Yuri Shayk Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 These are cards from 3 different TV shows 1 of which doesn't air anymore (Transformers Beast-Wars[really old show]) but i liked so i made a card of it; and yes i have seen the shows that relate. tell me all OCG Errors if any, rate 1-10, compliments Deviant Art and Google Images. [align=center][spoiler=Effect]This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. This card is not affected by Trap Cards. If this card destroyes a monster successfully, you can pay 500 Life Points for this card to attack once again in a row. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle, inflict 500 Damage to your opponent. [spoiler=Effect]This card is treated as FIRE, EARTH, WATER, and WIND monster as well as a LIGHT monster. This card is not affected by Spell and Trap Effect(s). If this card destroyes a DARK monster successfully, increase your Life Points by 500 points. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Deck. [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Warrior-Type monster and 1 WIND monster you control. Control of this card cannot be switched. If this card destroyes a monster successfully, draw 1 card from your Deck. If the card you drew was a Spell Card, this card can attack once again in row.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 First Card:The first card Ocg problem is in the second or third sentence you spelled destroy wrong but other than that the first card was good.I give this card a 9.8/10SecondCard:I think you suppose to put type next to the element like you did for megatron in the first sentence.Also the end sentence should have Dark-Type not just dark.Ok card.8.6/10Third card:The pic isnt the best pic i have seen of Kakashi but still ok.You forgot type nect to wind in the first or second sentence.9/10Overall Score:9.3/10 You did a good job but you forget to put -Type next to the elements when you say treated as Dark monster.Other than that you did a pretty good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 Kakashi's picture doesn't focus on him enough, but thats a shame, because it is really kinda cool. I don't get his effect either. There OCG errors in it too. He could be a bit more powerful in ATK and DEF. The Avatar's pic seems a bit dark, but i still like it a lot. Good effect for him. Megatron has a good effect, but some bad OCG. Avatar is the best here. 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 9.3/10Kingduel said everything.As usual pics are looking good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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