it to your hand"

Take out the spaces between "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters" and the rest of the effect.

 

Last card is overpowered and has a bad pic. The rest may be balanced, depending on how strong "Warrior of the Great Phoenix" is. The first synchro is fairly good although not that playable, the second underpowered.

6.8/10