seakeal Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 [/img][/img][/img]Please no mean or rude comments but I am open to ideas if you have one or more. Link to comment
TedJustice Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 First one should be "When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can select one card from your opponent's graveyard and add it to your hand." And it's missing summoning conditions. The second one has no lore (which is fine, I guess), and you didn't list its type. For the the third one, you can't really use 'The Forbidden one' in its name, or it'll count toward some Exodia related cards (Exodia Necross for example) And it's missing the type. The last one should say "Return all cards on your side of the field to their owner's hand. Special summon 1 "Angelface the forbidden one" from your hand." Or you could say "from your hand or deck (or Graveyard)". Overall, not bad though. Decently balanced, except for the forbidden one. 9000 is way too much for such a simple cost. Either make it 3000 or 4000, or change the cost so that you have to return specific cards, or something. Link to comment
starwebs1 Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 First one should be "When this card is Synchro Summoned' date=' you can select one card from your opponent's graveyard and add it to your hand." And it's missing summoning conditions. The second one has no lore (which is fine, I guess), and you didn't list its type. For the the third one, you can't really use 'The Forbidden one' in its name, or it'll count toward some Exodia related cards (Exodia Necross for example) And it's missing the type. The last one should say "Return all cards on your side of the field to their owner's hand. Special summon 1 "Angelface the forbidden one" from your hand." Or you could say "from your hand or deck (or Graveyard)". Overall, not bad though. Decently balanced, except for the forbidden one. 9000 is way too much for such a simple cost. Either make it 3000 or 4000, or change the cost so that you have to return specific cards, or something.[/quote'] Whoa, only 18 posts? Wow! Anyway, about the cards:OCG - 2/10Effects - 5/10Names - 7/10 Total - 14/30 Link to comment
seakeal Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 thanks for the tips my awsome leaders! i dont know much cause i am new so thanks Link to comment
seakeal Posted May 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 BTW my computer cant put pics up so dont say nothin plz. Link to comment
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