Choke Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Hello. Here's my new card, Rate/Comment/Fixes. Image Credit goes to ~onetamad on deviantART. Effect: This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you can pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon a Level 8 or higher non-effect monster without Tributes. Every 2 turns, you can change 2 monster's positions in your control to change 1 monster's position your opponent controls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Non-effect monster should Normal Monster, not sure about caps though. There are a few more errors but I'm too tired to go over them. Also picture is a bit lousy (in my opinion any way). Good effort over all with minimal errors 7/10:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Ok thank you. Appreciate the rating. Well could the picture be bad because of the holo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 non-effect monster = Normal Monsterposition = Battle Positionwhere are you Special Summoning the monster from? And you don't need to say "without Tributes"1, not a Nice card for your first post. Pretty good vanilla support too, God knows they need some. 9/10 FCR7.8/10 NR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 OCG fix: This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you can pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon a Level 8 or higher Normal monster. Every 2 turns, you can change the position of 2 monsters you control and change the position of 1 monster your opponent controls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Thanks for the OCG fixes. Helped alot. Fixing them now. How do you guys feel about the name/pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Pic's great.Name's okay, I would probably change it. Maybe replace "massive" with something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TedJustice Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 FYI, a dragon isn't really a behemoth. Behemoths are usually hairy, almost gorilla-like. Could use a better name/image/type in that respect. Also, what if by non-effect he meant any monster that doesn't have an effect? That could count Synchros, Rituals, and Fusions, which aren't Normal Monsters. But then again, you wouldn't be able to special summon one of those anyway, so I'd go with Normal monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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