Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 My most recent card, my favorite so far, Rates/Comments/Fixes Please. Image Credit goes to ~CorpusCallosum on deviantART. Effect: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Effect(s) of Effect Monsters with an ATK equal to 2000 or more are negated. If this card is Tributed for the Summon of a Spellcaster-Type monster, halve the ATK of this card, then treat this card as an Equip Spell Card and equip it to the Summoned monster. If this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster by this card's effect, destroy the equipped monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the effects of monsters with 2000 or more ATK cannot be activated. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as Tribute to Summon a Spellcaster-Type monster, halve the ATK of this card and treat it as an Equip Spell Card to the Summoned monster. If this card is destroyed while it is equipped to a monster, destroy the equipped monster. I'm not too sure about it so I'll leave it in the hands of others... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Eh I appreciate the try, but after reading the first 2 sentences, it's rather harder to say them then the way I put it. Well maybe you're right I don't know. Thanks for the feedback though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Well, I'm pretty sure what I changed is correct...except for the summoning thing...the equip thing I have no idea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 "the effects of monsters with 2000 or more ATK cannot be activated." I'm mostly talking about this line. That isn't saying monsters with effects and with an ATK of 2000 or more cannot activate their effect. It's almost like your saying their effect has 2000 ATK or more. I sound mean, I should stop :/. Just doesn't sound right to me IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Pretty cool card. Pic-GoodOCG-OkayBalance-PerfectDark Lightning's Overall Rate:8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 hmm ocg's pretty good, I would make a few adjustments though: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Effect(s) of Effect Monsters with an ATK equal to 2000 or more are negated*. If this card is Tributed for the Summon of a Spellcaster-Type monster, halve the ATK of this card**, then treat this card as an Equip Spell Card and equip it to the Summoned monster. If this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster by this card's effect, destroy the equipped monster. I don't like the pic, but that's just me. :/ Useful card altogether, mainly for the first effect. 8.7/10 *Assuming it doesn't matter to you whether the effects can't be activated, or if they're negated.**Is that part necessary? You won't be able to use the monster anyway. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Thanks a lot K.B., now it makes a lot more sense. Updating it now. Heh, I chose the pic because it had arms and it was shiny basically :/. Then I added a starry holo to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Updated the OCG from the fixes you guys gave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Quite a nice looking card you have here. LOVE the image. OCG needs a bit of work, though. I THINK this might be right: As long as this card is face-up, negate the effects of Effect Monsters with an ATK of 2000 or more. If this card is used for the Tribute Summon of a Spellcaster-Type monster, treat this card as an Equip Spell Card and equip it to the summoned monster. If this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster, destroy the equipped monster. Effect-wise, this doesn't seem to help you much. Personally, I would make it so that this card would be equipped to an opponent's monster if used for the Tribute Summon of a Spellcaster-Type monster. Then you can just use some S/T removal and get rid of their monsters equipped with this card. If you want to make the change, here is the correct OCG for it: As long as this card is face-up, negate the effects of Effect Monsters with an ATK of 2000 or more. If this card is used for the Tribute Summon of a Spellcaster-Type monster, treat this card as an Equip Spell Card and equip it to 1 face-up monster on your opponent's field. If this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster, destroy the equipped monster. I cannot give this card anything less than a 9.5 out of 10 ONLY for the minor OCG errors. Well done! Keep up the good work! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Thanks for the feedback and fixes. I put the image credit in the line right before I posted the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Thanks for the feedback and fixes. I put the image credit in the line right before I posted the card. Just noticed that. My bad. I'll edit my post. Still, great card. I'd use it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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