Ookami Moriyama Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 pic: igriel.deviantart.com [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play, from your Graveyard, 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster and 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster. This card's original ATK becomes equal to the total stars of the removed monsters x 500. By sending 1 face-down Spell Card on your field to the Graveyard, you can inflict 500 points of Damage to your opponent's Life Points. By sending 1 face-down Trap Card on your field to the Graveyard, you can increase this card's DEF by 500. When this card is removed from your field, it is removed from play instead, and cannot be used during current Duel. hope you like ithoooooooooooooooooooray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3 star celebration!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 ..removing from play, from your Graveyard, 1.. = ..removing from play 1 ... in your Graveyard.total stars = total Level Stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
【Demonic Queen】 Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Its a good cardBut some ocg errors so 8/10 Some errors I noticed: this card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT and 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster in your Graveyard Also I think: I think it should be, on your side of the field instead of on your field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 ..removing from play' date=' from your Graveyard, 1.. = ..removing from play 1 ... in your Graveyard.total stars = total Level Stars[/quote'] Thankyou. now I see. +1rep: first to comment on this thread Its a good cardBut some ocg errors so 8/10 Some errors I noticed: this card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT and 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster in your Graveyard Also I think: I think it should be' date=' [b']on your side of the field[/b] instead of on your field Thankyou. and no, that's old OCG. now it's 'your field'+1rep for commenting on this thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
【Demonic Queen】 Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Thankyou. and no' date=' that's old OCG. now it's 'your field'[/quote'] Ahh sorry I haven't played it since a while and got a lot of old cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 Thankyou. and no' date=' that's old OCG. now it's 'your field'[/quote'] Ahh sorry I haven't played it since a while and got a lot of old cards. hey! me too. I like old cards. without 'em there would be no Yu-Gi-Oh! game and no YCM siteand afterall, old cards are the basics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Seems fine, I am too lazy to fix OCG right now, everyone else got most of them correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫Griffinsusername♫ Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 kind of wordy. alright. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Seems fine' date=' I am too lazy to fix OCG right now, everyone else got most of them correct.[/quote'] Thankyou. I guess you're right. and you're not the only lazy person. I'm too kind of wordy. alright. 6.5/10 Thankyou. What do you mean "kind of wordy"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster and 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Graveyard from play. This card's original ATK becomes equal to the total Level Stars of the removed monsters x500. By sending 1 face-down Spell Card on your side of the field to the Graveyard, you can inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. By sending 1 face-down Trap Card on your side of the field to the Graveyard, you can increase this card's DEF by 500. When this card is destroyed it is removed from play. You don't need to say "in the current Duel" im pretty sure. If it's removed from play I think that already means it can't return back into the duel. Overall: Effect - 17/20 (Change x500 to like x300) Name - 18/20 Picture - 19/20 Balance - 19/20 Playability - 19/20 So 92/100 or 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Your OCG is a fail and Grammar fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster and 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Graveyard from play. This card's original ATK becomes equal to the total Level Stars of the removed monsters x500. By sending 1 face-down Spell Card on your side of the field to the Graveyard' date=' you can inflict 500 [b']damage[/b] to your opponent's Life Points. By sending 1 face-down Trap Card on your side of the field to the Graveyard, you can increase this card's DEF by 500. When this card is destroyed it is removed from play. You don't need to say "in the current Duel" im pretty sure. If it's removed from play I think that already means it can't return back into the duel. Overall: Effect - 17/20 (Change x500 to like x300) Name - 18/20 Picture - 19/20 Balance - 19/20 Playability - 19/20 So 92/100 or 9.2/10 well, thankyou, I'll update it till tomorrow. also "your side of the field" - old OCG; "your field" is ok and you are wrong; there are many cards that aloud you use monsters, even cards that have been removed from play, especially Amnael's Alchemy Deck in Yu-Gi-Oh! GX well, see ya around Thanks for the fix Your OCG is a fail and Grammar fail. mine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Alright thanks for the insight, but there's gotta be a rewording of "in the current Duel". It doesn't sound right to me. Your side of the field just sounds better and more specific to me IMO, so I always edit it that way :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard from play.This card's ATK becomes equal to the total Level of the removed monsters x 500. By sending 1 face-down Spell Card on your field to the Graveyard, you can inflict 500 points of Damage to your opponent. By sending 1 face-down Trap Card on your field to the Graveyard, you can increase this card's DEF by 500. When this card is sent to the Graveyard or removed from play, this card cannot be used during during the rest of the Duel. Here is a good fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 "during the rest of the Duel." - Doesn't make sense I don't think. Instead of during, it should be throughout. I don't think just "total stars" is correct either. "total Level Stars" I think is right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard from play.This card's ATK becomes equal to the total stars of the removed monsters x 500. By sending 1 face-down Spell Card on your field to the Graveyard' date=' you can inflict 500 points of Damage to your opponent. By sending 1 face-down Trap Card on your field to the Graveyard, you can increase this card's DEF by 500. When this card is sent to the Graveyard or removed from play, this card cannot be used during during the rest of the Duel. Here is a good fix.[/quote'] well. Thanks alot. It seems you're always here to help me. "during the rest of the Duel." - Doesn't make sense I don't think. Instead of during' date=' it should be throughout. I don't think just "total stars" is correct either. "total Level Stars" I think is right.[/quote'] yes, it makes sense. and total stars and total Level Stars, it's the same thing I guess. I think that both are correct Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Well that can be questioned, total level sounds more correct and I should fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Well that can be questioned' date=' total level sounds more correct and I should fix it.[/quote'] ok then. I'll agree with both of you :D total Level Stars is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 well "during" is kind of a synonym for at the present moment. Like "you cannot destroy a monster during your Battle Phase." , "you cannot destroy a monster throughout the duel". Get what I mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 well "during" is kind of a synonym for at the present moment. Like "you cannot destroy a monster during your Battle Phase." ' date=' "you cannot destroy a monster [b']throughout[/b] the duel". Get what I mean? I got it, but I'm still agree with "during", it sounds more Yu-Gi-Oh! style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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